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1/22/2011 c1 13Vegetarian Meatballs
I appreciate rhyme schemes and your subtle rhyming made the poem very powerful. I feel like a lot of people will be able to relate to this piece. Nice work!
1/21/2011 c1 11MentalBrink
I like this one too! I can relate perfectly :P
1/21/2011 c1 76Rhocar
fantastic, very emotional, just one little thing, is the first word in the last line correct, or should it be "that made her feel so low"
1/21/2011 c1 Punslinger
This is so beautifully sad. You managed to draw a memorable picture with a few well-chosen words shaped into graceful phrases.
1/21/2011 c1 GriLl0ws

I love the poem, thats awesome, and I hate to say it but that totally sounds like me lol


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