for Happily Ever After Almost Rewrite5/19/2011 c12 
2reliving the future
Dude Frankie is such a pervert, but it's funny. Yay Declan was in it, not a lot but he was there. More of him next chapter and holy crap if Graham's already sleeping with someone else... This does not bode well for their relationship. Not at all.
2reliving the futureDude Frankie is such a pervert, but it's funny. Yay Declan was in it, not a lot but he was there. More of him next chapter and holy crap if Graham's already sleeping with someone else... This does not bode well for their relationship. Not at all.
5/19/2011 c12 Lyssa50
Oh My God! Please tell me that he did not just go upstairs with a girl that is not Adelaide. Is she going to walk in on them having sex or something? No this really sucks, update soon please I'm begging you.
Happy Birthday.
Oh My God! Please tell me that he did not just go upstairs with a girl that is not Adelaide. Is she going to walk in on them having sex or something? No this really sucks, update soon please I'm begging you.
Happy Birthday.
5/19/2011 c12 Lyrical
OMFG what? Who is that chick? God that is a horrible place to stop. He can't sleep with her, what about Addie? Argh update soon. And Happy Birthday!
OMFG what? Who is that chick? God that is a horrible place to stop. He can't sleep with her, what about Addie? Argh update soon. And Happy Birthday!
5/17/2011 c11 Lyrical
Jeez you had me worried that she was into Oliver. I really really want her to be with Graham even though I love Oliver. Please let them end up together. Great chapter otherwise, can't wait for the next one.
Jeez you had me worried that she was into Oliver. I really really want her to be with Graham even though I love Oliver. Please let them end up together. Great chapter otherwise, can't wait for the next one.
5/17/2011 c11 madness is contagious
Ok I see, that makes sense I suppose. Haha they would kinda be related wouldn't they? Oliver is hilarious and I kinda want her to end up with him, no offense to Graham.
Ok I see, that makes sense I suppose. Haha they would kinda be related wouldn't they? Oliver is hilarious and I kinda want her to end up with him, no offense to Graham.
5/17/2011 c11 Lover I Don't Have To Love
Great chapter this is really different from the original. Wait Addie is a TA right? That's how Ryan and Victoria are her students? And grr her for interrupting their kiss. Does he really have to work or was he lying?
Great chapter this is really different from the original. Wait Addie is a TA right? That's how Ryan and Victoria are her students? And grr her for interrupting their kiss. Does he really have to work or was he lying?
5/17/2011 c11 3Unless-52
Yay! I'm soooo glad that fictionpress was fixed, they updated it and all!
I loved this chapter, by the way. So cute. It was quite funny and...different about the whole cousin ordeal...
I didn't see any mistakes-grammar and spelling-wise, so good job.
~Miyako
3Unless-52Yay! I'm soooo glad that fictionpress was fixed, they updated it and all!
I loved this chapter, by the way. So cute. It was quite funny and...different about the whole cousin ordeal...
I didn't see any mistakes-grammar and spelling-wise, so good job.
~Miyako
5/17/2011 c11 39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Not pregnant til the end? wow you really DO have a new plot :)
Great chapter :) I really enjoyed it and like where the story's heading.
And i'm still in love with Oliver lols
please update soon! :D
39Raaawr Ima DinosaurNot pregnant til the end? wow you really DO have a new plot :)
Great chapter :) I really enjoyed it and like where the story's heading.
And i'm still in love with Oliver lols
please update soon! :D
5/17/2011 c10 Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Great chapter! Tony seem's awesome :)
They have to be more than friends ;)
Great chapter! Tony seem's awesome :)
They have to be more than friends ;)
5/17/2011 c9 Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
What a bitch! I hope it gets solved soon! wait...i'm getting a giant wave of deja vu. didn't that heppen to you before?
What a bitch! I hope it gets solved soon! wait...i'm getting a giant wave of deja vu. didn't that heppen to you before?
5/17/2011 c8 Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Great chapter :) Was Oliver in Adelaides class in the original or is that new? i cant rebember ^^;
greta chapter :)
Great chapter :) Was Oliver in Adelaides class in the original or is that new? i cant rebember ^^;
greta chapter :)
5/17/2011 c7 Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
I don't care if Riordan is a sexy name. I still hate him. lol
great chapter :)
I don't care if Riordan is a sexy name. I still hate him. lol
great chapter :)