
12/3/2012 c18 PD
loved the chapter, but i didn't undestand the meaning of the dream. Update soon please
loved the chapter, but i didn't undestand the meaning of the dream. Update soon please
12/4/2012 c19 cat10985
HOLY CRAP! first, i was wondering when you would be back! lol.. and how anyone and i mean anyone could be bored with this story at all, is crazy! this is suck a great story even the plot development chapters! so no worries. So i am FREAKING OUT! Sign what PAPERS!? is he married! god i hope not! that would suck! and i know jenny, and she would run even if they aren't together. So i am dying to see what happens! so i hope for another update soon! before the new year!? maybe? pretty please... :)
HOLY CRAP! first, i was wondering when you would be back! lol.. and how anyone and i mean anyone could be bored with this story at all, is crazy! this is suck a great story even the plot development chapters! so no worries. So i am FREAKING OUT! Sign what PAPERS!? is he married! god i hope not! that would suck! and i know jenny, and she would run even if they aren't together. So i am dying to see what happens! so i hope for another update soon! before the new year!? maybe? pretty please... :)
12/4/2012 c19
1DuchessYappingDog
Sign the papers? Maybe he had been married before and his "wife" won't sign the divorce papers? Hmm. Or maybe something to do with his mother. I don't remember if she is alive or not.

Sign the papers? Maybe he had been married before and his "wife" won't sign the divorce papers? Hmm. Or maybe something to do with his mother. I don't remember if she is alive or not.
12/4/2012 c19
2LunarRaven13
You seriously need to update sooner. It's like a drug. I can't get enough soon enough.

You seriously need to update sooner. It's like a drug. I can't get enough soon enough.
11/15/2012 c18 xxSongBirdxx
wow really awesome chappy ok so who is this Nolan guy? and who is Carrie his Ex Girlfriend or Wife maybe ? oh no don't tell me she's pregnant it looks like it to me. That's just what they need until next update which i hope is soon
wow really awesome chappy ok so who is this Nolan guy? and who is Carrie his Ex Girlfriend or Wife maybe ? oh no don't tell me she's pregnant it looks like it to me. That's just what they need until next update which i hope is soon
11/2/2012 c18 fanaserie
Great update
Great update
11/4/2012 c18
4The Phoenix Girl
I loved their date together! I respect Jenny for her pride and refusing to take charity money from anyone... :)
great chapter!

I loved their date together! I respect Jenny for her pride and refusing to take charity money from anyone... :)
great chapter!
10/31/2012 c18 BarefootBallerin
Oh snap, baby girl's knocked up isn't she?!
Oh snap, baby girl's knocked up isn't she?!
10/31/2012 c8 loloduh
Whoever is saying that is "too much detail" is obviously sick in the mind! I'm literally crying from how beautifully detailed this chapter was. I'm hooked and I hope you haven't changed your writing style thru the rest of the story.
Whoever is saying that is "too much detail" is obviously sick in the mind! I'm literally crying from how beautifully detailed this chapter was. I'm hooked and I hope you haven't changed your writing style thru the rest of the story.
10/31/2012 c18 Elle
Ah, I'm so happy you updated! I'm not sure why, but I already like James.
Ah, I'm so happy you updated! I'm not sure why, but I already like James.
10/30/2012 c18 Npd
Omg you finally updated the story I was so happy when the notification pop out of my iPod screen...can wait for next chapter hope you update soon..is she pregnant?
Omg you finally updated the story I was so happy when the notification pop out of my iPod screen...can wait for next chapter hope you update soon..is she pregnant?
11/1/2012 c18 Sin-and-Smokin
Their first official date!
It was sweet and nice, and I liked the fact you showed us a glimpse of the other side of Adrian!
Can't wait to read the next chapter
Update soon
Their first official date!
It was sweet and nice, and I liked the fact you showed us a glimpse of the other side of Adrian!
Can't wait to read the next chapter
Update soon