for Happily Ever After Almost Rewrite5/17/2011 c5 
39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Great chapter! And we finally get to see Graham again ;)
How did Jonny die again? or did we find out at all in the old version? idk lol
39Raaawr Ima DinosaurGreat chapter! And we finally get to see Graham again ;)
How did Jonny die again? or did we find out at all in the old version? idk lol
5/17/2011 c4 Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
YAY I FINALLY GOT OFF MY LAZY ASS TO REVIEW! ...well actually, i'm sitting on my lazy ass so that kinda fails but you know what I mean ;)
Great chapter (although its practically the same lols)
YAY I FINALLY GOT OFF MY LAZY ASS TO REVIEW! ...well actually, i'm sitting on my lazy ass so that kinda fails but you know what I mean ;)
Great chapter (although its practically the same lols)
5/16/2011 c11 17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It's beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am so glad that Oliver finally drag Graham to the university and hope that he make Graham to enrol into the course for university. Yay! :D I am wonder what course Oliver studied at the moment? *curiously* I am wonder how old are Victoria, Ryan, Emily and Vicki? *curiously* I am so wonder why Anthony and Vicki doesn't work out together? *curiously* I am so confused where Adelaide mention that Ryan is her student. What she meant by that? Is Adelaide the professior? *curiously* I am so glad that Graham and Adelaide sat together in her class. How cute. :) I am so glad that Oliver left Graham to keep Adelaide in her company for while. Yay! :D Thats means Adelaide and Graham definitely get know each other better. Yay! :D I am so glad that Adelaide and Graham help each other in the biology. Yay! :D What kind of job does Graham work as? *curiously* I noticed that your other story that call 'My boyfriend's best friend' is write after or before this story begins? *curiously* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :D Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It's beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am so glad that Oliver finally drag Graham to the university and hope that he make Graham to enrol into the course for university. Yay! :D I am wonder what course Oliver studied at the moment? *curiously* I am wonder how old are Victoria, Ryan, Emily and Vicki? *curiously* I am so wonder why Anthony and Vicki doesn't work out together? *curiously* I am so confused where Adelaide mention that Ryan is her student. What she meant by that? Is Adelaide the professior? *curiously* I am so glad that Graham and Adelaide sat together in her class. How cute. :) I am so glad that Oliver left Graham to keep Adelaide in her company for while. Yay! :D Thats means Adelaide and Graham definitely get know each other better. Yay! :D I am so glad that Adelaide and Graham help each other in the biology. Yay! :D What kind of job does Graham work as? *curiously* I noticed that your other story that call 'My boyfriend's best friend' is write after or before this story begins? *curiously* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :D Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D
5/16/2011 c11 2reliving the future
Haha the cousin thing is cute. Oliver is such a little flirt but I love him. So she isn't pregnant, but she will be... intriguing. And more Declan ahorita and more romance.
Oh and I'll send you chapter three either tomorrow or Wednesday. Happy Birthday!
2reliving the futureHaha the cousin thing is cute. Oliver is such a little flirt but I love him. So she isn't pregnant, but she will be... intriguing. And more Declan ahorita and more romance.
Oh and I'll send you chapter three either tomorrow or Wednesday. Happy Birthday!
5/16/2011 c11 Lyssa50
Loved it. Tsk tsk is Oliver trying to make Graham jealous by kissing her or does he like her?
It's not boring so no need to cut anything out. It does need something though...more romance/romantic interludes.
Loved it. Tsk tsk is Oliver trying to make Graham jealous by kissing her or does he like her?
It's not boring so no need to cut anything out. It does need something though...more romance/romantic interludes.
5/16/2011 c11 2Soonafter100
I like this, I keep wondering who is she going to have a child with..lol.. please post soon!
2Soonafter100I like this, I keep wondering who is she going to have a child with..lol.. please post soon!
5/15/2011 c10 Me
I just started your story and I must say I like the idea behind it so far. But I'm not sure why the songs are there. Are you just using them to make the chapters longer? Because I think they would be better without them. Also you never seem to answer if she's pregnant or not. If she is, she shouldn't be drinking it could hurt the baby, if not isn't she still too young to be drinking? She's only 18 right?
But I do love the story so far and can't wait to see how it goes.
I just started your story and I must say I like the idea behind it so far. But I'm not sure why the songs are there. Are you just using them to make the chapters longer? Because I think they would be better without them. Also you never seem to answer if she's pregnant or not. If she is, she shouldn't be drinking it could hurt the baby, if not isn't she still too young to be drinking? She's only 18 right?
But I do love the story so far and can't wait to see how it goes.
5/6/2011 c10 Lyrical
Love it! Update soon.
Love it! Update soon.
5/6/2011 c5 Lyrical
OMG I love love love this.
OMG I love love love this.
5/6/2011 c1 Lyrical
Yay you're reposting. So far I like this much more than the original.
Yay you're reposting. So far I like this much more than the original.
5/5/2011 c10 Lover I Don't Have To Love
OMG I am so happy that you got the story taken down, that girl is so stupid. I wish people would stop taking what isn't theirs, cause all the good stories are disappearing.
That would be a good solution to him leaving but we both know it won't happen :(. Tony, gotta love him, making people jealous in a completely different story. Haha. Why does she only want to be friends I thought she liked him? I really liked this chapter, so I think you should post the others that you wrote. It's up to you but please update soon.
OMG I am so happy that you got the story taken down, that girl is so stupid. I wish people would stop taking what isn't theirs, cause all the good stories are disappearing.
That would be a good solution to him leaving but we both know it won't happen :(. Tony, gotta love him, making people jealous in a completely different story. Haha. Why does she only want to be friends I thought she liked him? I really liked this chapter, so I think you should post the others that you wrote. It's up to you but please update soon.
5/5/2011 c10 madness is contagious
So I liked the chapter but I'm a bit confused. Sandoval is Oliver right? So is that his last name? And how does Oliver know Tony? Loved the ending where he freaked out over liking her, it was adorable. Update soon.
So I liked the chapter but I'm a bit confused. Sandoval is Oliver right? So is that his last name? And how does Oliver know Tony? Loved the ending where he freaked out over liking her, it was adorable. Update soon.