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1/19/2011 c1 34Ashlee Pond
Very well done!

I noticed a few little typos, such as "Perhaps she's avoiding him or he's avoiding him", but they were few and far between.

The ending was fantastic, and I felt so happy for her that she got the last word over him!

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