for Libera Moi7/26/2013 c7 bballgirl22
sorry not logge din! But you updated! yay I love it! love ya girl, update soon!
sorry not logge din! But you updated! yay I love it! love ya girl, update soon!
3/25/2011 c6 
2Blossom of Life
Hey,
I'm really enjoying this so far. You've a few grammatical errors here and there but nothing marjor. I can't wait until you next chapter.
By the way, Danny is amzingly attractive in my mind, seriously hott. Just love a guy with black hair and blue eyes. :)
2Blossom of LifeHey,
I'm really enjoying this so far. You've a few grammatical errors here and there but nothing marjor. I can't wait until you next chapter.
By the way, Danny is amzingly attractive in my mind, seriously hott. Just love a guy with black hair and blue eyes. :)
3/24/2011 c6 bballgirl22
love it! Update soon
love it! Update soon
3/16/2011 c5 9bballgirl22
oh u gotta update. again sorry i only read this but i will get around to readingn the rest :)
9bballgirl22oh u gotta update. again sorry i only read this but i will get around to readingn the rest :)
2/4/2011 c2 7E.Nelson
Silly person whom is myself...
Note: Danny has black hair, and not brown! Must fix this later!
7E.NelsonSilly person whom is myself...
Note: Danny has black hair, and not brown! Must fix this later!
2/3/2011 c4 1ChocolateCookie
I like where this is going. Mysterious children, mysterious house, mysterious prophetesse. I can't wait until we learn why she's being chased... and what's gonna happen to her and Danny. I might suggest you use less passive constructions though - they seem a bit frequent in the prologue and first chapter. Like, instead of saying, I was being chased, say, they chased me, or something like that. It makes the action seem more immediate.
1ChocolateCookieI like where this is going. Mysterious children, mysterious house, mysterious prophetesse. I can't wait until we learn why she's being chased... and what's gonna happen to her and Danny. I might suggest you use less passive constructions though - they seem a bit frequent in the prologue and first chapter. Like, instead of saying, I was being chased, say, they chased me, or something like that. It makes the action seem more immediate.
2/2/2011 c3 2LDS Dreamer
Lol. Loved it! He is making me think of Hot and Cold by Katy Perry. He PMS' like a girl. Lol.
2LDS DreamerLol. Loved it! He is making me think of Hot and Cold by Katy Perry. He PMS' like a girl. Lol.
1/14/2011 c2 Kittys The Name KukiE
Danny acts like the Danny in my story...Alot...
Danny acts like the Danny in my story...Alot...
1/14/2011 c2 2Soonafter100
Sorry to hear about your ribs, hope you get to feeling better...LOVE this story!
2Soonafter100Sorry to hear about your ribs, hope you get to feeling better...LOVE this story!