
1/3/2011 c1
118Thenardier
I loved this a lot. It rhymes perfectly. I really love the way every line flows so smoothly, even though it is starkly contrasted against the dashes that is obviously breaking the lines up. I also love what you wrote about, and how you kept it simple without overdoing the emotions.

I loved this a lot. It rhymes perfectly. I really love the way every line flows so smoothly, even though it is starkly contrasted against the dashes that is obviously breaking the lines up. I also love what you wrote about, and how you kept it simple without overdoing the emotions.