for Happily Ever After Almost Rewrite4/26/2011 c8 
17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It's so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I don't know that Ava and Michelle are Declan's sisters. I am wonder how old are Ava and Michelle? *curiously* I am wonder why Graham kept think about Adelaide alot? *curiously* I am hope that Graham and Declan are friends again. *hopeful smile* I am wonder why Oliver is determined to get Declan to give him Michelle's phone number? I am wonder why? *curiously* I am wonder how does Oliver found Adelaide and kept call her? Is he so interesting in her? *curiously* OMG Is Adelaide pregnant or just got flu? *curiously* I am wonder why Declan want Adelaide to drop in his club for discuss? *curiously* I am so glad that Declan and Adelaide finally sort out their problems together. Yay. :D OMG Graham want to have second chance with Adelaide. I am wonder why? *curiously* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's so amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :)
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It's so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I don't know that Ava and Michelle are Declan's sisters. I am wonder how old are Ava and Michelle? *curiously* I am wonder why Graham kept think about Adelaide alot? *curiously* I am hope that Graham and Declan are friends again. *hopeful smile* I am wonder why Oliver is determined to get Declan to give him Michelle's phone number? I am wonder why? *curiously* I am wonder how does Oliver found Adelaide and kept call her? Is he so interesting in her? *curiously* OMG Is Adelaide pregnant or just got flu? *curiously* I am wonder why Declan want Adelaide to drop in his club for discuss? *curiously* I am so glad that Declan and Adelaide finally sort out their problems together. Yay. :D OMG Graham want to have second chance with Adelaide. I am wonder why? *curiously* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's so amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :)
4/26/2011 c8 darkgurl92
Can't wait for the story to progress...can't wait for the drama to start..:)
update soon
Can't wait for the story to progress...can't wait for the drama to start..:)
update soon
4/26/2011 c8 3Unless-52
...Cool. I really hope she just has the flu...Anyways, I'm glad that you updated. I've seen some minor mistakes in this chapter but, it wasn't that much. Good job!
~Miyako
3Unless-52...Cool. I really hope she just has the flu...Anyways, I'm glad that you updated. I've seen some minor mistakes in this chapter but, it wasn't that much. Good job!
~Miyako
4/26/2011 c8 Lyssa50
I like the dream thingy with Oliver, he's my favorite character other than Addie. I thought it was really happening but it was just a dream, that happened right? I don't know I'm kinda confused. Anyway I was wondering about Joss, I thought Michelle was her roommate? Or does she have more than one?
I like the dream thingy with Oliver, he's my favorite character other than Addie. I thought it was really happening but it was just a dream, that happened right? I don't know I'm kinda confused. Anyway I was wondering about Joss, I thought Michelle was her roommate? Or does she have more than one?
4/26/2011 c8 Lover I Don't Have To Love
Second chance yes! Now they need to get together so we can get on with the story. I don't want him to leave though so maybe they shouldn't get together. Dilemma, dilemma.
Second chance yes! Now they need to get together so we can get on with the story. I don't want him to leave though so maybe they shouldn't get together. Dilemma, dilemma.
4/26/2011 c7 Lover I Don't Have To Love
Grr Riordan is so annoying, he should definitely end up with Ragan. Wait Ragan is the blonde Addie saw him with right?
Grr Riordan is so annoying, he should definitely end up with Ragan. Wait Ragan is the blonde Addie saw him with right?
4/26/2011 c8 madness is contagious
Aw Graham's moping that's sweet. And she gave him a second chance, but she is broken up with Riordan right? I'd hate for him to come back and ruin it. Love the dream about Oliver, did that really happen?
Aw Graham's moping that's sweet. And she gave him a second chance, but she is broken up with Riordan right? I'd hate for him to come back and ruin it. Love the dream about Oliver, did that really happen?
4/26/2011 c7 madness is contagious
O can't wait for them to get together, it's going to be good. Riordan jeez he's still up to no good, I thought she had dumped him.
O can't wait for them to get together, it's going to be good. Riordan jeez he's still up to no good, I thought she had dumped him.
4/26/2011 c8 2reliving the future
Haha I love how she met Oliver again, he's so much fun. And Declan! eek he was all over this chapter I love it. :)
Anyway Rodger it is, and I sent you the story so have at it, but be nice okay it's my first third person story.
2reliving the futureHaha I love how she met Oliver again, he's so much fun. And Declan! eek he was all over this chapter I love it. :)
Anyway Rodger it is, and I sent you the story so have at it, but be nice okay it's my first third person story.
4/19/2011 c7 17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I suggest two songs for this chapter are 'Complicate' by Avril Lavigne or 'I love it the way you lie' by Eminem. Or 'Who's that chick?' by Rihanon. :D Hope those songs will help you to figure out what to match to this chapter. :D OMG Oliver got the Adelaide's bra and the shoe. Poor Graham. :( OMG Who's that girl that Frankie with? I feel sorry for Graham who have to shut that noise from his bedroom. Poor Graham. :( OMG Riorchan show up at Adelaide's apartment and accuse her that she's cheat on him when's obvious that its him the one who's cheat on her. Poor Adelaide. :( OMG Riorchan beg Adelaide to give him another chance to be with her again. I hope that Adelaide won't take him back. *hopeful smile* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I suggest two songs for this chapter are 'Complicate' by Avril Lavigne or 'I love it the way you lie' by Eminem. Or 'Who's that chick?' by Rihanon. :D Hope those songs will help you to figure out what to match to this chapter. :D OMG Oliver got the Adelaide's bra and the shoe. Poor Graham. :( OMG Who's that girl that Frankie with? I feel sorry for Graham who have to shut that noise from his bedroom. Poor Graham. :( OMG Riorchan show up at Adelaide's apartment and accuse her that she's cheat on him when's obvious that its him the one who's cheat on her. Poor Adelaide. :( OMG Riorchan beg Adelaide to give him another chance to be with her again. I hope that Adelaide won't take him back. *hopeful smile* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D