7/21/2014 c1 2bubublacz
OOOOHHHHH! I really love your story! *clicking the favorite button* I'm so glad that I stumbled into this! I would love to read more if it wasn't way past my bedtime :/
OOOOHHHHH! I really love your story! *clicking the favorite button* I'm so glad that I stumbled into this! I would love to read more if it wasn't way past my bedtime :/
12/4/2013 c1 AngryAnon
This entire story was completely sexist, and I was disgusted with it. I mean it wasn't just a little sexist, it was FILLED with sexism and misogyny. I thought it might be fun or good to read, but the pure sexism and condescension from the male characters absolutely ruined it for me.
This entire story was completely sexist, and I was disgusted with it. I mean it wasn't just a little sexist, it was FILLED with sexism and misogyny. I thought it might be fun or good to read, but the pure sexism and condescension from the male characters absolutely ruined it for me.
12/18/2012 c1 chells319
Wow. I read this entire thing in one go and am blown away. I literally cannot comprehend the fact that this story only has 38 reviews at the time that I am writing this. It deserves to be read and enjoyed by as many eyes as possible. It is beautifully and intricately written, and all the pieces click together neatly. You have real real talent, and I am so happy that I stumbled across this masterpiece. Thank you!
Wow. I read this entire thing in one go and am blown away. I literally cannot comprehend the fact that this story only has 38 reviews at the time that I am writing this. It deserves to be read and enjoyed by as many eyes as possible. It is beautifully and intricately written, and all the pieces click together neatly. You have real real talent, and I am so happy that I stumbled across this masterpiece. Thank you!
10/20/2012 c1 2PotOfGoldXxx
I've read this story loads of times and the part where Damian is helping Sofi when they just meet is always going to be my favorite :) Love it! Keep up the awesome writing 3
I've read this story loads of times and the part where Damian is helping Sofi when they just meet is always going to be my favorite :) Love it! Keep up the awesome writing 3
9/16/2012 c1 1MsQueenOfTheWorld
This was a lovely story that I thoroughly enjoyed! Though I would love to have seen more of a back story to most of these characters and this war as well. Also, I feel like too many characters were introduced at the beginning at once. It was rather difficult to keep up with at first. Overall, I think you have a good storyline, but a few more details would be nice. Lovely job otherwise! :)
This was a lovely story that I thoroughly enjoyed! Though I would love to have seen more of a back story to most of these characters and this war as well. Also, I feel like too many characters were introduced at the beginning at once. It was rather difficult to keep up with at first. Overall, I think you have a good storyline, but a few more details would be nice. Lovely job otherwise! :)
8/4/2012 c1 1Sachi Nehme
Wow. This was simply amazing. This... it blew my mind. I wasn't even aware that I had been reading for a couple of hours until I finished.
You're an amazing writer, and I'm going to eagerly look at your other works!
Wow. This was simply amazing. This... it blew my mind. I wasn't even aware that I had been reading for a couple of hours until I finished.
You're an amazing writer, and I'm going to eagerly look at your other works!
5/1/2012 c1 5Arya Yamamoto
Wow this is amazing, i read the entire story in one go. But damn it was worth it. The entire story had a tight structure and flowed like a dream. Thanks for sharing such an amazing story.
Wow this is amazing, i read the entire story in one go. But damn it was worth it. The entire story had a tight structure and flowed like a dream. Thanks for sharing such an amazing story.
2/29/2012 c1 barehearted
I know it's cliche but I actually did just sign up a minute ago to review this story. Or perhaps not review (I'm horrid at typing on a phone) but at least say thank you for the amazing story. I loved the retorts between characters and Dusty is adorable; I'll definitely have to read his story next! But what really drove me to sign up was my need to second the sentiment that you should have more reviews, haha. I think you did a great job developing Sofia with her vulnerability yet intelligence and inner strength, as in I don't often see that carried out this well (girls continuously in denial annoy me to no end) and I loved it! And Damian - happy sigh. Now that I've been reduced to a fangirling state I'll just go back to my original thanks and you're awesome! :D
/scurries off to read more of your works
I know it's cliche but I actually did just sign up a minute ago to review this story. Or perhaps not review (I'm horrid at typing on a phone) but at least say thank you for the amazing story. I loved the retorts between characters and Dusty is adorable; I'll definitely have to read his story next! But what really drove me to sign up was my need to second the sentiment that you should have more reviews, haha. I think you did a great job developing Sofia with her vulnerability yet intelligence and inner strength, as in I don't often see that carried out this well (girls continuously in denial annoy me to no end) and I loved it! And Damian - happy sigh. Now that I've been reduced to a fangirling state I'll just go back to my original thanks and you're awesome! :D
/scurries off to read more of your works
1/7/2012 c1 taintedLullaby
Oooooooohhh this was really really good! I loved it! So interesting. I can't wait to read more! The plot is one of the most original ones I've read. I loved your characters they were really amazing and fun to read and well developed. I've been reading this story non stop since like six (it is now one here) and my eyes hurt from the strain but it was sooo worth it! You are a great writer. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Great work! :D
Oooooooohhh this was really really good! I loved it! So interesting. I can't wait to read more! The plot is one of the most original ones I've read. I loved your characters they were really amazing and fun to read and well developed. I've been reading this story non stop since like six (it is now one here) and my eyes hurt from the strain but it was sooo worth it! You are a great writer. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Great work! :D
8/5/2011 c1 1DarkAngel830
Such an amazing story! I don't get how you don't get more views! You could get this published!
Such an amazing story! I don't get how you don't get more views! You could get this published!
6/22/2011 c1 1Ben Tramsami
Oh. My. God. That was amazing, wonderful, and fantastic. I want you to know that you are an excellent author and that this story is simply brilliant. I love how it ended, not with a cliffhanger, but instead with promise for the future. I also love how it was almost enough to make me cry. Stories that make me cry are nice, but stories that almost make me cry are better. It's hard to explain, but basically I'm trying to say is that I loved reading this and that I sincerely hope you keep writing.
I wish you the best on your writing journey, dear author. :)
Oh. My. God. That was amazing, wonderful, and fantastic. I want you to know that you are an excellent author and that this story is simply brilliant. I love how it ended, not with a cliffhanger, but instead with promise for the future. I also love how it was almost enough to make me cry. Stories that make me cry are nice, but stories that almost make me cry are better. It's hard to explain, but basically I'm trying to say is that I loved reading this and that I sincerely hope you keep writing.
I wish you the best on your writing journey, dear author. :)
6/16/2011 c1 Dead Deactivated
Wow this was amazing. Mind boggling. The first story that was sci-fi ish that kept my interest, not the normal ones I read but wow. I am honestly stunned. If there is a sequel I am reading it. And you might want to split it up in chapters... It would make it an easier read, but I still love it alot. Keep up the good work.
Wow this was amazing. Mind boggling. The first story that was sci-fi ish that kept my interest, not the normal ones I read but wow. I am honestly stunned. If there is a sequel I am reading it. And you might want to split it up in chapters... It would make it an easier read, but I still love it alot. Keep up the good work.
6/6/2011 c1 5Marialousia
I'm so glad I came across this story!
It's quite unique, the ideas, the concepts. Even though stories in which vampires are involved seem overly done know, this one was really good and I enjoyed reading it.
You truly have a talent and I'm definitely going to recommend it to my friends.
- Marilou
I'm so glad I came across this story!
It's quite unique, the ideas, the concepts. Even though stories in which vampires are involved seem overly done know, this one was really good and I enjoyed reading it.
You truly have a talent and I'm definitely going to recommend it to my friends.
- Marilou