
6/29/2013 c25
1nove1198
My heart has stopped. I hope against all hope that Adrian lives. Please please update soon!

My heart has stopped. I hope against all hope that Adrian lives. Please please update soon!
6/25/2013 c25 Unknown
Is this the end?
Pleased tell me no!
Is this the end?
Pleased tell me no!
6/26/2013 c25 Aquarian Love
That should give all vets and their families who suffer with mental disorders something to fear.
That should give all vets and their families who suffer with mental disorders something to fear.
6/21/2013 c25 HCG13
Oh my gosh... PLEASE DON'T TELL ME YOU JUST LEFT IT OFF RIGHT THERE! Whoops, sorry, my fingers sort of spazzed out or something. Anywho, I just started reading this last night, and I literally could not stop. This story is simply beautiful in it's own way. I love the darkness, and you make it so real. I feel like I can actually feel what the characters are feeling. You are extremely talented as a writer. I find it symbolic how sometimes in the beginning, you'll mention that it's summer or that it's a beautiful day, and then you proceed into the chapter, where I can only imagine it is dark and gloomy outside. I actually love the parts with Jenny and Gavin - those are the parts where I actually cried. I think that the complexity of each and every character is simply amazing. Not many people could pull it off the way you do. Your grammar and spelling is superb, which is so hard to find on FictionPress and FanFiction. You are a stellar writer, and I cannot wait to see more of this story! Also, I was wondering... How did you come up with the name for this story? Oh, and the HCG13 stands for horse-crazy girl13. I have a Fanfic account, I'm just too lazy to log in. :) Anywho, update when you can!
Oh my gosh... PLEASE DON'T TELL ME YOU JUST LEFT IT OFF RIGHT THERE! Whoops, sorry, my fingers sort of spazzed out or something. Anywho, I just started reading this last night, and I literally could not stop. This story is simply beautiful in it's own way. I love the darkness, and you make it so real. I feel like I can actually feel what the characters are feeling. You are extremely talented as a writer. I find it symbolic how sometimes in the beginning, you'll mention that it's summer or that it's a beautiful day, and then you proceed into the chapter, where I can only imagine it is dark and gloomy outside. I actually love the parts with Jenny and Gavin - those are the parts where I actually cried. I think that the complexity of each and every character is simply amazing. Not many people could pull it off the way you do. Your grammar and spelling is superb, which is so hard to find on FictionPress and FanFiction. You are a stellar writer, and I cannot wait to see more of this story! Also, I was wondering... How did you come up with the name for this story? Oh, and the HCG13 stands for horse-crazy girl13. I have a Fanfic account, I'm just too lazy to log in. :) Anywho, update when you can!
6/17/2013 c25 Guest
NOOOOO!
c'mon what a cliffhanger!
Jenny get your shit together and Adrian! why ?
NOOOOO!
c'mon what a cliffhanger!
Jenny get your shit together and Adrian! why ?
6/16/2013 c23 cassiealan34
You send in the end notes that sometimes there is no happy ending, and I wanted to tell you that you're wrong. Happy endings are very much real, and everything does turn out right ib the end. If something is bad, and it feels like the end, it isn't. You just have to keep fighting. And that's all I have to say. Because I love Jenny, and I know everything will be alright. And if she's not happy, then she'll be content. Because if she isn't, then I know it's not the end.
You send in the end notes that sometimes there is no happy ending, and I wanted to tell you that you're wrong. Happy endings are very much real, and everything does turn out right ib the end. If something is bad, and it feels like the end, it isn't. You just have to keep fighting. And that's all I have to say. Because I love Jenny, and I know everything will be alright. And if she's not happy, then she'll be content. Because if she isn't, then I know it's not the end.
6/13/2013 c25 Guest
NOOOOOOOOOOO DAMN IT! My lungs almost gave out, please update.
NOOOOOOOOOOO DAMN IT! My lungs almost gave out, please update.
6/15/2013 c25 cassiealan34
This is the first time I have ever cried over a character. And I have read many, many stories.
This is the first time I have ever cried over a character. And I have read many, many stories.
6/10/2013 c25 Derpina96
wow you made me cry ... poor adrian i hope he survives cause they need each other i don't how he's going to fix his nightmares cause i wouldn't want anyone to suffer like that ... i hope you will keep writing this story
wow you made me cry ... poor adrian i hope he survives cause they need each other i don't how he's going to fix his nightmares cause i wouldn't want anyone to suffer like that ... i hope you will keep writing this story
6/7/2013 c25 Guest
Wow! What a cliffy!
Wow! What a cliffy!
6/8/2013 c25 cwolfe623
Cheese and crackers! I started this story today and couldn't stop reading...you need to update asap! Can't wait to see what happens!
Cheese and crackers! I started this story today and couldn't stop reading...you need to update asap! Can't wait to see what happens!
6/8/2013 c25 XXHotSparklesXX
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG OMG! UPDATE IM CRYIN SOOO HARD RIGHT NOW! I LOVE YOU LOL XD
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG OMG! UPDATE IM CRYIN SOOO HARD RIGHT NOW! I LOVE YOU LOL XD
6/2/2013 c24 Shannon
Noooooooo!
Noooooooo!