
1/15/2011 c1
3lovelypoison25
that was way good i think you should definatly comtinue : ) i want to know what happens between themm!

that was way good i think you should definatly comtinue : ) i want to know what happens between themm!
1/14/2011 c1
6Imperio
Wow! This is so original! I've never read anything like that before! It was raw and emotional and made me groan inwardly as I came to the bottom of the page. You really need to carry on writing- this is AMAZING stuff.

Wow! This is so original! I've never read anything like that before! It was raw and emotional and made me groan inwardly as I came to the bottom of the page. You really need to carry on writing- this is AMAZING stuff.
1/14/2011 c1 zoo-bie
Woohoo, I'm really excited about this one! Although I personally would find the fact that he buys sex a turn-off, Adrian is hot, so it's alright. ;) Really looking forward to reading more, so keep up the good work! :)
Woohoo, I'm really excited about this one! Although I personally would find the fact that he buys sex a turn-off, Adrian is hot, so it's alright. ;) Really looking forward to reading more, so keep up the good work! :)
1/14/2011 c1 Xiaolu
Sure, you should continue. It's interesting, she's really devoted to her family and I admire that, I wonder what's going to happen, if Adrian is going to come back for her again and if he knew who she was all along. I'm also curious about what happened to him, so many mysteries...
Sure, you should continue. It's interesting, she's really devoted to her family and I admire that, I wonder what's going to happen, if Adrian is going to come back for her again and if he knew who she was all along. I'm also curious about what happened to him, so many mysteries...
1/13/2011 c1 savagehunger47
Oh, baby, you need to continue on this one!
What i'm wondering is, if she is able to get all 3 grand from him and quits being a street walker, what will happen when he goes looking for her again?
Lot's and lot's of questions and lovely possibilities could happen so i very much hope that you continue with it :)
Oh, baby, you need to continue on this one!
What i'm wondering is, if she is able to get all 3 grand from him and quits being a street walker, what will happen when he goes looking for her again?
Lot's and lot's of questions and lovely possibilities could happen so i very much hope that you continue with it :)