for Always Dandelions9/23/2012 c17 
10S L Siwik
I was able to read two chapters at once! Woohoo! Chapter 16 was incredible! Sexy, dirty, raw, delicious. I loved Adrian's reaction and behavior. He finally is feeling human, thawing out. Absolutely wonderful. This chapter was good, but a little too short. It could have used a few more lines to finish it off. It had an unfinished feel to it. The ending was just a tad too abrupt. It was still excellent, though. You should edit this story and sell it on Kindle. It would do well, I think.
10S L SiwikI was able to read two chapters at once! Woohoo! Chapter 16 was incredible! Sexy, dirty, raw, delicious. I loved Adrian's reaction and behavior. He finally is feeling human, thawing out. Absolutely wonderful. This chapter was good, but a little too short. It could have used a few more lines to finish it off. It had an unfinished feel to it. The ending was just a tad too abrupt. It was still excellent, though. You should edit this story and sell it on Kindle. It would do well, I think.
9/23/2012 c17 15angelsinstead
Wonderful chapter. I am glad that Jenny's giving Gavin's father a chance... but he was very cruel and harsh with his statements. Gavin needs to know his father, but I don't like his attitude. Jenny's been like a second mother to Gavin and she's busted her butt to take care of him before and after their mother's death; he shouldn't be taken away from her. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
15angelsinsteadWonderful chapter. I am glad that Jenny's giving Gavin's father a chance... but he was very cruel and harsh with his statements. Gavin needs to know his father, but I don't like his attitude. Jenny's been like a second mother to Gavin and she's busted her butt to take care of him before and after their mother's death; he shouldn't be taken away from her. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
9/19/2012 c16 Robin
I get the creepy vibe from this story, Ina good way of course haha. It has elements of thriller in it and it's oddly haunting which has me hooked in an eccentric sort of way LOL. Anyways you did your job of captivating the audience so kudos! :) keep up the good work.
I get the creepy vibe from this story, Ina good way of course haha. It has elements of thriller in it and it's oddly haunting which has me hooked in an eccentric sort of way LOL. Anyways you did your job of captivating the audience so kudos! :) keep up the good work.
9/19/2012 c16 xxSongBirdxx
I think i like Adrian even more now i thought she screwed it up by kissing Mike but he seems to be handling it or is it cause hes hiding something himself we shall see
I think i like Adrian even more now i thought she screwed it up by kissing Mike but he seems to be handling it or is it cause hes hiding something himself we shall see
9/19/2012 c15 xxSongBirdxx
ooh i see this is going to get complicated and i still think he could be married
ooh i see this is going to get complicated and i still think he could be married
9/14/2012 c16 Guest
Beautiful...just beautiful. If you kiss anyone else i will kill them...swoon. Love this story please please update
Beautiful...just beautiful. If you kiss anyone else i will kill them...swoon. Love this story please please update
9/14/2012 c16 Tai Ni Po Ni
Hey!
I've been following your story for a while and...okay I admit it: I'm kinda lazy when it comes to leave a review. But after reading this very intense chapter I couldn't leave without telling you how the words you've chosen to describe the relationship between the two main characters have stirred a lot of feelings inside me. The fact that you didn't label Adrian and Jenny's activities as typical (and IMO also pretty ordinary) "boyfriend/girlfriend" ones but chose to use the word "soul mate" instead, made me realize how the subject of your story is quickly developing into something much more mature a deep. "Soul mate" automatically makes me think of how strongly deep-rooted, almost violent and ultra sincere Adrians feelings towards Jenny are. It perfectly fits with the fact that she's his only attachment to life. That, to me, is the best love declaration a person could say to his/her partner. The light-headed words "Boyfriend/Girlfriend" obviously don't fit everyone, especially not two people with a troubled past like Adrian and Jenny. Plus, they have been trivialized too often and nowadays have very little meaning. To tell someone "my mate. My other half…" takes up a lot of courage and love. I personally think that you've truly captivated the essence of that word, in every facet of it.
And for the sex scene: it was like poetry to me. It really gave me the impression that it was about two people who are deeply in love with each other. So...what more can I say if not..10 out of 10!
Please update soon!
Love, Nini
Hey!
I've been following your story for a while and...okay I admit it: I'm kinda lazy when it comes to leave a review. But after reading this very intense chapter I couldn't leave without telling you how the words you've chosen to describe the relationship between the two main characters have stirred a lot of feelings inside me. The fact that you didn't label Adrian and Jenny's activities as typical (and IMO also pretty ordinary) "boyfriend/girlfriend" ones but chose to use the word "soul mate" instead, made me realize how the subject of your story is quickly developing into something much more mature a deep. "Soul mate" automatically makes me think of how strongly deep-rooted, almost violent and ultra sincere Adrians feelings towards Jenny are. It perfectly fits with the fact that she's his only attachment to life. That, to me, is the best love declaration a person could say to his/her partner. The light-headed words "Boyfriend/Girlfriend" obviously don't fit everyone, especially not two people with a troubled past like Adrian and Jenny. Plus, they have been trivialized too often and nowadays have very little meaning. To tell someone "my mate. My other half…" takes up a lot of courage and love. I personally think that you've truly captivated the essence of that word, in every facet of it.
And for the sex scene: it was like poetry to me. It really gave me the impression that it was about two people who are deeply in love with each other. So...what more can I say if not..10 out of 10!
Please update soon!
Love, Nini
9/11/2012 c16 3StaNdUPtomE
its a turning point in their relationship. Their getting somewhere, moving in a direction. Going on dates,
I've always disliked the term girlfriend and boyfriend, especially after high school, it seems so unimportant, juvinile, and not long term, so I see Adrian's point in not considering her that
3StaNdUPtomEits a turning point in their relationship. Their getting somewhere, moving in a direction. Going on dates,
I've always disliked the term girlfriend and boyfriend, especially after high school, it seems so unimportant, juvinile, and not long term, so I see Adrian's point in not considering her that
9/6/2012 c16 9Lerene
Love the story and the characters. I wanted to ring jenny's neck when she stupidly kiss Mike.
Can't wait to read more of their story.
9LereneLove the story and the characters. I wanted to ring jenny's neck when she stupidly kiss Mike.
Can't wait to read more of their story.
8/28/2012 c16 critc
Oh god this was beautiful. a beautiful, beautiful chapter. i teared up at the end. bravo!
Oh god this was beautiful. a beautiful, beautiful chapter. i teared up at the end. bravo!