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8Annalynn Roe
Didn't manage it in one night, but technically I read the whole story in one day! It's a wonderful story, I loved it and will definitely check out some of your other stories!
8Annalynn RoeDidn't manage it in one night, but technically I read the whole story in one day! It's a wonderful story, I loved it and will definitely check out some of your other stories!
2/16/2014 c13 Annalynn Roe
Can't say I didn't see that coming (referring to the glowing yellow eyes that undoubtedly belong to a certain throne-stealing sea witch)
Love the story, I'll probably end up reading the entire thing in one go!
Can't say I didn't see that coming (referring to the glowing yellow eyes that undoubtedly belong to a certain throne-stealing sea witch)
Love the story, I'll probably end up reading the entire thing in one go!
1/4/2014 c32 Gen
Have you ever considered publishing this? I really love your story and it's very good:)
Have you ever considered publishing this? I really love your story and it's very good:)
12/1/2013 c33 11The Undecisive Thinker
I enjoyed this a lot. I like mer-stuff and this is the only story I've found on fictionpress that deals with mermaids/merboys. If I were you I would change the rating to teen. You'll get a lot more views, and it's not inappropriate enough to be rated M. :p
11The Undecisive ThinkerI enjoyed this a lot. I like mer-stuff and this is the only story I've found on fictionpress that deals with mermaids/merboys. If I were you I would change the rating to teen. You'll get a lot more views, and it's not inappropriate enough to be rated M. :p
9/30/2013 c2 Guest
While I'm reading this story, there has been commercials advertising The Little Mermaid appearing on blu-ray for the first time.
While I'm reading this story, there has been commercials advertising The Little Mermaid appearing on blu-ray for the first time.
8/18/2013 c30 GlowinBrite
this..is a a really breathtaking fic. i was literally glued to my screen reading this the entire time! it's really really good!
this..is a a really breathtaking fic. i was literally glued to my screen reading this the entire time! it's really really good!
5/29/2013 c1 2princessoftheshadowsofdestiny
new evidence found. look up Mermaids: the body found and watch it!
2princessoftheshadowsofdestinynew evidence found. look up Mermaids: the body found and watch it!
5/25/2013 c2 Guest
The word is "prima donna" not "prime madonna," babe ;)
The word is "prima donna" not "prime madonna," babe ;)
5/24/2013 c32 save the manatee
Totally loved this story, if i were a publisher id publish ur book! Its like nothing ive ever read!
Totally loved this story, if i were a publisher id publish ur book! Its like nothing ive ever read!
5/4/2013 c1 pastelcolors
This reminds me of Aquamarine, definitely. Except the sea witch part. Cx
I imagine Tanner looking like the Peter an actor. Oh gosh. ; o;
And I absolutely LOVEDD it when Tanner quoted Kerrie about the fungus.
This reminds me of Aquamarine, definitely. Except the sea witch part. Cx
I imagine Tanner looking like the Peter an actor. Oh gosh. ; o;
And I absolutely LOVEDD it when Tanner quoted Kerrie about the fungus.
4/17/2013 c7 Queen of Blue Hearts
oh wow...*sniff* i salute you. I mean, you developed their characters so well. i feel like they're real people with real emotions and not just...you know...puppets. and you're good at the sentence construction and spellings so good work!
oh wow...*sniff* i salute you. I mean, you developed their characters so well. i feel like they're real people with real emotions and not just...you know...puppets. and you're good at the sentence construction and spellings so good work!