for The Unspoken Rule1/11/2011 c4 
7Pan's Grandaughter
So far, this is the best chapter yet. It is. This chapter made me smile. I may be a complete idot, but I could have sworn that Jake was older than her. Is he?
7Pan's GrandaughterSo far, this is the best chapter yet. It is. This chapter made me smile. I may be a complete idot, but I could have sworn that Jake was older than her. Is he?
1/11/2011 c4 3I'mTheSummerToYourWinter
Aw he sounds sweet,as he didn't get angry that she was randomly mean to him :)
I have exams this week too! They're such a pain :/
3I'mTheSummerToYourWinterAw he sounds sweet,as he didn't get angry that she was randomly mean to him :)
I have exams this week too! They're such a pain :/
1/11/2011 c4 1ImYours1901
Good luck with your exam/exams?
Love the story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter :)
1ImYours1901Good luck with your exam/exams?
Love the story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter :)
1/9/2011 c3 3I'mTheSummerToYourWinter
Good chapter, can't wait to see what happens between Jake and Maria :)
3I'mTheSummerToYourWinterGood chapter, can't wait to see what happens between Jake and Maria :)
1/8/2011 c1 1Spring Jasmine Flower
Wow! An awesome first chapter! I loved it! Can't wait for the next one! Update soon!
1Spring Jasmine FlowerWow! An awesome first chapter! I loved it! Can't wait for the next one! Update soon!
1/8/2011 c2 7Pan's Grandaughter
It is better than the last one. Yes, it's blunt, but it is true. I'm terribly sad that "Just My Life" is over. I enjoyed it alot, and it was very good:)
Though the two Chapters were quite good, I felt that one sentence didn't sound right. It was when Maria was talking about her friend's basement. "Her basement was awsome!" didn't sound like it fit to well. Maybe ( and this is only a suggestion) you could combine it with the next one and say something like "With the giant TV/stereo system, her basement looked, and was, awsome!" I personally believe that it would sound better.
On the upside, The caracter seems very realistic. She doesn't seem too beautiful, or too nerdy, sorta believable. I'm also wondering what her friend will say when her brother and Maria get together, and what will happen then. And I'm looking forward to reading the rest:)
7Pan's GrandaughterIt is better than the last one. Yes, it's blunt, but it is true. I'm terribly sad that "Just My Life" is over. I enjoyed it alot, and it was very good:)
Though the two Chapters were quite good, I felt that one sentence didn't sound right. It was when Maria was talking about her friend's basement. "Her basement was awsome!" didn't sound like it fit to well. Maybe ( and this is only a suggestion) you could combine it with the next one and say something like "With the giant TV/stereo system, her basement looked, and was, awsome!" I personally believe that it would sound better.
On the upside, The caracter seems very realistic. She doesn't seem too beautiful, or too nerdy, sorta believable. I'm also wondering what her friend will say when her brother and Maria get together, and what will happen then. And I'm looking forward to reading the rest:)
1/8/2011 c2 2Soonafter100
This was a relly good chapter and I am hoping, that REALLY soon you post the next chapter I can't wait to fing out what happens next...:)
2Soonafter100This was a relly good chapter and I am hoping, that REALLY soon you post the next chapter I can't wait to fing out what happens next...:)
1/7/2011 c1 2Soonafter100
Okay, I was happy/sad that Just My Life was over, and now I am happy/EXCITED...I can't wait! LET THE STORY BEGAN!
2Soonafter100Okay, I was happy/sad that Just My Life was over, and now I am happy/EXCITED...I can't wait! LET THE STORY BEGAN!