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6/21/2011 c2 4Thalia Bryne
I know there are some pink Christmas trees out there, Mary Sue should look :)I like this Tom character. I hope he grows up to be stunningly handsome and blows Mary-Sue away. I hope he blows away her ego-centric qualities. I'm really not liking this girl. Reminds me a bit of a girl I know...
6/21/2011 c1 Thalia Bryne
The tone you are using is incredibly helpful to the piece as a whole. It really shapes it up. I like the way you have described this Mary-Sue. Great start!
1/9/2011 c1 SilverIcee
So amusing! There is nothing worse than a Mary Sue. But then again, they are oh so amusing. Excellently written, as well!

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