for Mutually Assured Destruction7/21/2024 c22 Xan
That was a wonderful end (and new beginning) to their story. I'm so happy to have finally been able to finish it, and I'm looking forward to anything you put out next, whether it ends up being on FP or somewhere else. Take care!
That was a wonderful end (and new beginning) to their story. I'm so happy to have finally been able to finish it, and I'm looking forward to anything you put out next, whether it ends up being on FP or somewhere else. Take care!
7/21/2024 c23 ljcolic
Hi
Nice ending, glad you completed this story.
I come back to FP only for my faves and got supriesd with this story. I would love to read if you end up publishing anything. Good luck
Hi
Nice ending, glad you completed this story.
I come back to FP only for my faves and got supriesd with this story. I would love to read if you end up publishing anything. Good luck
7/1/2024 c22 AlysonSerenaStone
I have really enjoyed these last few chapters! Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see how it ends!
I have really enjoyed these last few chapters! Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see how it ends!
6/19/2024 c21 Xan
Wow. I actually didn't know that a lot of the details of Riley's emotional trauma were based on your experiences. At the risk of sounding presumptuous, I think I understand better why you took a break and, more importantly, why you came back after all this time. I am glad to hear you have had many great things come your way since then.
I was excited to see another update, and I was enjoying reading this chapter, as I have enjoyed reading the story thus far, and happy to see things heading in a favourable direction for Riley (and her prospects with Asher). I definitely was not expecting to hear from Jay, but I liked the inclusion of this turn - it shows him as a person, like Riley and Asher and everyone else, capable of shades of gray.
And then I was taken aback by the A/N (in a good way!). It made me stop and think, about the story, about relationships, about life, and about how much my own life has changed in the eleven years since I first picked up this story - how far I've come.
I've gained a much deeper appreciation for your story, beyond the plot, the writing, the characters, and I can only thank you for continuing to share this deeply personal journey with us, your readers.
Wow. I actually didn't know that a lot of the details of Riley's emotional trauma were based on your experiences. At the risk of sounding presumptuous, I think I understand better why you took a break and, more importantly, why you came back after all this time. I am glad to hear you have had many great things come your way since then.
I was excited to see another update, and I was enjoying reading this chapter, as I have enjoyed reading the story thus far, and happy to see things heading in a favourable direction for Riley (and her prospects with Asher). I definitely was not expecting to hear from Jay, but I liked the inclusion of this turn - it shows him as a person, like Riley and Asher and everyone else, capable of shades of gray.
And then I was taken aback by the A/N (in a good way!). It made me stop and think, about the story, about relationships, about life, and about how much my own life has changed in the eleven years since I first picked up this story - how far I've come.
I've gained a much deeper appreciation for your story, beyond the plot, the writing, the characters, and I can only thank you for continuing to share this deeply personal journey with us, your readers.
5/26/2024 c18 Xan
"Hope springs eternal"... That's a succinct way to put how I feel about this story, both the update status and the relationship status of Riley and Asher. I'm so glad you're back and that the years of checking back on this story from time to time paid off.
There's a big shift in tone in these new chapters (everyone's a lot happier now, love to see it), but you have kept the characters quintessentially themselves and I'm excited to see where their personal growth takes them.
"Hope springs eternal"... That's a succinct way to put how I feel about this story, both the update status and the relationship status of Riley and Asher. I'm so glad you're back and that the years of checking back on this story from time to time paid off.
There's a big shift in tone in these new chapters (everyone's a lot happier now, love to see it), but you have kept the characters quintessentially themselves and I'm excited to see where their personal growth takes them.
5/22/2024 c13 Xan
NO. WAY. I can't believe it's back! I'm dying to continue reading RIGHT THIS SECOND but it's late, but I had to comment that seeing that "Next" arrow after Chapter 12 absolutely made my night
NO. WAY. I can't believe it's back! I'm dying to continue reading RIGHT THIS SECOND but it's late, but I had to comment that seeing that "Next" arrow after Chapter 12 absolutely made my night
4/18/2024 c13 ljcolic
Nice to get to read this again and you stil got it. We, the older ones, are glad to go back to our younger days of reading good fics
Nice to get to read this again and you stil got it. We, the older ones, are glad to go back to our younger days of reading good fics
6/11/2019 c12 
2stunningaurora
aweee! this plot is so good, i know you haven't updated in like 5-6 years, but it would be so awesome if you started to update this story again! i really wanna know what happens to riley and asher!~
2stunningauroraaweee! this plot is so good, i know you haven't updated in like 5-6 years, but it would be so awesome if you started to update this story again! i really wanna know what happens to riley and asher!~
10/31/2018 c12 Xan
I love this story! I keep coming back to reread it all because it's so good. I hope things are okay and there will be an update soon! 3 I haven't stopped believing
I love this story! I keep coming back to reread it all because it's so good. I hope things are okay and there will be an update soon! 3 I haven't stopped believing
11/6/2017 c12 Evil in Hood
Come back child, finish the story
Come back child, finish the story
6/3/2016 c12 Guest
This story is amazing! Please please please update! Can't wait to read on.
This story is amazing! Please please please update! Can't wait to read on.