for Happily Ever After Almost Rewrite1/15/2013 c1 
5poopforbrains
I do hope you repost this story. I'm super psyched to read this. Sounds promising. Wish you luck and looking forward to seeing an update soon. :)
5poopforbrainsI do hope you repost this story. I'm super psyched to read this. Sounds promising. Wish you luck and looking forward to seeing an update soon. :)
10/27/2011 c13 Lyssa50
I know it's really annoying when it erases your review. So I guess it's getting closer to the end which is sad, but I'm kind of excited too. I really want to see if you've changed anything. Like Graham not being an ass about it.
The leather jacket picture is my favorite one! Lol great minds do think alike.
Two new stories? Plus the ones you're already working on? Whoa that's a lot of work. Good luck. And I thought Nanowrimo was going to be hard.
Update soon please.
I know it's really annoying when it erases your review. So I guess it's getting closer to the end which is sad, but I'm kind of excited too. I really want to see if you've changed anything. Like Graham not being an ass about it.
The leather jacket picture is my favorite one! Lol great minds do think alike.
Two new stories? Plus the ones you're already working on? Whoa that's a lot of work. Good luck. And I thought Nanowrimo was going to be hard.
Update soon please.
10/11/2011 c12 Lyssa50
Ok let me try this again and hope it doesn't erase my review this time .
Still love this chapter. Jealous Graham is funny and Tony is awesome, as always. Are you going to update my MBBF anytime soon?
lol really? He really is how I imagine Graham though, especially in the picture with the leather jacket and beanie.
When he meets his kid? Nate? Does that mean you changed your mind and are going to write the sequel? *fingers crossed*
Ok let me try this again and hope it doesn't erase my review this time .
Still love this chapter. Jealous Graham is funny and Tony is awesome, as always. Are you going to update my MBBF anytime soon?
lol really? He really is how I imagine Graham though, especially in the picture with the leather jacket and beanie.
When he meets his kid? Nate? Does that mean you changed your mind and are going to write the sequel? *fingers crossed*
10/10/2011 c11 Annoyed
What is with you and removing chapters every so often to "edit" them? It's rude and misleading. If you're editing your mistakes that's great but don't remove the chapter to do so. Just replace it when you've finished editing that chapter, and no one will be the wiser. Before you take offense know that I do like your story, I just cannot understand why you would do something like that.
What is with you and removing chapters every so often to "edit" them? It's rude and misleading. If you're editing your mistakes that's great but don't remove the chapter to do so. Just replace it when you've finished editing that chapter, and no one will be the wiser. Before you take offense know that I do like your story, I just cannot understand why you would do something like that.
10/6/2011 c11 Me
I know she isn't pregnant yet but it certainly seems that way. At least Declan seems like he'll be around when she gets pregnant. Whereas Graham will probably freak out and high tail it out of town.
What happened to the songs? I know before I questioned them, but I sort of miss it now.
I know she isn't pregnant yet but it certainly seems that way. At least Declan seems like he'll be around when she gets pregnant. Whereas Graham will probably freak out and high tail it out of town.
What happened to the songs? I know before I questioned them, but I sort of miss it now.
10/6/2011 c11 Lyssa50
"I need a kid like I need a bullet to the head." Okay that has to be my favorite line from this chapter. Seriously, condoms break dude.
They're back together yay! Too bad the drama is about to start :(
"I need a kid like I need a bullet to the head." Okay that has to be my favorite line from this chapter. Seriously, condoms break dude.
They're back together yay! Too bad the drama is about to start :(
10/6/2011 c10 Me
I actually liked her reaction to Riordan showing up unannounced. She doesn't come across as they type to hit someone unless they deserve it. Not that he doesn't deserve it, just that she shouldn't waste her energy on him.
I actually liked her reaction to Riordan showing up unannounced. She doesn't come across as they type to hit someone unless they deserve it. Not that he doesn't deserve it, just that she shouldn't waste her energy on him.
10/6/2011 c10 Lyssa50
Yeah it's a very catchy song but it gets annoying after a while. Did you google him yet? Lol I know I'm being annoying so that's the last time I'll ask.
As for Adelaide and Riordan, it was a totally believable chapter. She doesn't seem like the type to beat someone up, even if he deserves it. I'm glad he's gone though :)
Yeah it's a very catchy song but it gets annoying after a while. Did you google him yet? Lol I know I'm being annoying so that's the last time I'll ask.
As for Adelaide and Riordan, it was a totally believable chapter. She doesn't seem like the type to beat someone up, even if he deserves it. I'm glad he's gone though :)
10/6/2011 c9 Me
You it actually didn't because there hasn't been much mention of him in the previous chapters. Maybe later on it will change something but right now I'm kinda like oh they're brothers ok so what else is going on.
Oliver and Graham have an interesting relationship, I can't wait to see how Adelaide plays into it.
You it actually didn't because there hasn't been much mention of him in the previous chapters. Maybe later on it will change something but right now I'm kinda like oh they're brothers ok so what else is going on.
Oliver and Graham have an interesting relationship, I can't wait to see how Adelaide plays into it.
10/5/2011 c11 StaNdUPtomE
Reading this as the author note or the chapter?
So my thoughts she's pregnant -no duh the beginning of the story!- but of course now she does not know it... and tehy have offically met again for the upteenth time! I still don't know if I could face him, I think I'd go hide in a hole... but I'm not very brave. . . . . I don't think her reaction to Riordan was bad... would she really kick his ass? I probably would have reacted fairly similar.. his story was bs
and OH! Graham using the same line, is so totally going to come back to haunt her, and bite him in the but (total forshadowing!)
I think that is all I have to say! I loved it! Its still keeping me on the edge of my seat!
Reading this as the author note or the chapter?
So my thoughts she's pregnant -no duh the beginning of the story!- but of course now she does not know it... and tehy have offically met again for the upteenth time! I still don't know if I could face him, I think I'd go hide in a hole... but I'm not very brave. . . . . I don't think her reaction to Riordan was bad... would she really kick his ass? I probably would have reacted fairly similar.. his story was bs
and OH! Graham using the same line, is so totally going to come back to haunt her, and bite him in the but (total forshadowing!)
I think that is all I have to say! I loved it! Its still keeping me on the edge of my seat!
9/29/2011 c9 StaNdUPtomE
I don't know maybe more of a OMFG moment... Especially since I did not remember it I'd probably sit their and stare at him for like ten minutes trying to figure out who he was and why it wasnt my bed... but thats me and I'd overthink it all if I hadnt planned to do it...
I liked the chapter though, I'm curous to see where it all goes
I don't know maybe more of a OMFG moment... Especially since I did not remember it I'd probably sit their and stare at him for like ten minutes trying to figure out who he was and why it wasnt my bed... but thats me and I'd overthink it all if I hadnt planned to do it...
I liked the chapter though, I'm curous to see where it all goes