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7/26/2013 c7 bballgirl22
sorry not logge din! But you updated! yay I love it! love ya girl, update soon!
3/27/2011 c6 2Soonafter100
I need and want more! Please post soon!
3/25/2011 c6 2Blossom of Life
Hey,

I'm really enjoying this so far. You've a few grammatical errors here and there but nothing marjor. I can't wait until you next chapter.

By the way, Danny is amzingly attractive in my mind, seriously hott. Just love a guy with black hair and blue eyes. :)
3/24/2011 c6 bballgirl22
love it! Update soon
3/16/2011 c5 9bballgirl22
oh u gotta update. again sorry i only read this but i will get around to readingn the rest :)
3/16/2011 c5 2bridgettblah
Wow, this is pretty awesome so far xD Cant wait for more!
3/14/2011 c5 2Soonafter100
I hope you plan on showing us your evil plan very very soon, or else...
3/14/2011 c5 2LDS Dreamer
Awesome! I can't wait to find out how it goes!
2/4/2011 c2 7E.Nelson
Silly person whom is myself...

Note: Danny has black hair, and not brown! Must fix this later!
2/3/2011 c4 2Soonafter100
I am realing enjoying this story, please post soon...
2/3/2011 c4 2LDS Dreamer
I love that song! I think that it is a great chapter!
2/3/2011 c4 1ChocolateCookie
I like where this is going. Mysterious children, mysterious house, mysterious prophetesse. I can't wait until we learn why she's being chased... and what's gonna happen to her and Danny. I might suggest you use less passive constructions though - they seem a bit frequent in the prologue and first chapter. Like, instead of saying, I was being chased, say, they chased me, or something like that. It makes the action seem more immediate.
2/2/2011 c3 2LDS Dreamer
Lol. Loved it! He is making me think of Hot and Cold by Katy Perry. He PMS' like a girl. Lol.
1/14/2011 c2 Kittys The Name KukiE
Danny acts like the Danny in my story...Alot...
1/14/2011 c2 2Soonafter100
Sorry to hear about your ribs, hope you get to feeling better...LOVE this story!
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