for Behind Those Eyes1/22/2011 c1 
13Vegetarian Meatballs
I appreciate rhyme schemes and your subtle rhyming made the poem very powerful. I feel like a lot of people will be able to relate to this piece. Nice work!
13Vegetarian MeatballsI appreciate rhyme schemes and your subtle rhyming made the poem very powerful. I feel like a lot of people will be able to relate to this piece. Nice work!
1/21/2011 c1 76Rhocar
fantastic, very emotional, just one little thing, is the first word in the last line correct, or should it be "that made her feel so low"
76Rhocarfantastic, very emotional, just one little thing, is the first word in the last line correct, or should it be "that made her feel so low"
1/21/2011 c1 Punslinger
This is so beautifully sad. You managed to draw a memorable picture with a few well-chosen words shaped into graceful phrases.
This is so beautifully sad. You managed to draw a memorable picture with a few well-chosen words shaped into graceful phrases.
1/21/2011 c1 GriLl0ws
Hey!
I love the poem, thats awesome, and I hate to say it but that totally sounds like me lol
B.
Hey!
I love the poem, thats awesome, and I hate to say it but that totally sounds like me lol
B.