for Happily Ever After Almost Rewrite5/24/2011 c13 
2reliving the future
That was really sweet of him to dedicate a song to her, but she needs to make him explain about that girl. Everything just can't be fixed because they had sex. That's not Adelaide. And seriously Oliver is such a sweetheart, why didn't she meet him first? Although then there would be no Nate and he's the awesomest kid ever. Is that a word?
And since you asked I vote for you writing the sequel. So put me down times 100. :D
2reliving the futureThat was really sweet of him to dedicate a song to her, but she needs to make him explain about that girl. Everything just can't be fixed because they had sex. That's not Adelaide. And seriously Oliver is such a sweetheart, why didn't she meet him first? Although then there would be no Nate and he's the awesomest kid ever. Is that a word?
And since you asked I vote for you writing the sequel. So put me down times 100. :D
5/24/2011 c13 Lyssa50
Oh wow, that was erm interesting... I can't believe she had sex with him again. Maybe it was because she was drunk? I'm hoping that was it. Because he really needs to explain about that girl. She can't let him treat her like that.
So there's no Nate? Does that mean there's going to be a sequel?
Oh wow, that was erm interesting... I can't believe she had sex with him again. Maybe it was because she was drunk? I'm hoping that was it. Because he really needs to explain about that girl. She can't let him treat her like that.
So there's no Nate? Does that mean there's going to be a sequel?
5/24/2011 c13 dissapointed
what the fuck? i thought she wasn't that kind of girl. so then why'd she let him fuck her without so much as an explanation about the other girl? he had lipstick on his jaw for gods sake. and yet she let him fuck her any way - begged him for it - like some kind of slut. she just forgot about her anger like a whore and let him get away with treating her like another piece of ass. she shouldn't have let him touch her without an explanation. if that's the way your character is going to develop, with no self respect in the face of a hot guy, this is just another mindless sex craved trash.
what the fuck? i thought she wasn't that kind of girl. so then why'd she let him fuck her without so much as an explanation about the other girl? he had lipstick on his jaw for gods sake. and yet she let him fuck her any way - begged him for it - like some kind of slut. she just forgot about her anger like a whore and let him get away with treating her like another piece of ass. she shouldn't have let him touch her without an explanation. if that's the way your character is going to develop, with no self respect in the face of a hot guy, this is just another mindless sex craved trash.
5/24/2011 c13 3Unless-52
Awww...That's soooo cute! If I get a boyfriend I hope he'll do something cute and sweet like that. ^
I'm glad that she's not angry and everything anymore.
~Miyako
3Unless-52Awww...That's soooo cute! If I get a boyfriend I hope he'll do something cute and sweet like that. ^
I'm glad that she's not angry and everything anymore.
~Miyako
5/23/2011 c13 17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It's beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am so confused about Graham's act. :( Does Graham slept with the random girl then he slept with Adelaide? *curiously* If he is then why? *curiously* I want to punch Graham and make him wake up that Adelaide's the one for him. Poor Adelaide. :( Aww Adelaide is fall in love with Graham. Poor Adelaide. :( I am wonder if Graham does love her? Or not? *curiously* How come there will be no Nathan in this story? *curiously* I am wonder how old's Derek is? *curiously* Is this story will be sequel or not? *curiously* I am glad that Oliver is try to cheer Adelaide up as he hope that Derek take her mind off on Graham. Thats so nice of Oliver. :) I just wish that Adelaide should fall in love with Oliver instead. :( I am just so glad that Adelaide love dance. :) OMG Does Derek want one night stand with Adelaide? *curiously* What's up with those guys in this club? *shook my head in amusement* OMG Adelaide end up being drunk again. Poor Adelaide. :( OMG Graham and Adelaide have huge fight during on her birthday. Poor Graham and Adelaide. :( OMG Is Graham fall in love with Adelaide? *curiously* Aww Graham found a song for Adelaide. Thats so sweet of him. :) Part of me , I want to hurt Graham what he put Adelaide into. And part of me, I am confusing about his behaviour toward women beside Adelaide. :( Oh... My... Graham and Adelaide have hot lovemaking in the end. Hmm... Very hot one. :) I am hoping that you won't be mad at me that I am so angrily at Graham then become so sigh over his gift for Adelaide. I am just bit confusing about him. Thats all. :( So I just can't figure out if Graham's the gentleman and the rake as well or is he just thf playerboy as well. :S Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It's beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am so confused about Graham's act. :( Does Graham slept with the random girl then he slept with Adelaide? *curiously* If he is then why? *curiously* I want to punch Graham and make him wake up that Adelaide's the one for him. Poor Adelaide. :( Aww Adelaide is fall in love with Graham. Poor Adelaide. :( I am wonder if Graham does love her? Or not? *curiously* How come there will be no Nathan in this story? *curiously* I am wonder how old's Derek is? *curiously* Is this story will be sequel or not? *curiously* I am glad that Oliver is try to cheer Adelaide up as he hope that Derek take her mind off on Graham. Thats so nice of Oliver. :) I just wish that Adelaide should fall in love with Oliver instead. :( I am just so glad that Adelaide love dance. :) OMG Does Derek want one night stand with Adelaide? *curiously* What's up with those guys in this club? *shook my head in amusement* OMG Adelaide end up being drunk again. Poor Adelaide. :( OMG Graham and Adelaide have huge fight during on her birthday. Poor Graham and Adelaide. :( OMG Is Graham fall in love with Adelaide? *curiously* Aww Graham found a song for Adelaide. Thats so sweet of him. :) Part of me , I want to hurt Graham what he put Adelaide into. And part of me, I am confusing about his behaviour toward women beside Adelaide. :( Oh... My... Graham and Adelaide have hot lovemaking in the end. Hmm... Very hot one. :) I am hoping that you won't be mad at me that I am so angrily at Graham then become so sigh over his gift for Adelaide. I am just bit confusing about him. Thats all. :( So I just can't figure out if Graham's the gentleman and the rake as well or is he just thf playerboy as well. :S Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D
5/21/2011 c12 Lady of romance world88
Hi. It's so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am wonder why Graham avoid to call Adelaide for awhile then he call her to hang out with her? *curiously* I am glad that Adelaide turn Graham's offer down and want to study so she can pass her exams. Yay! :D I am wonder why Oliver and Frank show up at Adelaide's door for? *curiously* I don't know that Michelle and her roommate went off to abroad. I am wonder where are they stay at? *curiously* I don't know that Frank have good taste for women's fashion and have weakness for women's underwears. Poor Adelaide. :( OMG Frank is hit on Joscelyn. Poor thing. :( Aww Declan, Frank, Oliver and Callum show up to celebrate for Adelaide's birthday. Thats so amazing and cute surprise for her. :) Ah Graham's the DJ. Thats so hot. *smirk* I am wonder who's she? And is it Ashley? *curiously* I am wonder why women always threw themselves on Graham and Frank all time? *curiously* What about Oliver and Declan? *curiously* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :D Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D PS I will read the another story of your call, 'My boyfriend's best friend' when I have time. :D I am just wonder if you are plan to write Oliver's story, Michelle's story, Declan's story and Callum's story? *curiously*
Hi. It's so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am wonder why Graham avoid to call Adelaide for awhile then he call her to hang out with her? *curiously* I am glad that Adelaide turn Graham's offer down and want to study so she can pass her exams. Yay! :D I am wonder why Oliver and Frank show up at Adelaide's door for? *curiously* I don't know that Michelle and her roommate went off to abroad. I am wonder where are they stay at? *curiously* I don't know that Frank have good taste for women's fashion and have weakness for women's underwears. Poor Adelaide. :( OMG Frank is hit on Joscelyn. Poor thing. :( Aww Declan, Frank, Oliver and Callum show up to celebrate for Adelaide's birthday. Thats so amazing and cute surprise for her. :) Ah Graham's the DJ. Thats so hot. *smirk* I am wonder who's she? And is it Ashley? *curiously* I am wonder why women always threw themselves on Graham and Frank all time? *curiously* What about Oliver and Declan? *curiously* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :D Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D PS I will read the another story of your call, 'My boyfriend's best friend' when I have time. :D I am just wonder if you are plan to write Oliver's story, Michelle's story, Declan's story and Callum's story? *curiously*
5/21/2011 c12 Me
What happened to chapter 11? And I was confused is she 18 or 19?
What happened to chapter 11? And I was confused is she 18 or 19?
5/20/2011 c12 madness is contagious
Happy birthday! This chapter was good, but I'm worried about the girl. I thought he wanted to be more than friends? Poor Adelaide.
Happy birthday! This chapter was good, but I'm worried about the girl. I thought he wanted to be more than friends? Poor Adelaide.
5/20/2011 c12 Lover I Don't Have To Love
Oh wow who is that girl? I want to know but then I don't. Ah! Update soon please.
Happy Birthday, hope you have a great day ^_^.
Oh wow who is that girl? I want to know but then I don't. Ah! Update soon please.
Happy Birthday, hope you have a great day ^_^.
5/20/2011 c12 ebs12
just a minor mistake: at the beginning of the chapter Adelaide says that she would only be 18 for a few more hours but when she is talking to Callum he says he wouldn't miss her nineteenth birthday. Also, I'm pretty sure that you have to be a grad student at uni to be a T.A.
Anyway, really liked the chap and happy birthday - hope you have a good one
just a minor mistake: at the beginning of the chapter Adelaide says that she would only be 18 for a few more hours but when she is talking to Callum he says he wouldn't miss her nineteenth birthday. Also, I'm pretty sure that you have to be a grad student at uni to be a T.A.
Anyway, really liked the chap and happy birthday - hope you have a good one
5/20/2011 c12 Justsomerandomdudet
Happy birthday! :D
Happy birthday! :D