for Happily Ever After Almost Rewrite3/22/2011 c5 
17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) This chapter is better than original story and its great chapter. :D Whoa! I don't know that Jonny and Adelaide have black roses tattoos on their bodies. How cute. :) I am just wonder if Jonny is the brother of Adelaide? *curiously* Aww Declan name the club after Jonny's tattoo. Thats so sweet of Declan to show the honor for Jonny. :) Ah Michelle and Adelaide drank vodka and dancing. Thats wonderful. :) Ah Oliver have hit on Adelaide but got hurt by her chin so he went off to flirt with Michelle. Hope that Oliver and Michelle will be item in the end. :D I am wonder who is that man who laughed at Adelaide and offer to buy a drink for her? *curiously* Ah Declan told Adelaide to bring drinks for Graham, Oliver and Michelle. Thats nice of him. :) OMG Graham and Adelaide kissing on the NYE and end up in the bed. I am wonder what happen next after that? *curiously* I am wonder why Graham kept say f*? Is he mad at Declan? What happen between Graham and Declan? *curiously* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :)
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) This chapter is better than original story and its great chapter. :D Whoa! I don't know that Jonny and Adelaide have black roses tattoos on their bodies. How cute. :) I am just wonder if Jonny is the brother of Adelaide? *curiously* Aww Declan name the club after Jonny's tattoo. Thats so sweet of Declan to show the honor for Jonny. :) Ah Michelle and Adelaide drank vodka and dancing. Thats wonderful. :) Ah Oliver have hit on Adelaide but got hurt by her chin so he went off to flirt with Michelle. Hope that Oliver and Michelle will be item in the end. :D I am wonder who is that man who laughed at Adelaide and offer to buy a drink for her? *curiously* Ah Declan told Adelaide to bring drinks for Graham, Oliver and Michelle. Thats nice of him. :) OMG Graham and Adelaide kissing on the NYE and end up in the bed. I am wonder what happen next after that? *curiously* I am wonder why Graham kept say f*? Is he mad at Declan? What happen between Graham and Declan? *curiously* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :)
3/22/2011 c5 2reliving the future
Loved it! Michelle set them up so she can be blamed when it all goes to hell instead of my luverly Declan. And it was really sweet that he was her new year's kiss, hopefully it means good news for the rest of the year :).
Don't forget about our story we've gotta update it soon cause it's been like a month or more already. Oh and prima j for a picture.
2reliving the futureLoved it! Michelle set them up so she can be blamed when it all goes to hell instead of my luverly Declan. And it was really sweet that he was her new year's kiss, hopefully it means good news for the rest of the year :).
Don't forget about our story we've gotta update it soon cause it's been like a month or more already. Oh and prima j for a picture.
3/22/2011 c5 Lover I Don't Have To Love
So um yeah that was interesting. I'm not sure which version of this chapter I like more, although this one was very interesting. He didn't seem to like her, but then he kissed her and I they had sex or so I'm guessing. Was Graham just trying to make Declan jealous or does he really like her?
Cause it would suck if he was just using her. It would be like Riordan all over again. Anyhow I'm off to read your other story, update both soon.
So um yeah that was interesting. I'm not sure which version of this chapter I like more, although this one was very interesting. He didn't seem to like her, but then he kissed her and I they had sex or so I'm guessing. Was Graham just trying to make Declan jealous or does he really like her?
Cause it would suck if he was just using her. It would be like Riordan all over again. Anyhow I'm off to read your other story, update both soon.
3/22/2011 c5 13JustAnotherLGirl
I love this so far. I like how it's not like 16 and pregnant. But I could relate to Addie!
13JustAnotherLGirlI love this so far. I like how it's not like 16 and pregnant. But I could relate to Addie!
3/19/2011 c4 Lover I Don't Have To Love
Finally I was wondering when you'd update. Maybe I should start stalking you with threats *ahem* hints for you to update. I like it...so she's starting the new year off with a bang. Hmm wonder if that's literal?
Haha anyway I loved the costumes, you should find more pictures. Like of your characters.
Finally I was wondering when you'd update. Maybe I should start stalking you with threats *ahem* hints for you to update. I like it...so she's starting the new year off with a bang. Hmm wonder if that's literal?
Haha anyway I loved the costumes, you should find more pictures. Like of your characters.
3/18/2011 c4 2Soonafter100
Man, I am like dying for the next chapter, come on and post soon, cause this story rocks!
2Soonafter100Man, I am like dying for the next chapter, come on and post soon, cause this story rocks!
3/17/2011 c4 17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) This chapter is better than the rest from the begining. :D The title of this chapter remind me of the movie. Have you seen the movie? *curiously* Ah Michelle and Adelaide were roommates. Thats wonderful. :) How come Adelaide not live with her family? *curiously* How come Michelle don't live with her family? *curiously* Ah Jonny is a unsual name. It sound like Johnny. :S I am wonder how does Jonny died? *curiously* I am so glad that Declan and Callum finally open up their own business is bar at villiage. Yay. :D I am hope that Declan's business will be successful in the future. :D Aww Adelaide bought the christmas present for Riordan. Thats so sweet of her. :) OMG Riordan never show up for the band. Poor Adelaide. :( I don't understand why Riordan never call Adelaide and spent time with her. Poor Adelaide. :( OMG Riordan cheat on with another woman behind Adelaide's back. Poor Adelaide. :( I am wonder who's the blonde woman that she's kiss to Riordan? *curiously* I am wonder how old are Michelle, Declan and Callum? *curiously* I am just wonder why Riordan never stay to be faith and honest with Adelaide? *curiously* OMG Riordan never return Adelaide's calls at all. Poor Adelaide. :( I agree with Michelle that Adelaide should forget about Riordan and move on with her life. Riordan's idiot to let a special girl like Adelaide. Riordan is just jerk and prefer to be one night stand with women than to be in serious relationship with a woman. I think Adelaide is better off without Riordan. :) I think a club will help Adelaide to don't think about Riordan. Maybe she'll get a lucky guy who will make her happy in the end when she get there at club with Michelle. :) Riordan is coward to face Adelaide in person. He deserve to be dump from Adelaide. :) I am wonder who is that man speak Riordan before he spot Adelaide there at shop? *curiously* Adelaide should dump Riordan and find another guy who will make her happy plus treat her like angel he worship on the ground she walk on. :) Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you update it when you have time. Don't stop writing. :D It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :)
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) This chapter is better than the rest from the begining. :D The title of this chapter remind me of the movie. Have you seen the movie? *curiously* Ah Michelle and Adelaide were roommates. Thats wonderful. :) How come Adelaide not live with her family? *curiously* How come Michelle don't live with her family? *curiously* Ah Jonny is a unsual name. It sound like Johnny. :S I am wonder how does Jonny died? *curiously* I am so glad that Declan and Callum finally open up their own business is bar at villiage. Yay. :D I am hope that Declan's business will be successful in the future. :D Aww Adelaide bought the christmas present for Riordan. Thats so sweet of her. :) OMG Riordan never show up for the band. Poor Adelaide. :( I don't understand why Riordan never call Adelaide and spent time with her. Poor Adelaide. :( OMG Riordan cheat on with another woman behind Adelaide's back. Poor Adelaide. :( I am wonder who's the blonde woman that she's kiss to Riordan? *curiously* I am wonder how old are Michelle, Declan and Callum? *curiously* I am just wonder why Riordan never stay to be faith and honest with Adelaide? *curiously* OMG Riordan never return Adelaide's calls at all. Poor Adelaide. :( I agree with Michelle that Adelaide should forget about Riordan and move on with her life. Riordan's idiot to let a special girl like Adelaide. Riordan is just jerk and prefer to be one night stand with women than to be in serious relationship with a woman. I think Adelaide is better off without Riordan. :) I think a club will help Adelaide to don't think about Riordan. Maybe she'll get a lucky guy who will make her happy in the end when she get there at club with Michelle. :) Riordan is coward to face Adelaide in person. He deserve to be dump from Adelaide. :) I am wonder who is that man speak Riordan before he spot Adelaide there at shop? *curiously* Adelaide should dump Riordan and find another guy who will make her happy plus treat her like angel he worship on the ground she walk on. :) Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you update it when you have time. Don't stop writing. :D It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :)
3/17/2011 c4 2reliving the future
Yeah still not liking Riordan but I suppose that's okay eh? Anyway glad you're updating again, I missed reading this. Update soon k.
Oh yeah I emailed you my part of the chapter so just write yours and send it back, and I'll post it.
2reliving the futureYeah still not liking Riordan but I suppose that's okay eh? Anyway glad you're updating again, I missed reading this. Update soon k.
Oh yeah I emailed you my part of the chapter so just write yours and send it back, and I'll post it.
2/25/2011 c3 39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
I loved this!
Once more, Ragan is making everyone's lives difficult.
And i would lvoe to see the costumes! :D
great chapter, please update soon!
39Raaawr Ima DinosaurI loved this!
Once more, Ragan is making everyone's lives difficult.
And i would lvoe to see the costumes! :D
great chapter, please update soon!
2/22/2011 c3 Lover I Don't Have To Love
Hmm I didn't love this chapter but I didn't hate it either. Ragan gah she's driving me crazy, write her out already.
I want to see the pictures of their costumes.
Hmm I didn't love this chapter but I didn't hate it either. Ragan gah she's driving me crazy, write her out already.
I want to see the pictures of their costumes.
2/22/2011 c3 2reliving the future
Jeez Ragan and Riordan deserve each other, wait they still end up together right? She's so evil seducing Graham when he should be with Addie.
West Coast sucks, well at least two players on that team do :P. At least the Rookies won.
2reliving the futureJeez Ragan and Riordan deserve each other, wait they still end up together right? She's so evil seducing Graham when he should be with Addie.
West Coast sucks, well at least two players on that team do :P. At least the Rookies won.
2/19/2011 c2 17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It is good chapter and I like it. :) I don't know what I should say about this story because I don't find it satisfied. Maybe you miss a point from this story. I thought a eighteen year old is legal age to have sex with a older boyfriend. I am wonder why Adelaide lost her virginal when she was not in love with Riordo? *curiously* If I am in Adelaide's shoes then I go and hunt down the truth than to be end up blind and coward that She think Riordo never do that to her. What shame for her because she will discover the truth in the end. :( I just hope that the next chapter will be good. *hopeful smile* I think Graham's POV and Adelaide's Pov will be great in each chapters together that you must follow the story of flow. :) Anyway, hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I am look forward to read the next chapters of your story. Don't stop writing. :D It is good chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I like it. Please update soon. :) I am look forward to read this story until the end because I want to know what happens next in this story. :)
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It is good chapter and I like it. :) I don't know what I should say about this story because I don't find it satisfied. Maybe you miss a point from this story. I thought a eighteen year old is legal age to have sex with a older boyfriend. I am wonder why Adelaide lost her virginal when she was not in love with Riordo? *curiously* If I am in Adelaide's shoes then I go and hunt down the truth than to be end up blind and coward that She think Riordo never do that to her. What shame for her because she will discover the truth in the end. :( I just hope that the next chapter will be good. *hopeful smile* I think Graham's POV and Adelaide's Pov will be great in each chapters together that you must follow the story of flow. :) Anyway, hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I am look forward to read the next chapters of your story. Don't stop writing. :D It is good chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I like it. Please update soon. :) I am look forward to read this story until the end because I want to know what happens next in this story. :)