for Always Dandelions3/21/2013 c22 
2xxjoceyuxx
Ever chapter seems to make my heart ache whether it be in a good way or bad. I love how clear the emotion comes across in this story, and how her pain is so tangible.
I don't know if you did this purposely but I noticed that both this chapter and the last one ended in her turning to drugs to help dull the pain which I found interesting.
There's so many avenues for her go down now especially since she's beyond her breaking point with losing Gavin. And I'm glad that this chapter focused on Gavin, even though it was another loss for her, he is such an essential part of her life and maybe my memory isn't completely accurate but I feel like he hasn't been mentioned in a while.
So excited to see what direction she takes after all this heartbreak! Especially with how she chooses to cope with everything that has happened
2xxjoceyuxxEver chapter seems to make my heart ache whether it be in a good way or bad. I love how clear the emotion comes across in this story, and how her pain is so tangible.
I don't know if you did this purposely but I noticed that both this chapter and the last one ended in her turning to drugs to help dull the pain which I found interesting.
There's so many avenues for her go down now especially since she's beyond her breaking point with losing Gavin. And I'm glad that this chapter focused on Gavin, even though it was another loss for her, he is such an essential part of her life and maybe my memory isn't completely accurate but I feel like he hasn't been mentioned in a while.
So excited to see what direction she takes after all this heartbreak! Especially with how she chooses to cope with everything that has happened
3/21/2013 c22 skye real
How sad. I hope Adrian makes an appearance to comfort her even if she doesn't want him around. Awesome chapter. You really brought out the emotions of your characters it almost feels like they are in the same place as the reader. Can't wait for your next update.
How sad. I hope Adrian makes an appearance to comfort her even if she doesn't want him around. Awesome chapter. You really brought out the emotions of your characters it almost feels like they are in the same place as the reader. Can't wait for your next update.
3/21/2013 c22 4AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrick
Really angry with Kessler and I hope Jenny gets help from Adrian with getting Gavin back. Feel so sorry for Jenny too :(
4AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrickReally angry with Kessler and I hope Jenny gets help from Adrian with getting Gavin back. Feel so sorry for Jenny too :(
3/21/2013 c22 1nove1198
This story is among those that remind me why I love books and literature and writing. It rends my heart, twists it into little pieces. But it should, if it's going to be gritty, real, and brutally honest. Thank you, thank you, for writing something so real it bleeds and I bleed with it.
I am hoping hard for Jenny and Adrian, and that Adrian will use his wealth to win Gavin back for him and Jenny. I can hardly wait for the next update!
1nove1198This story is among those that remind me why I love books and literature and writing. It rends my heart, twists it into little pieces. But it should, if it's going to be gritty, real, and brutally honest. Thank you, thank you, for writing something so real it bleeds and I bleed with it.
I am hoping hard for Jenny and Adrian, and that Adrian will use his wealth to win Gavin back for him and Jenny. I can hardly wait for the next update!
3/21/2013 c22 Tipsintteri
Oh no, my heart's breaking for Jenny. But thanks for this, I can't wait for the next update :)
Oh no, my heart's breaking for Jenny. But thanks for this, I can't wait for the next update :)
3/20/2013 c21 bananagirl333
I need it to be updated soon. I just finished rereading it because i am that desperate. I love this book. The writing is phenomenal, there are some parts that are just so beautiful or profound that i just sit there and read them multiple times. Please keep writing it. It is a story filled with so much.
I need it to be updated soon. I just finished rereading it because i am that desperate. I love this book. The writing is phenomenal, there are some parts that are just so beautiful or profound that i just sit there and read them multiple times. Please keep writing it. It is a story filled with so much.
3/7/2013 c1 PD
please say you have been writing instead of given up the story...
please say you have been writing instead of given up the story...
2/27/2013 c21 10S L Siwik
omfg i love this chapter to pieces especially jenny in this chapter. you couldnt have wrote this chapter more perfectly from jennys pov she was absolutely right what she said to him. i want to invite her over and hang out with me..either shes going to be with connor, be on her own, or adrian will hire the best lawyer to help her not lose her brother and weasle himself back into her good graces. you cant write the next chapter fast enough im loving hating adrian right now
10S L Siwikomfg i love this chapter to pieces especially jenny in this chapter. you couldnt have wrote this chapter more perfectly from jennys pov she was absolutely right what she said to him. i want to invite her over and hang out with me..either shes going to be with connor, be on her own, or adrian will hire the best lawyer to help her not lose her brother and weasle himself back into her good graces. you cant write the next chapter fast enough im loving hating adrian right now
2/24/2013 c21 Mary
Best story I've found on the internet hands down. Your characters are real and 3 dimensional. They are consistent and only continue to unfurl revealing deeper layers that make them seem so alive I could reach out and touch them. I love the true emotion that I've found in them as well. Some people try to write these type of scenes but they fall short at finding a way to really express the wrenching emotions these scenes call for. But as someone who has gone through some similar situations you really have gotten it right. Please continue to write. I will continue to read.
Best story I've found on the internet hands down. Your characters are real and 3 dimensional. They are consistent and only continue to unfurl revealing deeper layers that make them seem so alive I could reach out and touch them. I love the true emotion that I've found in them as well. Some people try to write these type of scenes but they fall short at finding a way to really express the wrenching emotions these scenes call for. But as someone who has gone through some similar situations you really have gotten it right. Please continue to write. I will continue to read.
2/23/2013 c1 PD
please update soon, i can't wait for the next chapter
please update soon, i can't wait for the next chapter