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1/4/2011 c9 Tapioca-Robot
What really sets these haikus apart from what I usually read, is the story you can tell simply by describing how it looks. There isn't much action blatenly put forth, but one can still look in on the events and really see them. I gotta give you A+ on imagery, that's what really sells it to me. I kind of read them all as one, and kinda got a stor from it (probably just my imagination) but each of them shines very well on their own as well. My favorite was the warm lecture room piece. I don't know why, I think it was just the interesting way you chose to describe it. Very cool. Good collection, inspiring.

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