for If You Can't Take the Heat7/12/2014 c1 
1justanotherdot
Okay. I love how they managed to make it work in the end. After readingthe story I literally went" aww". Thanks for the HFN. It's very lovely.
1justanotherdotOkay. I love how they managed to make it work in the end. After readingthe story I literally went" aww". Thanks for the HFN. It's very lovely.
12/7/2013 c1 SneezingTurtle
Oh my I loved this! I truly really did love this! And I teared up like a little shit when they were fighting. Perfect :)
Oh my I loved this! I truly really did love this! And I teared up like a little shit when they were fighting. Perfect :)
11/30/2013 c1 ExPrincesssBrown
Oh gosh. This was really sweet and adorable and ah. Thank you for writing this.
Oh gosh. This was really sweet and adorable and ah. Thank you for writing this.
9/2/2013 c1 Greenpanda0u0
Awww so adorable... Thanks for writing something that actually is pretty realistic... I like how they both would not give up their dreams for each other... oh course it was nice that they ended up together too. \short and sweet. I like it!
Awww so adorable... Thanks for writing something that actually is pretty realistic... I like how they both would not give up their dreams for each other... oh course it was nice that they ended up together too. \short and sweet. I like it!
2/5/2013 c1 Guest
Man that was so heartbreaking! But I loved it ;)
And I'm so glad things worked out in the end, thank god you didn't give them a depressing ending or something!
Man that was so heartbreaking! But I loved it ;)
And I'm so glad things worked out in the end, thank god you didn't give them a depressing ending or something!
12/25/2012 c1 1Sleeping Jay
I'm a melt of puddle goo. No, wait, is it goo of puddle melt? Melt puddle goo? Are those three the same thing? *is incoherent*
Love the realism, and really, just how much they love each other. The angst is just so real and not.. well, no offense to teenagers, but one has got to be fed up after a hundred or so insecure teenage angst. This story pulled at my heartstrings so. It really happens in real life, the torn-between-love-and-dream thing. And in real life, after spending who knows how many years working their ass off for it, people don't just drop their dream for their lover, even if it's the love-of-their-life. Usually, I think.
I love that you show the realism. And so glad that the opportunity dropped, and Ryan gave it to Dane. Much hearts to the guy. And now I'm rambling.
*goes back to incoherence*
1Sleeping JayI'm a melt of puddle goo. No, wait, is it goo of puddle melt? Melt puddle goo? Are those three the same thing? *is incoherent*
Love the realism, and really, just how much they love each other. The angst is just so real and not.. well, no offense to teenagers, but one has got to be fed up after a hundred or so insecure teenage angst. This story pulled at my heartstrings so. It really happens in real life, the torn-between-love-and-dream thing. And in real life, after spending who knows how many years working their ass off for it, people don't just drop their dream for their lover, even if it's the love-of-their-life. Usually, I think.
I love that you show the realism. And so glad that the opportunity dropped, and Ryan gave it to Dane. Much hearts to the guy. And now I'm rambling.
*goes back to incoherence*
12/7/2012 c1 Guest
: ) nice and fluffy !
: ) nice and fluffy !
9/4/2012 c1 4Clay Doll
All that comes to mind after reading this is ' D'aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww'
So yeah! It's fuggin adorable!
4Clay DollAll that comes to mind after reading this is ' D'aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww'
So yeah! It's fuggin adorable!
8/31/2012 c1 Sheryl
Oh my gosh I don't normally read slash but OH MY GOSH THIS WAS JUST...AHHHH! It was sweet and funny and touching and beautifully written! And I love the fact that its slash so you don't get all that girl drama which is annoying!
This story was wonderful and amazing and everything a story should be! I less than three this to death!
Oh my gosh I don't normally read slash but OH MY GOSH THIS WAS JUST...AHHHH! It was sweet and funny and touching and beautifully written! And I love the fact that its slash so you don't get all that girl drama which is annoying!
This story was wonderful and amazing and everything a story should be! I less than three this to death!
7/1/2012 c1 Guest
I love this. I looooooooove this. It's one of those one shots that I keep for safe keeping, because no matter how much time passes, I come back and still love it. Just enough fluff, combined with some eroticism, and a more realistic, less cliche setting where the character develop and have a base. I love love loooooove it, and would love to see more like it. Good work:)
I love this. I looooooooove this. It's one of those one shots that I keep for safe keeping, because no matter how much time passes, I come back and still love it. Just enough fluff, combined with some eroticism, and a more realistic, less cliche setting where the character develop and have a base. I love love loooooove it, and would love to see more like it. Good work:)
3/21/2012 c1 4Ibbit
This was a great story to end my night with. Frikkin lovely. I like the nicknames and the chemistry you put into the characters. Though, all the technical cooking talk kinda got me all ._. but that's life. We can't be good at everything :D Anyways, so this was great. Beautiful. Nothing wrong. Uhm. Maybe too short, but also just right? I give up criticing. Lovely. The End.
Luck with writings and lifes.
~ibbit:]
4IbbitThis was a great story to end my night with. Frikkin lovely. I like the nicknames and the chemistry you put into the characters. Though, all the technical cooking talk kinda got me all ._. but that's life. We can't be good at everything :D Anyways, so this was great. Beautiful. Nothing wrong. Uhm. Maybe too short, but also just right? I give up criticing. Lovely. The End.
Luck with writings and lifes.
~ibbit:]
2/3/2012 c1 4ImmanenceEnsured
Lovely so lovely! I really like your characters, they're dramatic and sweet and the restaurant stuff is so nice to read. This made me quite happy.
4ImmanenceEnsuredLovely so lovely! I really like your characters, they're dramatic and sweet and the restaurant stuff is so nice to read. This made me quite happy.