for Persephone2/7/2013 c1 im
Wow,this story has so much depth than I initially for the way you pictured her emotions-it felt real and even if it is short story I connected with the main character!:)
Wow,this story has so much depth than I initially for the way you pictured her emotions-it felt real and even if it is short story I connected with the main character!:)
6/8/2011 c1 rockpunk92
Wow, this was very well written! I kinda want a full story out of this, but it's also fine the way it is! But know if you wanted to expand it there would definitely be readers out there.
Wow, this was very well written! I kinda want a full story out of this, but it's also fine the way it is! But know if you wanted to expand it there would definitely be readers out there.
1/13/2011 c1 dramalover21
Hey! I liked the story. It was short and sweet. I also liked the title reference to the myth of Hades and Persephone; I love that story. I'm actually reading a fanfic of it on fanfiction right now now. I think the story had a happy ending. Even if she died, she was still going to be with someone that cared about her when she passed on.
Hey! I liked the story. It was short and sweet. I also liked the title reference to the myth of Hades and Persephone; I love that story. I'm actually reading a fanfic of it on fanfiction right now now. I think the story had a happy ending. Even if she died, she was still going to be with someone that cared about her when she passed on.