8/20/2013 c11 15thenifoundfivedollars
I've been SUCH a crummy reviewer lately. Gah. Sorry. But I did read this chapter on my phone, and I lovelovelove everything about this recent turn of events. Although I've since read Chapter 12, at the time I was soaking in all the adorable A/R action. They really have so much in common, and even though I need them to shut up and bang already - I must admit, the cuddling was so, darn cute. :D
I've been SUCH a crummy reviewer lately. Gah. Sorry. But I did read this chapter on my phone, and I lovelovelove everything about this recent turn of events. Although I've since read Chapter 12, at the time I was soaking in all the adorable A/R action. They really have so much in common, and even though I need them to shut up and bang already - I must admit, the cuddling was so, darn cute. :D
8/16/2013 c12 Choukou
GAHHHHHH! I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next one because I can't just not know how they make up! And if you don't update soon *shakes fist* I'm just kidding, but not really. Unless they have amazing makeup sex that you put that M rating to good use, then I will allow a long wait period (I don't know how I shall survive waiting!) But I am so hooked on your story.
GAHHHHHH! I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next one because I can't just not know how they make up! And if you don't update soon *shakes fist* I'm just kidding, but not really. Unless they have amazing makeup sex that you put that M rating to good use, then I will allow a long wait period (I don't know how I shall survive waiting!) But I am so hooked on your story.
8/16/2013 c12 Z-4Charmed
A WONDERFUL CHAPTER! have no words to describe it :) just fantastic :)
thanks, and PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ update soon coz i can't wait for it after this chapter,, :))
A WONDERFUL CHAPTER! have no words to describe it :) just fantastic :)
thanks, and PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ update soon coz i can't wait for it after this chapter,, :))
8/14/2013 c12 Arwin Fred
Poor Asher, I've never felt so bad for a fictional character before.
Poor Asher, I've never felt so bad for a fictional character before.
8/13/2013 c12 LondonLi
I'm so glad you're still posting on this story! I love your fics, the way you write your characters and I've read enough to trust where you're going with this. Obviously Asher and Riley have much deeper emotions for each other than they are aware of. Thanks so much for the update!
I'm so glad you're still posting on this story! I love your fics, the way you write your characters and I've read enough to trust where you're going with this. Obviously Asher and Riley have much deeper emotions for each other than they are aware of. Thanks so much for the update!
8/13/2013 c12 Guest
Noooo..nobody's mad I'm sure...Really love Riley's character...like it that she is so strong...!..love ur story! Most females in these kind of college stories are like sooooooo pitiful...glad that she is NOT like them!
Noooo..nobody's mad I'm sure...Really love Riley's character...like it that she is so strong...!..love ur story! Most females in these kind of college stories are like sooooooo pitiful...glad that she is NOT like them!
8/13/2013 c12 NverSayNver
Loved it! Update soon!
Loved it! Update soon!
8/13/2013 c12 1DuchessYappingDog
It's okay! The more and harder they fight, the better the make-up sex, right? Well hopefully Asher doesn't give up. She may be pissed as hell right now, but she was just turning a corner regarding him. Maybe she will calm down in... A month. Hahahaha.
It's okay! The more and harder they fight, the better the make-up sex, right? Well hopefully Asher doesn't give up. She may be pissed as hell right now, but she was just turning a corner regarding him. Maybe she will calm down in... A month. Hahahaha.
8/13/2013 c12 1blackbirds fly
Actually I was thinking of this early today! (or should I say yesterday, because it's 4:30 AM...) And I remember hoping that there wouldn't be a morning after confrontation type thing, and there wasn't! It made me so excited and them BAM all that happened.
Holy crap Asher made me SO MAD. Like DAMMIT ASHER YOU HAD ONE JOB. Honestly, he had some sort of right to say something to Clara because I would have done that if someone had done that to my best friend, but at the same time he went waaaaay too far. So Riley definitely had the right to say something back and then he called her a slut and then the world exploded and yep. I was really glad that she walked away at the end of the chapter because it would have probably been a little too soon to reconcile, or even address the situation. All in all, I DO enjoy a drama-filled chapter and this was definitely that. Also I saw some of the physical descriptions going on in there! Can't wait for the next update.
(Also my little brother had gone away for the weekend and apparently he had gone to Ithaca but I'm not sure how because he's 15 and it's 230 miles from Philly...)
Actually I was thinking of this early today! (or should I say yesterday, because it's 4:30 AM...) And I remember hoping that there wouldn't be a morning after confrontation type thing, and there wasn't! It made me so excited and them BAM all that happened.
Holy crap Asher made me SO MAD. Like DAMMIT ASHER YOU HAD ONE JOB. Honestly, he had some sort of right to say something to Clara because I would have done that if someone had done that to my best friend, but at the same time he went waaaaay too far. So Riley definitely had the right to say something back and then he called her a slut and then the world exploded and yep. I was really glad that she walked away at the end of the chapter because it would have probably been a little too soon to reconcile, or even address the situation. All in all, I DO enjoy a drama-filled chapter and this was definitely that. Also I saw some of the physical descriptions going on in there! Can't wait for the next update.
(Also my little brother had gone away for the weekend and apparently he had gone to Ithaca but I'm not sure how because he's 15 and it's 230 miles from Philly...)
8/13/2013 c12 meaganmarie5
God, this story guts me!
I really liked seeing how a one night stand could hurt a guy instead of a girl, plus even though he was a dick, I loved how Asher stood up for his friend.
I love Riley but her temper is starting to piss me off. Sometimes she just needs to chill.
My heart just freakin ached when Asher went after Riley at the end of the chapter. Ahhhh! I can't take much more!
I can't wait for the next chapter.
And you definitely get my SKOW vote :)
God, this story guts me!
I really liked seeing how a one night stand could hurt a guy instead of a girl, plus even though he was a dick, I loved how Asher stood up for his friend.
I love Riley but her temper is starting to piss me off. Sometimes she just needs to chill.
My heart just freakin ached when Asher went after Riley at the end of the chapter. Ahhhh! I can't take much more!
I can't wait for the next chapter.
And you definitely get my SKOW vote :)
8/13/2013 c1 shortwinters219
OMG just when Riley was finally warming up to Asher! So frustrating! But also really good ;)
OMG just when Riley was finally warming up to Asher! So frustrating! But also really good ;)
8/13/2013 c12 3Forever Siriusly Sirius
...no. You did not just do that to Riley and Asher. *cries*
SHE ACTUALLY SAID SHE WOULD BE WILLING TO BE FRIENDS. AND THEN YOU JUST I JUST HE JUST SHE-*breathes*
I did kind of like the angst though, as sad as it is that once again one step forward is two steps back, I love reading riley and asher argue.
He was a jerk though, the stuff he said...
I like though that Clara's character is undergoing a change, some development i guess (not to say she sisnt a developed character because she is, I'm just flailing for another word). This will be an interesting plotline, methinks. seeing how she matures (would you call it maturing? idk) or attempts to overcome her commitment issues, if she tries.
I love that Riley slapped asher, and that she stood up for her friend , just like asher stood up for his. I also like thats RIley didn't step in right away, she gave clara a chance to defend herself first.
["Please, Riley," he whispered, his brown eyes almost pleading with me. "Please talk to me."]
You really know how to tug on my heartsrings don't you? merlin I just *huggles Asher really really really close and then proceeds to lecture RIley on my she should have just kissed him and said she forgives him and asdghjko9*
Yes I know I am a romantic idealist ;P I've been told many times hahah
WHY RILEY ASHER FOLLOWED YOU HE WAS PRACTICALLY BEGGING AND YOU BROKE HIS HEART AND MY HEART AND YOUR OWN HEART AND JUST
I'm inconsolable and drowning in a pool of heart broken feels. being a fangirl follower of brillaint stories makes life so hard. lol.
[By the time we'd awoken on that Saturday morning, he had rolled back over until he was nearly falling out of the bed.] that made me giggle, and disappointed me both at the same time. RIley, deal with you intimacy issues already! Then go snog the life out of asher! )
I'm dying for the next chapter now. I'm hoping for a reunion, but idk that may be a tad unrealistic and idealistic of me xD
Great job :) btw I voted in the SKoW awards :)
...no. You did not just do that to Riley and Asher. *cries*
SHE ACTUALLY SAID SHE WOULD BE WILLING TO BE FRIENDS. AND THEN YOU JUST I JUST HE JUST SHE-*breathes*
I did kind of like the angst though, as sad as it is that once again one step forward is two steps back, I love reading riley and asher argue.
He was a jerk though, the stuff he said...
I like though that Clara's character is undergoing a change, some development i guess (not to say she sisnt a developed character because she is, I'm just flailing for another word). This will be an interesting plotline, methinks. seeing how she matures (would you call it maturing? idk) or attempts to overcome her commitment issues, if she tries.
I love that Riley slapped asher, and that she stood up for her friend , just like asher stood up for his. I also like thats RIley didn't step in right away, she gave clara a chance to defend herself first.
["Please, Riley," he whispered, his brown eyes almost pleading with me. "Please talk to me."]
You really know how to tug on my heartsrings don't you? merlin I just *huggles Asher really really really close and then proceeds to lecture RIley on my she should have just kissed him and said she forgives him and asdghjko9*
Yes I know I am a romantic idealist ;P I've been told many times hahah
WHY RILEY ASHER FOLLOWED YOU HE WAS PRACTICALLY BEGGING AND YOU BROKE HIS HEART AND MY HEART AND YOUR OWN HEART AND JUST
I'm inconsolable and drowning in a pool of heart broken feels. being a fangirl follower of brillaint stories makes life so hard. lol.
[By the time we'd awoken on that Saturday morning, he had rolled back over until he was nearly falling out of the bed.] that made me giggle, and disappointed me both at the same time. RIley, deal with you intimacy issues already! Then go snog the life out of asher! )
I'm dying for the next chapter now. I'm hoping for a reunion, but idk that may be a tad unrealistic and idealistic of me xD
Great job :) btw I voted in the SKoW awards :)
8/12/2013 c12 Raya
OMG! they were finally getting along, but I feel like this was needed. Riley needed to revisit the whole scenario since she never took the time to understand how Asher felt about that particular situation.
Anyway, I am so happy you updated 2x in a month! :D LOVE THIS STORY!
OMG! they were finally getting along, but I feel like this was needed. Riley needed to revisit the whole scenario since she never took the time to understand how Asher felt about that particular situation.
Anyway, I am so happy you updated 2x in a month! :D LOVE THIS STORY!