for Sprite5/7/2022 c8 MejraThea
Here I am again. I fell out of doing my yearly reads, changing as I grow older. But I still love this story, so much. This is my reading of it for 2022. I look forward to reading it again in a few years. :) I would buy this so fast if you published it!
Here I am again. I fell out of doing my yearly reads, changing as I grow older. But I still love this story, so much. This is my reading of it for 2022. I look forward to reading it again in a few years. :) I would buy this so fast if you published it!
8/26/2019 c88 
1Sylvia SparrowTounge
Hi, I know this story was finished ages ago, but I’m so glad I found it! It was well-written and I’d been in a bit of a reading funk, but your story took me right out of it. I love how each character had their own distinctions and distinct personalities, which made up for the lack of reasons different characters liked each other (like the reasons Norah likes Breyan and Pup besides that they were available) (also bc that was the general flow of the story, and it probably wasn’t that important because it wasn’t in first person so it fit into that too). Thank you for writing this! I loved it!
1Sylvia SparrowToungeHi, I know this story was finished ages ago, but I’m so glad I found it! It was well-written and I’d been in a bit of a reading funk, but your story took me right out of it. I love how each character had their own distinctions and distinct personalities, which made up for the lack of reasons different characters liked each other (like the reasons Norah likes Breyan and Pup besides that they were available) (also bc that was the general flow of the story, and it probably wasn’t that important because it wasn’t in first person so it fit into that too). Thank you for writing this! I loved it!
1/12/2018 c88 The Age of Awesomeness
This was super amazing! I hope you keep writing, cause you’re amazing at it!
At some points, the story did seem to rush a bit, but it was pretty well-paced most of the time! Great plot and development as well!
This was super amazing! I hope you keep writing, cause you’re amazing at it!
At some points, the story did seem to rush a bit, but it was pretty well-paced most of the time! Great plot and development as well!
12/31/2016 c88 aynaarah
I don't know what to say.. this story was a surprise.. I am not sure how to describe it.. flowers and something impish put together, spiced innocence.. I got very, very attached to Neistah.. so when Norah took the light I missed especially him..
Full of praise and grateful for your story!
I don't know what to say.. this story was a surprise.. I am not sure how to describe it.. flowers and something impish put together, spiced innocence.. I got very, very attached to Neistah.. so when Norah took the light I missed especially him..
Full of praise and grateful for your story!
5/1/2016 c2 MejraThea
I'm leaving my annual review. :) I read this a month or so ago, and enjoyed it again like I do every 6 months to a year. Again, I can't say how many time I have read this, but I know that I do read it at least once a year since my initial discovery of it. I recommend it to anyone and everyone, it is truly a joy.
I'm leaving my annual review. :) I read this a month or so ago, and enjoyed it again like I do every 6 months to a year. Again, I can't say how many time I have read this, but I know that I do read it at least once a year since my initial discovery of it. I recommend it to anyone and everyone, it is truly a joy.
4/16/2015 c88 Guest
This was amazing, I'm so glad my sister introduced me to this.
Its got an amazing world, and incredibly believable and strong characters.
I hope it gets all the success it deserves
This was amazing, I'm so glad my sister introduced me to this.
Its got an amazing world, and incredibly believable and strong characters.
I hope it gets all the success it deserves
4/12/2015 c88 8Yellow Cotton Hat
I am so glad I came across this story. It deserves a hell of a lot more reviews!
While I'll be honest and say that there were a few things I came across that could be bettered via editing, it was a thoroughly enjoyable read, and I loved the world, the consistency and the characters.
[I also find myself wishing that Norah had chosen Pup, but I understand her reasoning xD]
8Yellow Cotton HatI am so glad I came across this story. It deserves a hell of a lot more reviews!
While I'll be honest and say that there were a few things I came across that could be bettered via editing, it was a thoroughly enjoyable read, and I loved the world, the consistency and the characters.
[I also find myself wishing that Norah had chosen Pup, but I understand her reasoning xD]
3/11/2015 c1 MejraThea
Hello, again! I just read Sprite again, for what time it is I have lost count. If you were to publish this book physically, or in an e-book, I would buy it in a second. That's it this time, until I read it again in 6 months!
Hello, again! I just read Sprite again, for what time it is I have lost count. If you were to publish this book physically, or in an e-book, I would buy it in a second. That's it this time, until I read it again in 6 months!
2/1/2014 c87 MejraThea
I have just finished reading this for the 4th time, and I still love it. I look forward to reading it asgain in a year!
I have just finished reading this for the 4th time, and I still love it. I look forward to reading it asgain in a year!
5/13/2013 c88 MejraThea
So, I just retread Sprite for the second, or third?, time, and I love it more and more everytime. I just have one suggestion, when you ended it, after Norah and Breyan arrived in fairy, it would have been nice to hear her offer to make him a weave, 'when her hair is long enough.'
So, I just retread Sprite for the second, or third?, time, and I love it more and more everytime. I just have one suggestion, when you ended it, after Norah and Breyan arrived in fairy, it would have been nice to hear her offer to make him a weave, 'when her hair is long enough.'
2/26/2013 c88 Artemis7337
Thank you so much for writing this. I know I haven't reviewed for seventy chapters or so, but it was really a great ride and getting Sprite updates in my inbox was always a fun addition to my day. I loved every second of this story and I look forward to seeing any other stories you may write!
Thank you so much for writing this. I know I haven't reviewed for seventy chapters or so, but it was really a great ride and getting Sprite updates in my inbox was always a fun addition to my day. I loved every second of this story and I look forward to seeing any other stories you may write!
12/4/2012 c66 Ash
Hi, I've been following this story since half way through, and though I don't usually give reviews I just wanted to say that this is an awesome and imaginative story, and that I hope that you continue!
Hi, I've been following this story since half way through, and though I don't usually give reviews I just wanted to say that this is an awesome and imaginative story, and that I hope that you continue!
9/16/2012 c75 advertisement
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8/12/2012 c72 Listen and Fly
I am very sorry, but I have lost my interest in your story. It's a bit too slow paced for my taste. I really liked your beginning, because there is more action and activity going on. As it progressed however, it just got more and more bland. I do not mean to say that your writing is bad, for this story is one of the error-less ones, but you really need more actions and activities going on.
But good job on managing to sustain your story for so long. Most would have just given up already.
Cheers
Kat
I am very sorry, but I have lost my interest in your story. It's a bit too slow paced for my taste. I really liked your beginning, because there is more action and activity going on. As it progressed however, it just got more and more bland. I do not mean to say that your writing is bad, for this story is one of the error-less ones, but you really need more actions and activities going on.
But good job on managing to sustain your story for so long. Most would have just given up already.
Cheers
Kat
9/21/2011 c38 Flabbergasted Flock
UPDATE! I'll yell it to you in your room if you don't update. ;D
Sprite reminds me of the drink: Sprite...
UPDATE! I'll yell it to you in your room if you don't update. ;D
Sprite reminds me of the drink: Sprite...