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5/26/2001 c1 Taldana
Hey I love your stories i wish i could write like that, if only i could,but i can't.Don't mind me waisting space so it looks like i wrote more but i don't now what to say but , what a great story and keep up the good work and mabey one day you will become a famous writer or somethingy but i guess i will leave that to you!

Good Work!

Taldana
5/23/2001 c1 5Frostmaiden
I like your story so far! I'm can't wait for your next chapter!
5/19/2001 c1 psn
interesting...
5/18/2001 c1 the unique queen for coming up with ideas for FFIX
*nods* very cool... very cool...
5/18/2001 c1 Jessica Vann
Seems as though you have a good start for now, just edit through it a bit more there were some mistakes. And try using semicolons more often, like in this sentence: Wisps of blond hair had found it's way over the beautifully decorated gold crown and now rested on his handsome face, blue eyes stared curiously at the Great Oracle.

- You could put a semi colon between face and blue since they're both complete sentences - or you could just do ,and. Otherwise, good story! Just make sure you explain who Jovan Vondag and Talakeet are, maybe a list of names/places would help?

Great story, keep it up! I'm interested!

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