for BirthMarked3/20/2011 c4 
2Songs-from-the-Heart
I knew it was his sister! This is going to be troublesome... but very entertaining too, it'll be good! I can't wait!
2Songs-from-the-HeartI knew it was his sister! This is going to be troublesome... but very entertaining too, it'll be good! I can't wait!
2/8/2011 c1 sarielle
Aww no! You can't just stop there! Anyways I love this story it's really good but in some places your thoughts seem to be a bit scattered overall though. Awesome Story.
Aww no! You can't just stop there! Anyways I love this story it's really good but in some places your thoughts seem to be a bit scattered overall though. Awesome Story.
1/11/2011 c3 HowlingWolf
Poor little Razi!
Poor little Razi!
1/11/2011 c3 2Songs-from-the-Heart
AH! his sister is there too! oh dear what'll happen? i can guess but they are all going to be in trouble at the end lol hope it's good!
2Songs-from-the-HeartAH! his sister is there too! oh dear what'll happen? i can guess but they are all going to be in trouble at the end lol hope it's good!
1/10/2011 c2 Songs-from-the-Heart
I need more stories to read and follow. I saw yours, was interested, and so far I LOVE IT!
It also helps with the pronunciations at the bottom ^_^ I can't wait this'll be a great story!
I need more stories to read and follow. I saw yours, was interested, and so far I LOVE IT!
It also helps with the pronunciations at the bottom ^_^ I can't wait this'll be a great story!
1/10/2011 c2 30tomorrow0
I like the writing style - it flows and reads pretty quickly - and it seems pretty original, too... except that thing about connecting the birthmark with the sandir (beautiful colours by the way). That part reminds me of the movie Avatar. But even with that similarity, this is still quite a refreshing read. Although I do wonder if, or when, the sister Razi will pop up again..? Keep it up; I'd like to see where this story goes!
30tomorrow0I like the writing style - it flows and reads pretty quickly - and it seems pretty original, too... except that thing about connecting the birthmark with the sandir (beautiful colours by the way). That part reminds me of the movie Avatar. But even with that similarity, this is still quite a refreshing read. Although I do wonder if, or when, the sister Razi will pop up again..? Keep it up; I'd like to see where this story goes!
1/9/2011 c2 Witch of the Abyss
Very interesting story, I like it quite a lot. Hope you continue soon~!
Very interesting story, I like it quite a lot. Hope you continue soon~!
1/6/2011 c1 6DashingtoFluttershy
Interesting!I like it! It sounds lilke a good idea and you have a nice writing style that I like! :D Can't wait to read more!
-HyperActiveTwilightHater
6DashingtoFluttershyInteresting!I like it! It sounds lilke a good idea and you have a nice writing style that I like! :D Can't wait to read more!
-HyperActiveTwilightHater