
8/29/2020 c5 NeonRayz
This story is seriously amazing! Can't wait to read the rest!
This story is seriously amazing! Can't wait to read the rest!
12/26/2018 c19 knownasociate
Great story! I just love the dialogue!
Great story! I just love the dialogue!
11/17/2018 c37 omgosh
amazing story steamy beautiful please let happy together they deserve so much please please please continue with the sequel im so excited
amazing story steamy beautiful please let happy together they deserve so much please please please continue with the sequel im so excited
9/6/2017 c4
4R. Ficst
"a ribbon draped over a tree, or a paper swan perched on a boulder"
Such perfect imagery, and clever word use. I love your writing, and I love Baisyl's voice in your writing of his chapters.

"a ribbon draped over a tree, or a paper swan perched on a boulder"
Such perfect imagery, and clever word use. I love your writing, and I love Baisyl's voice in your writing of his chapters.
9/6/2017 c3 R. Ficst
Back for a re-read and of course re-loving it :)
Love Rhyan's visit. It is so important that he let the bodyguard know that his first mission was to protect Baisyl's life, and that a disappearance would be forgiven if necessary, despite the preferred goal. Great brother!
Back for a re-read and of course re-loving it :)
Love Rhyan's visit. It is so important that he let the bodyguard know that his first mission was to protect Baisyl's life, and that a disappearance would be forgiven if necessary, despite the preferred goal. Great brother!
3/20/2015 c1 Moka-girl
I really like how this started. Well-written, too.
I really like how this started. Well-written, too.
12/14/2014 c20 Hean
...chinese.
...chinese.
10/21/2014 c20 Guest
do you speak mandarin?
do you speak mandarin?
10/16/2014 c6 Guest
you should publish this thing
you should publish this thing
6/10/2014 c37 Anon
I don't know what I was expecting from the summary, but it certainly wasn't what I got, and I mean that in the best way possible. I don't think a summary could even contain the amounts of sheer creative FUN this story has. I love the world you've created.
I really enjoyed reading about Kedean and Baisyl- and I hope that you get the inspiration/time to work on the sequel (especially because that means more Natara, right?)- and I am fantastically invested in all these characters. The ending was heart-wrenching, but I am telling myself that OF COURSE they are going to get back together and end up living happily ever after because otherwise ending here would just be too sad.
I don't know what I was expecting from the summary, but it certainly wasn't what I got, and I mean that in the best way possible. I don't think a summary could even contain the amounts of sheer creative FUN this story has. I love the world you've created.
I really enjoyed reading about Kedean and Baisyl- and I hope that you get the inspiration/time to work on the sequel (especially because that means more Natara, right?)- and I am fantastically invested in all these characters. The ending was heart-wrenching, but I am telling myself that OF COURSE they are going to get back together and end up living happily ever after because otherwise ending here would just be too sad.