
1/18/2013 c21
2h2ocean
This was a great chapter :) I hope they get back together, but I dunno it would be interesting too if she got together with Connor, know what I mean? Instant love triangle. :3 keep up the good work :D i love it!

This was a great chapter :) I hope they get back together, but I dunno it would be interesting too if she got together with Connor, know what I mean? Instant love triangle. :3 keep up the good work :D i love it!
1/18/2013 c21
2vmursili
I'm not kidding when I tell you tears just came out of my eyes. Makes me a sap too huh? Can't wait for the next chapter! Please let it be soon!

I'm not kidding when I tell you tears just came out of my eyes. Makes me a sap too huh? Can't wait for the next chapter! Please let it be soon!
1/18/2013 c21
17Anehalia
I cried too. The bastard. I wanted to hit him too. Maybe he didn't directly lie to her, but he as good as lied to her. Poor Jenny. I loved the way you wrote this chapter. It felt so real. So very real, and the reactions of the characters were perfect for the situation.
By the way, is her brother with his father now? I thought he was still living with her? It's been awhile...

I cried too. The bastard. I wanted to hit him too. Maybe he didn't directly lie to her, but he as good as lied to her. Poor Jenny. I loved the way you wrote this chapter. It felt so real. So very real, and the reactions of the characters were perfect for the situation.
By the way, is her brother with his father now? I thought he was still living with her? It's been awhile...
1/18/2013 c21
15angelsinstead
This is so sad. I am glad that Jenny gave Adrian the chance to try to explain. I hope they can find their way back to each other. I know they need each other. They are soulmates as Jenny thought of fleetingly. More soon please. :)

This is so sad. I am glad that Jenny gave Adrian the chance to try to explain. I hope they can find their way back to each other. I know they need each other. They are soulmates as Jenny thought of fleetingly. More soon please. :)
1/18/2013 c21 vipreirei
NOOOOOOOOOO!
That was such a difficult chapter to read, I can't imagine how hard that must've been to write! so emotional, it was beautiful. honestly, though I understand where she is coming from and I KNOW Adrian is in the wrong I just... damn, that is such a horrible position to be put in.
ADRIAN HOW COULD YOU?!
I think if I were in that situation I would've said the same thing because no matter how much I love that person, that kind of betrayal... would need a lot of time for self reflection and re-evaluation of the situation and one's own feelings before anything could make sense.
ah, now I really can't wait to see what'll happen. thank you so much for sharing.
-rei
NOOOOOOOOOO!
That was such a difficult chapter to read, I can't imagine how hard that must've been to write! so emotional, it was beautiful. honestly, though I understand where she is coming from and I KNOW Adrian is in the wrong I just... damn, that is such a horrible position to be put in.
ADRIAN HOW COULD YOU?!
I think if I were in that situation I would've said the same thing because no matter how much I love that person, that kind of betrayal... would need a lot of time for self reflection and re-evaluation of the situation and one's own feelings before anything could make sense.
ah, now I really can't wait to see what'll happen. thank you so much for sharing.
-rei
1/18/2013 c21 Figgalina
Wow, the anguish in both of them just fell off the page. Well done. Teary-eyed here, too.
Wow, the anguish in both of them just fell off the page. Well done. Teary-eyed here, too.
1/15/2013 c20 happy anon
its beautiful please update soon.
its beautiful please update soon.
1/13/2013 c20 noface
I greatly adored this chapter. This is such a great twist. Please update soon!
I greatly adored this chapter. This is such a great twist. Please update soon!
1/15/2013 c20
4Gothic-innocence16
Oh my god! I can't believe he's married this is crazy insane. This story just got a whole lot more interesting but seriously wow, I feel so bad for Jenny. I would hate for that to happen to me. Update soon.

Oh my god! I can't believe he's married this is crazy insane. This story just got a whole lot more interesting but seriously wow, I feel so bad for Jenny. I would hate for that to happen to me. Update soon.
1/14/2013 c20 Caverage
I'm completely engrossed and have read from the beginning to this chapter for at least an hour straight. I commend you for the well developed plot and characters! Keep up the good work, I hope you update soon :)
I'm completely engrossed and have read from the beginning to this chapter for at least an hour straight. I commend you for the well developed plot and characters! Keep up the good work, I hope you update soon :)
1/12/2013 c20 WishesOnStars
Wow...It was such an intense chapter and with the music I was listening to, I even cried. How could he have done that, I still can't believe it...
You have done a wonderful job describing that final scene, I haven't seen any mistakes and all I can say is that I hope you'll finish the next chapter and post it soon, because I can't wait for it to come!
Wow...It was such an intense chapter and with the music I was listening to, I even cried. How could he have done that, I still can't believe it...
You have done a wonderful job describing that final scene, I haven't seen any mistakes and all I can say is that I hope you'll finish the next chapter and post it soon, because I can't wait for it to come!
1/11/2013 c1 Guest
omg WHAT THE FUCK HE'S MARRIED
noooooooooooooo ;_;
i want them to be happy
omg WHAT THE FUCK HE'S MARRIED
noooooooooooooo ;_;
i want them to be happy