for Happily Ever After Almost Rewrite5/24/2011 c14 
17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It's so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I want to say few things that might make you happy and feel better again. :) I never say thats your story is bad or horried because I knew that this story definitely worth more than the other authors's stories. :) Why does I say that? Because you brought your characters into realitx world and made them as real like us. Thats what the book is about to bring the readers to get know the characters in this story and its fantastic job that you work with your characters so well. Thats why I love this story and brought me to be closer to your characters as friends. :) So I think you should continue the sequel because I want to know what happen next with Nate inside and yes I am interesting in as well. :) Listen, never listen to anyone and believe in yourself so don't give up on this story please. Thats will be break my heart that leave me questions in my head and receive no answers from that. :( So let me tell you that I don't care what others think of this story because its their problems and its shame that they miss awesome stories that capture their hearts like this so all its matter to me if you keep continue on to sequel then Oliver's story that make you and me happy in the world. :) Trust me that you will be upset if you complete this story and don't continue the sequel so it's important that you remember that you aren't one who have problems to capture readers interest in. So don't stop and don't give up on this story because I really love this story so please think about it. :) I am hoping this advice help you and feel better again. :) Cheer up and don't waste on your temper on other people who never want read this or don't care about them because they are not take seriously on this site at all. Trust me and I am just being honest with you. :) Aww Graham gave a gift to Adelaide. How cute. :D Now I understand why Graham act like that way because of his past. :) I am so sorry to hear that Graham lost his dad and his brother. It must be tough for Graham and his family to struggle through it. Poor Graham. :( I am wonder how old are Jonathan and Sarah? *curiously* I can see that Jonathan and dad must be the most people in Graham's life that affect him the most. Poor Graham. :( I am wonder why Shawn's freak out and don't want to do anything with Sarah, Graham and Jonathan? *curiously* I am wonder how does Jonathan and his dad die? *curiously* I am just mad that Graham's mum don't sort out that it herself or take counselling with him to make him realises it hurt her? *curiously* Its about 50 or 60% of teens have family issues that lead them into wrong crowd, do dangerous things and suicides. Its sad how parents don't see the signs until its too late. :( I am not say that Graham's mum is bad. No and everyone's not perfect so they make mistakes in their life. So they learn from their mistakes. :) I think Graham have to stop tell Sarah to return to her old self because it won't work that way. :( Trust me. If Graham wants Sarah to change it and he have to let her to make her own choices because its her life and she can change it when she's ready. Or get her for help eg counselling. Think about it. :) I understand that Graham's worried about Sarah so I think they should talk and listen to her maybe he can find out what bother her. Thats what she want from him is attention, help etc. :) I don't know that Graham have a family. It made me think that he have no family or don't want to do anything with them. :( Now I can see more soft side of Graham. Yay! :D I am hoping that Graham and Sarah will be close again. *hopeful smile* This chapter making me smile again and bit sad what happen to rest of Graham's family who can't deal with him. Poor Graham and Sarah. :( I am hope that you will write Sarah's story please in the future. Thanks. :) Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It's so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I want to say few things that might make you happy and feel better again. :) I never say thats your story is bad or horried because I knew that this story definitely worth more than the other authors's stories. :) Why does I say that? Because you brought your characters into realitx world and made them as real like us. Thats what the book is about to bring the readers to get know the characters in this story and its fantastic job that you work with your characters so well. Thats why I love this story and brought me to be closer to your characters as friends. :) So I think you should continue the sequel because I want to know what happen next with Nate inside and yes I am interesting in as well. :) Listen, never listen to anyone and believe in yourself so don't give up on this story please. Thats will be break my heart that leave me questions in my head and receive no answers from that. :( So let me tell you that I don't care what others think of this story because its their problems and its shame that they miss awesome stories that capture their hearts like this so all its matter to me if you keep continue on to sequel then Oliver's story that make you and me happy in the world. :) Trust me that you will be upset if you complete this story and don't continue the sequel so it's important that you remember that you aren't one who have problems to capture readers interest in. So don't stop and don't give up on this story because I really love this story so please think about it. :) I am hoping this advice help you and feel better again. :) Cheer up and don't waste on your temper on other people who never want read this or don't care about them because they are not take seriously on this site at all. Trust me and I am just being honest with you. :) Aww Graham gave a gift to Adelaide. How cute. :D Now I understand why Graham act like that way because of his past. :) I am so sorry to hear that Graham lost his dad and his brother. It must be tough for Graham and his family to struggle through it. Poor Graham. :( I am wonder how old are Jonathan and Sarah? *curiously* I can see that Jonathan and dad must be the most people in Graham's life that affect him the most. Poor Graham. :( I am wonder why Shawn's freak out and don't want to do anything with Sarah, Graham and Jonathan? *curiously* I am wonder how does Jonathan and his dad die? *curiously* I am just mad that Graham's mum don't sort out that it herself or take counselling with him to make him realises it hurt her? *curiously* Its about 50 or 60% of teens have family issues that lead them into wrong crowd, do dangerous things and suicides. Its sad how parents don't see the signs until its too late. :( I am not say that Graham's mum is bad. No and everyone's not perfect so they make mistakes in their life. So they learn from their mistakes. :) I think Graham have to stop tell Sarah to return to her old self because it won't work that way. :( Trust me. If Graham wants Sarah to change it and he have to let her to make her own choices because its her life and she can change it when she's ready. Or get her for help eg counselling. Think about it. :) I understand that Graham's worried about Sarah so I think they should talk and listen to her maybe he can find out what bother her. Thats what she want from him is attention, help etc. :) I don't know that Graham have a family. It made me think that he have no family or don't want to do anything with them. :( Now I can see more soft side of Graham. Yay! :D I am hoping that Graham and Sarah will be close again. *hopeful smile* This chapter making me smile again and bit sad what happen to rest of Graham's family who can't deal with him. Poor Graham and Sarah. :( I am hope that you will write Sarah's story please in the future. Thanks. :) Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D
5/24/2011 c14 madness is contagious
See I told you he was a good guy. He totally wasn't cheating, she's his sister. Lol that sounds wrong when I say it like that, but you know what I mean. And God that story is so sad. I'm scared to ask since I'll probably cry but how did his brother die?
A surprise eh? It is a good surprise cause then I can wait, if not you have to tell now or in like five seconds when I press submit :D.
See I told you he was a good guy. He totally wasn't cheating, she's his sister. Lol that sounds wrong when I say it like that, but you know what I mean. And God that story is so sad. I'm scared to ask since I'll probably cry but how did his brother die?
A surprise eh? It is a good surprise cause then I can wait, if not you have to tell now or in like five seconds when I press submit :D.
5/24/2011 c14 Lover I Don't Have To Love
Dude you got rid of the anonymous reviewer thing? Grr making me do extra work to leave a review. I can't believe someone would flame you, that's dumb and I completely disagree with her. This story is really good, and I knew you wouldn't let her turn into one of those girls because of sex.
Graham aw, I'm so sad. What happened to his brother? And Jonathan any relation to Jonny? Hmm
What's in the box? Come on tell me I neeeeed to know. I'll haunt you until you tell me. You know I will. Remember fluffy ending the fluffier the better, and if it's not fluffy then sequel with a fluffy ending okay?
Dude you got rid of the anonymous reviewer thing? Grr making me do extra work to leave a review. I can't believe someone would flame you, that's dumb and I completely disagree with her. This story is really good, and I knew you wouldn't let her turn into one of those girls because of sex.
Graham aw, I'm so sad. What happened to his brother? And Jonathan any relation to Jonny? Hmm
What's in the box? Come on tell me I neeeeed to know. I'll haunt you until you tell me. You know I will. Remember fluffy ending the fluffier the better, and if it's not fluffy then sequel with a fluffy ending okay?
5/24/2011 c14 2reliving the future
Oh yeah well tough, I shall use it and make it a word. Yes I know that without Graham there would be no Nate, but Ollie is awesome although Declan is still my favorite. And not just cause he's based on my boyfriend :P.
Chapter whatever number I'm on...hmm I can't remember anyhow I'll send it to you tomorrow.
~Steph
2reliving the futureOh yeah well tough, I shall use it and make it a word. Yes I know that without Graham there would be no Nate, but Ollie is awesome although Declan is still my favorite. And not just cause he's based on my boyfriend :P.
Chapter whatever number I'm on...hmm I can't remember anyhow I'll send it to you tomorrow.
~Steph
5/24/2011 c14 Lyssa50
Wow uber fast update I love it. Next one tomorrow yeah? Please O.O
Lol but that is such a relief that she's his sister. His story is so sad though, I hope he can let Addie in or he's going to hurt them both.
Well I totally vote for the sequel if you're taking votes. Nate, Nate, Nate, Nate! :D
Wow uber fast update I love it. Next one tomorrow yeah? Please O.O
Lol but that is such a relief that she's his sister. His story is so sad though, I hope he can let Addie in or he's going to hurt them both.
Well I totally vote for the sequel if you're taking votes. Nate, Nate, Nate, Nate! :D
5/24/2011 c14 5TheRiverRunsDeep
If I beg do i get a new chapter sooner? Lol, I am at that point, I hope you can and do
5TheRiverRunsDeepIf I beg do i get a new chapter sooner? Lol, I am at that point, I hope you can and do
5/24/2011 c14 xXSoundlessMusicXx
Hmmm...This is a good story, very interesting plot indeed. I can't believe someone would actually flame your story and not actually login. I mean, I don't think people should flame others' stories in the first place, just give them some tips and pointers to improve.
Sorry about that, I got caught up in the moment. I actually saw very few mistakes with this story, so I hope you'll continue and update soon!
Hmmm...This is a good story, very interesting plot indeed. I can't believe someone would actually flame your story and not actually login. I mean, I don't think people should flame others' stories in the first place, just give them some tips and pointers to improve.
Sorry about that, I got caught up in the moment. I actually saw very few mistakes with this story, so I hope you'll continue and update soon!
5/24/2011 c14 smrae
I do love your story and I am definitely looking forward to an update. As for the person who flamed...good riddance! Haha you handled it very well and I commend you for brushing it off and updating so fast! The chapter was sad but a great way for graham to open up. I can't wait to see what happens next!
I do love your story and I am definitely looking forward to an update. As for the person who flamed...good riddance! Haha you handled it very well and I commend you for brushing it off and updating so fast! The chapter was sad but a great way for graham to open up. I can't wait to see what happens next!
5/24/2011 c13 2Soonafter100
Great Chapter, very mature lik eyou said, but I like it, can't wait for the next one!
2Soonafter100Great Chapter, very mature lik eyou said, but I like it, can't wait for the next one!
5/24/2011 c13 Me
What the...? I thought Adelaide had more sense than that? She slept with him again? Maybe she's drunk but she should've pushed him for an answer about the girl. God I'm so disappointed in her.
What the...? I thought Adelaide had more sense than that? She slept with him again? Maybe she's drunk but she should've pushed him for an answer about the girl. God I'm so disappointed in her.
5/24/2011 c13 Lyrical
Hmm I'm still trying to figure out who the heck that girl was. He didn't acknowledge Addie calling her a slut, so I'm guessing it's someone he knows? A cousin, sister, childhood friend? Come on tell me I'm dying to know.
Love the song, but I thought you were going to use the one by the Kinks?
Hmm I'm still trying to figure out who the heck that girl was. He didn't acknowledge Addie calling her a slut, so I'm guessing it's someone he knows? A cousin, sister, childhood friend? Come on tell me I'm dying to know.
Love the song, but I thought you were going to use the one by the Kinks?
5/24/2011 c13 Lover I Don't Have To Love
No that was not what I was expecting. In fact, I think my head just exploded. I seriously thought she was going to hook up with Derek for a while there. But come on Addie, you better not forgive him that easily, he needs to explain. In fact he needs to go out there and drag the girl into the office and let her tell Addie who she is.
And what do you mean no Nate in this story? Does that mean there will be a sequel? I hope so because I really hate unhappy endings. It's all about happy, fluffy endings.
P.S. what the hell's in the box? You never did let me know.
No that was not what I was expecting. In fact, I think my head just exploded. I seriously thought she was going to hook up with Derek for a while there. But come on Addie, you better not forgive him that easily, he needs to explain. In fact he needs to go out there and drag the girl into the office and let her tell Addie who she is.
And what do you mean no Nate in this story? Does that mean there will be a sequel? I hope so because I really hate unhappy endings. It's all about happy, fluffy endings.
P.S. what the hell's in the box? You never did let me know.
5/24/2011 c13 madness is contagious
Holy shit! That was hot. Graham can act like a douche at times, but I don't care what you say, he's a good guy deep down.
What's in the box? Huh, huh, huh? Lol sorry I'm a wee bit hyper at the moment.
Holy shit! That was hot. Graham can act like a douche at times, but I don't care what you say, he's a good guy deep down.
What's in the box? Huh, huh, huh? Lol sorry I'm a wee bit hyper at the moment.