for Happily Ever After Almost Rewrite6/8/2011 c15 
2reliving the future
Pssh whatever loser, Declan's better than Graham any day and I'm not talking about the characters :P.
Why's Ryan still in the story? I told you to write him out, gosh this sucks, she's lying him you know that right? And lying is never good. Although Graham seems to be hiding something too. I don't he's kinda angsty in this version, where's the asshole drinker Graham he was more fun. Bring him back.
2reliving the futurePssh whatever loser, Declan's better than Graham any day and I'm not talking about the characters :P.
Why's Ryan still in the story? I told you to write him out, gosh this sucks, she's lying him you know that right? And lying is never good. Although Graham seems to be hiding something too. I don't he's kinda angsty in this version, where's the asshole drinker Graham he was more fun. Bring him back.
6/8/2011 c15 madness is contagious
Accident? What kind of accident?
They're very frisky aren't they? Too bad his mom had to interrupt ;).
I don't know why but I feel like something bad is going to happen, but then she did say "that should've been my first clue that something was about to happen." That doesn't sound good, don't kill anyone okay?
Accident? What kind of accident?
They're very frisky aren't they? Too bad his mom had to interrupt ;).
I don't know why but I feel like something bad is going to happen, but then she did say "that should've been my first clue that something was about to happen." That doesn't sound good, don't kill anyone okay?
6/8/2011 c15 Lover I Don't Have To Love
WAIT! Back up a minute Jonny and Jonathan holy crap! No wonder but then why doesn't she realize that? I mean even if they don't look alike he and Graham have to have the same last name don't they?
Anyway I loved this chapter, but why didn't she tell Graham about Ryan? He'd probably beat the crap outta him but isn't that a good thing? And what's up with the call from his mom? He got so depressed afterwards shouldn't he be happy that they're talking again?
WAIT! Back up a minute Jonny and Jonathan holy crap! No wonder but then why doesn't she realize that? I mean even if they don't look alike he and Graham have to have the same last name don't they?
Anyway I loved this chapter, but why didn't she tell Graham about Ryan? He'd probably beat the crap outta him but isn't that a good thing? And what's up with the call from his mom? He got so depressed afterwards shouldn't he be happy that they're talking again?
6/8/2011 c15 Lyssa50
Lol interrupted by his mom awkward. I'm glad the relationship's working out. And uh oh it looks like she's pregnant or at least the nausea makes it sound like she is.
What the hell is Ryan's problem, she obviously doesn't want to date him. So he threatens her? What a loser. She should tell Graham though, before it comes back to bite her.
Lol interrupted by his mom awkward. I'm glad the relationship's working out. And uh oh it looks like she's pregnant or at least the nausea makes it sound like she is.
What the hell is Ryan's problem, she obviously doesn't want to date him. So he threatens her? What a loser. She should tell Graham though, before it comes back to bite her.
5/29/2011 c12 Lyrical88
Okay I know you're probably sick of me already and I already reviewed this chapter, but one last thing and then I promise I'm done...UPDATE. Please I'm dying here.
Also can you repost chapter 11? It's vanished into thin air. I know they were in her class and what not, but I want to re-read cause I can't remember exactly what happened.
And I totally just peeked at the other chapter 14 reviews, and I'm curious. Is Jonny related to Jonathan in any way? And how did he die?
Okay I know you're probably sick of me already and I already reviewed this chapter, but one last thing and then I promise I'm done...UPDATE. Please I'm dying here.
Also can you repost chapter 11? It's vanished into thin air. I know they were in her class and what not, but I want to re-read cause I can't remember exactly what happened.
And I totally just peeked at the other chapter 14 reviews, and I'm curious. Is Jonny related to Jonathan in any way? And how did he die?
5/29/2011 c8 Lyrical88
I don't know why, but Oliver has to be my favorite character, and being in her class is somehow poetic.
I don't know why, but Oliver has to be my favorite character, and being in her class is somehow poetic.
5/29/2011 c7 Lyrical88
The Cure! I freaking love them, Graham has good taste in music. Actually you do too. Lol well I suppose you're the writer. Uh just ignore me, I'm rambling...
The walk of shame continues :D hopefully Riordan's the last one. And I'm so happy that she slammed the door in his face. He deserves a kick in the balls but maybe that's just me.
The Cure! I freaking love them, Graham has good taste in music. Actually you do too. Lol well I suppose you're the writer. Uh just ignore me, I'm rambling...
The walk of shame continues :D hopefully Riordan's the last one. And I'm so happy that she slammed the door in his face. He deserves a kick in the balls but maybe that's just me.
5/29/2011 c6 Lyrical88
Lol running into Oliver during your walk of shame, awkward. Geez and Declan? Talk about walk of shame.
Lol running into Oliver during your walk of shame, awkward. Geez and Declan? Talk about walk of shame.
5/29/2011 c4 Lyrical88
Riordan a creep, plain and simple. Hope he stays away cause she's better off without him.
Riordan a creep, plain and simple. Hope he stays away cause she's better off without him.
5/29/2011 c3 Lyrical88
Pretty much the same as chapter two but I like when Graham's pov is thrown in, it switches things up. Damn that Ragan, if she hadn't gotten in the way they could've hooked up. Although maybe it's better this way.
Pretty much the same as chapter two but I like when Graham's pov is thrown in, it switches things up. Damn that Ragan, if she hadn't gotten in the way they could've hooked up. Although maybe it's better this way.
5/29/2011 c2 Lyrical88
So since you disabled anonymous reviews and I'm dying for you to update I thought I'd raid your story to nudge you to review. BTW I'm Lyrical, but someone had that name so I had to add numbers...Lame I know but whatever.
Anyhow I loved this chapter, especially their costumes. Ragan's is slutty as hell though, but it totally fits her.
So since you disabled anonymous reviews and I'm dying for you to update I thought I'd raid your story to nudge you to review. BTW I'm Lyrical, but someone had that name so I had to add numbers...Lame I know but whatever.
Anyhow I loved this chapter, especially their costumes. Ragan's is slutty as hell though, but it totally fits her.
5/27/2011 c14 Me
His sister? Huh that's so odd, I was sure he was sleeping with someone else. I'm happy I was wrong though, because I would've been so annoyed with Adelaide if she slept with him while she was drunk and got knocked up and that was it.
His sister? Huh that's so odd, I was sure he was sleeping with someone else. I'm happy I was wrong though, because I would've been so annoyed with Adelaide if she slept with him while she was drunk and got knocked up and that was it.
5/27/2011 c14 Lyrical
I still say You Really Got Me would've been a way better song. Maybe you can use it later. Anyhow awesome chapter, it's nice to know something about Graham and yay for her not being a stupid slutty chick. She's his sister. What happened to his brother exactly?
I still say You Really Got Me would've been a way better song. Maybe you can use it later. Anyhow awesome chapter, it's nice to know something about Graham and yay for her not being a stupid slutty chick. She's his sister. What happened to his brother exactly?
5/26/2011 c14 Ellybeth
Just tuned in to this story and I'm enjoying it so far. I like the different POV's from Graham and Addie. Cant wait for the next chapter!
Just tuned in to this story and I'm enjoying it so far. I like the different POV's from Graham and Addie. Cant wait for the next chapter!