for Acidic Tears1/16/2011 c1 
7erase.me.away
Wow, that is one really deep poem. I love how you used your words. It's very emotional if you ask me. Overall i give it a 8.5/10. I like how you created imagery in or minds, almost as if we could feel the pain this person is feeling, and what they are going through. Excellenty written :) Continue to do your best!
p.s, this is how i actually review strangers stories, i decided i wanted you to see this other "me" and how i review xD
:) Professionally done :)
CONTINUE TO WRITE. :)
7erase.me.awayWow, that is one really deep poem. I love how you used your words. It's very emotional if you ask me. Overall i give it a 8.5/10. I like how you created imagery in or minds, almost as if we could feel the pain this person is feeling, and what they are going through. Excellenty written :) Continue to do your best!
p.s, this is how i actually review strangers stories, i decided i wanted you to see this other "me" and how i review xD
:) Professionally done :)
CONTINUE TO WRITE. :)
1/16/2011 c1 3Aera the Ninja
Hey there, Jenny here :D
I like this, it's so sad!
You're so good at writing this stuff :) I can't believe you deleted the other one D:
~rosesecret02
3Aera the NinjaHey there, Jenny here :D
I like this, it's so sad!
You're so good at writing this stuff :) I can't believe you deleted the other one D:
~rosesecret02
1/15/2011 c1 31HK Shmetty
Wow, congrats on your first story. It's really good. Keep writing and welcome to FictionPress!
31HK ShmettyWow, congrats on your first story. It's really good. Keep writing and welcome to FictionPress!