for Nightmare of a Dream1/13/2011 c1 
5The Lucy Program
This was really powerful. Short and so strong. The rhyme scheme and the meter definitely add to the strength behind this piece, as well as a sense of eeriness.
Fantastic job.
-TLP.
5The Lucy ProgramThis was really powerful. Short and so strong. The rhyme scheme and the meter definitely add to the strength behind this piece, as well as a sense of eeriness.
Fantastic job.
-TLP.
1/13/2011 c1 7erase.me.away
Wow, that is a deep poem. I loved it, it was touching, and i guess it does kind of bring sadness. Good job! Continue to write more, i'll be cheering you on! :)
7erase.me.awayWow, that is a deep poem. I loved it, it was touching, and i guess it does kind of bring sadness. Good job! Continue to write more, i'll be cheering you on! :)