1/8/2013 c1 Guest
Eeep, so cute!

9/10/2012 c1 heal me forever
its super fun ha ha nicely written ...uber cute

5/2/2012 c1 andieanne
Funny and in love with the story. :)) :D Hit right to my dream man. ;) :)))

10/5/2011 c1 13youngin-matomon
You really like blonde guys don't you?

Ahhh. Well, I'm in love with brunnettes. Sexy dark brown hair, oh yeah :P

ANNYYYWAAAYYS. I liked this oneshot well too. All your stories are well-written THANK GOD and they're all cute and fluffy so yeah :) I like.

One thing I especially like about your stories is how the guy always acts so normal. I mean there's no romance in it, the guys act the way guys actually act in real life and not in romantic manner. it makes your stories really real and stuff. I hate overdone romance, and yours wasn't romantic at all, but it was because its so real and does this really make sense? It should.

well yeah. um.

5/26/2011 c1 5Disney Is Hardcore
My favourite bit was when they were talking on the phone about the picture of Ely and Satan...I laughed. A lot. 'why would you hate Santa?'

1/29/2011 c1 Guest
Oh. My. God. So cute! I mean, I said I wasn't going to review because I have a history project for God's sake and I know I'm going to start rambling, but this was just way too good to resist. It was so cute, and it had real humor. Like, I actually laughed while I was reading it (which is kinda dangerous because then everyone knows I'm not actually doing my homework anymore.) I mean, I smile a lot when I'm reading a funny story, but I don't laugh. Like, I had to cover my mouth when I read the part where Ely was wondering why there were a bunch of Satans around him. Oh my God, I'm laughing again just typing about it.

I know I said this before, but it needs to be repeated: This story was hilarious! Um, parts I liked: the satanic deer, Ely's adorable-ness, Ely's role-playing with the gnomes, and the part where George was in the women's department and Marcie was like "You don't count."

Love-sick Marcie was so cute. Like that part where she's like "I think I"m getting ahead of myself," and then she's like "What should we name our babies?" That was absolutely adorable. And when she was running away from Ely in the store and compared it to Pacman was hilarious. I was laughing silently the whole time.

How did you do it? Ely was like a mix of adorable and awkward that just made him even more adorable. I know Gary Stus are bad, but I've always loved a cool, smooth-talking guy. Until now. I mean, seriously, how can he have a Disney obsession and role-play with gnomes and still be so irresistable. I mean, normally, when you have an awkard guy, that's usually coupled along with geekiness or something, but totally not with Eli. He was totally cool about it and poking fun at himself. He was just so cute! Somehow you made him realistic and totally hawt!

George and Mat were great side-characters. Great way for more humor.

Oh! And I just have to say, the thing Eli said about the sexual tension in Disney movies is so true! I mean, how do they find all these extremely hot, I'd-jump-them-if-I-saw-them-in-person actors and keep the rating under PG -13? -Insert a gazillion questionmarks- The question has plagued my mind for years! And it's not even just movies, all of the TV shows, too! Right now, all I can think of is "Sonny With A Chance," but there's way more. And, I'm rambling. Like I said I would. But yeah, for this story, it was totally worth it.

1/14/2011 c1 2elma
the beginning was funny- how they drew each other. and so was the running around kmart! i like your one-shots!