for The Magic Mirror12/9/2011 c40 The random person
I love this book. It's amazing. The best I have read. I'm going to start reading the next one now. What ever shall happen next?
I love this book. It's amazing. The best I have read. I'm going to start reading the next one now. What ever shall happen next?
12/8/2011 c21 No letters can discribe me
There I have it!
There I have it!
12/7/2011 c18 Obsessed with this
Obsessed is about the right word to describe me right about now.
You might or might not still be looking for reviews but I'm going to anyways. ;)
I can't believe what I just read and I can not wait to meet Fritz... Which is somewhere in the future... at least I hope because there is a chapter named after him... I'll have my fingers crossed for now. (I want to know what he is like especially after reading this chapter...but do I really want to?)
Hmmm. Oh what will happen next!
Obsessed is about the right word to describe me right about now.
You might or might not still be looking for reviews but I'm going to anyways. ;)
I can't believe what I just read and I can not wait to meet Fritz... Which is somewhere in the future... at least I hope because there is a chapter named after him... I'll have my fingers crossed for now. (I want to know what he is like especially after reading this chapter...but do I really want to?)
Hmmm. Oh what will happen next!
11/13/2011 c41 
1cocodog
I cannot believe The Magic Mirror! What an absolutely amazing story! I WILL be reading on. I cannot offer up anything but praise! I loved the characterization, and the firm plot, that all made sense in the end! Oh, how I love novels that make sense!
Everything! Everything is good! From the title to the very last feather! You have captured everything perfectly!
-cocodog XD
1cocodogI cannot believe The Magic Mirror! What an absolutely amazing story! I WILL be reading on. I cannot offer up anything but praise! I loved the characterization, and the firm plot, that all made sense in the end! Oh, how I love novels that make sense!
Everything! Everything is good! From the title to the very last feather! You have captured everything perfectly!
-cocodog XD
9/18/2011 c22 7SJR
Aww She's even bitter in her suicide note :( Does it mean there's something wrong with me if I can't decide whether or not I find that sad or funny?
I've been busy for a week or so but it's nice to return. That's the good thing about a completed novel: it's not going to leave me behind XD
7SJRAww She's even bitter in her suicide note :( Does it mean there's something wrong with me if I can't decide whether or not I find that sad or funny?
I've been busy for a week or so but it's nice to return. That's the good thing about a completed novel: it's not going to leave me behind XD
9/5/2011 c19 SJR
I still completely love it! I laugh at every chapter but I do have to wonder if you're ever going to explain what a changeling is - my curiosity is almost overflowing by now XD
I still completely love it! I laugh at every chapter but I do have to wonder if you're ever going to explain what a changeling is - my curiosity is almost overflowing by now XD
9/4/2011 c2 SJR
Lol, I love the logic with the wounded chicken: very witty. Oh! And the late sir Gryphon (I'm writing this as I read :P) Ok, I stopped because otherwise I'd have copied and pasted pretty much the whole chapter back up here :S This chapter genuinely made me laugh aloud and not many published books do that, so congratulations again, you are rapidly gaining a fan.
Lol, I love the logic with the wounded chicken: very witty. Oh! And the late sir Gryphon (I'm writing this as I read :P) Ok, I stopped because otherwise I'd have copied and pasted pretty much the whole chapter back up here :S This chapter genuinely made me laugh aloud and not many published books do that, so congratulations again, you are rapidly gaining a fan.
9/4/2011 c1 SJR
:D I love it. This is just so 'The Black Cauldron' but that's a good thing. It's a highly individual style, of course, and I really enjoyed those books so take it as a compliment, it is certainly meant that way XD And so, onto the next chapter!
:D I love it. This is just so 'The Black Cauldron' but that's a good thing. It's a highly individual style, of course, and I really enjoyed those books so take it as a compliment, it is certainly meant that way XD And so, onto the next chapter!
8/23/2011 c9 5Danzi
I’m really intrigued about Imp’s past! I hope there’s more to that later on =]
The rest seems to be really coming along nicely with all the characters and if it’s as good as it’s been so far I’ll be bowled over by what comes next. Great chapter.
5DanziI’m really intrigued about Imp’s past! I hope there’s more to that later on =]
The rest seems to be really coming along nicely with all the characters and if it’s as good as it’s been so far I’ll be bowled over by what comes next. Great chapter.
8/17/2011 c8 Danzi
I really like the Bell Ringer! I know it by another name but never read about it these days; it’s a great addition, and you described it hauntingly well!
I’m getting proper hooked on this now! I have no idea where it’s going but I really want to find out.
One minor thing, this sentence near the end “making it the sweet of ambrosias he had ever taken” I think it should be the sweetest of ambrosias. I think so at least =] Aside from that it was great!
I really like the Bell Ringer! I know it by another name but never read about it these days; it’s a great addition, and you described it hauntingly well!
I’m getting proper hooked on this now! I have no idea where it’s going but I really want to find out.
One minor thing, this sentence near the end “making it the sweet of ambrosias he had ever taken” I think it should be the sweetest of ambrosias. I think so at least =] Aside from that it was great!
8/17/2011 c7 Danzi
(Nice chapter name btw)
I find it funny how Audrin still doesn’t get that Fier isn’t a ring haha. She’s getting a right little catchphrase now isn’t she?
It seems she’s found the knighty people she’s been looking for! Though I’m sure it’s not nearly that easy now is it?
I don’t know this Niarosa but I am already starting to like her =] Her parents are funny “Can't you protect it while you're restoring the family name?" asked her mother.” That made me laugh. Though her plan sounds risky at best...Can’t wait to see how this pans out. I loved this chapter as usual. Great work!
(Nice chapter name btw)
I find it funny how Audrin still doesn’t get that Fier isn’t a ring haha. She’s getting a right little catchphrase now isn’t she?
It seems she’s found the knighty people she’s been looking for! Though I’m sure it’s not nearly that easy now is it?
I don’t know this Niarosa but I am already starting to like her =] Her parents are funny “Can't you protect it while you're restoring the family name?" asked her mother.” That made me laugh. Though her plan sounds risky at best...Can’t wait to see how this pans out. I loved this chapter as usual. Great work!
8/17/2011 c6 Danzi
You can’t eat Dumpling!
Haha I liked Audrin’s attempt to ward off the bandits who seemed pretty reasonable for bandits.
Wow I was really impressed by the way you did Fier’s hallucinations, kinda chilling and really well described. Loved it =]
One issue, this sentence. “old and baggy the man had been Fier had always found something wonderful in that smile.” I think there needs to be a comma after been.
Oh I like the cliff-hanger ending! I can’t wait to read on.
Once more a great chapter. We’re really getting into the story now! Amazingly written too =]
You can’t eat Dumpling!
Haha I liked Audrin’s attempt to ward off the bandits who seemed pretty reasonable for bandits.
Wow I was really impressed by the way you did Fier’s hallucinations, kinda chilling and really well described. Loved it =]
One issue, this sentence. “old and baggy the man had been Fier had always found something wonderful in that smile.” I think there needs to be a comma after been.
Oh I like the cliff-hanger ending! I can’t wait to read on.
Once more a great chapter. We’re really getting into the story now! Amazingly written too =]
8/10/2011 c3 Danzi
Dun Dun Duuuuuun the ring shrank! That can only mean trouble! I’m liking this chapter a lot, especially the interaction between Audrin and the ring, and the complication that only she can hear it =] Very good. Argh cliff-hanger! Can’t wait to read on.
Dun Dun Duuuuuun the ring shrank! That can only mean trouble! I’m liking this chapter a lot, especially the interaction between Audrin and the ring, and the complication that only she can hear it =] Very good. Argh cliff-hanger! Can’t wait to read on.
8/10/2011 c5 Danzi
Just an FYI the chapter name on the dropdown list could do with being in capitals.
I am really enjoying the play between Audrin and Fier. The first part of fantasy stories can be a real drag to get through till you get to grips with it but you make it so entertaining.
This line "You've forgotten your sword and you're walking in the wrong direction," may be better with the and italicised for emphasis and exasperation, but that could just be my personal preference. Great work =]
Just an FYI the chapter name on the dropdown list could do with being in capitals.
I am really enjoying the play between Audrin and Fier. The first part of fantasy stories can be a real drag to get through till you get to grips with it but you make it so entertaining.
This line "You've forgotten your sword and you're walking in the wrong direction," may be better with the and italicised for emphasis and exasperation, but that could just be my personal preference. Great work =]
8/10/2011 c4 Danzi
Hey, I’m just writing this as I read through so I don’t forget anything.
I don’t know if you’re going for a comical bit here “Mrs. Plow whispered to Mr. Plow” but in this situation I’m not sure it works having both of their titles/last names being used.
Thank god Mr Lout (love the cane btw) didn’t have bad intentions towards Audrin! I also thought the little competition between Mr Lout and Mr Plow was hilarious.
A minor thing, the line “Well what will she do with out you?" The without needs to be one word.
And Graves is the classic cruel guy, well he’s beyond classic, he’s downright cruel!
All in all it was another great chapter!
Hey, I’m just writing this as I read through so I don’t forget anything.
I don’t know if you’re going for a comical bit here “Mrs. Plow whispered to Mr. Plow” but in this situation I’m not sure it works having both of their titles/last names being used.
Thank god Mr Lout (love the cane btw) didn’t have bad intentions towards Audrin! I also thought the little competition between Mr Lout and Mr Plow was hilarious.
A minor thing, the line “Well what will she do with out you?" The without needs to be one word.
And Graves is the classic cruel guy, well he’s beyond classic, he’s downright cruel!
All in all it was another great chapter!