for The Magic Mirror5/21/2011 c35 
31HeroofEnelios
Ahhh things are getting more and more interesting. I really wonder who's side Naros is really on. As for Audrin and the others, I wonder how they are doing right now? Guess there is only one way to find out. Wait for the next chapter. Awesome job!
31HeroofEneliosAhhh things are getting more and more interesting. I really wonder who's side Naros is really on. As for Audrin and the others, I wonder how they are doing right now? Guess there is only one way to find out. Wait for the next chapter. Awesome job!
5/20/2011 c34 9The Folk Extraction
It's nice to have everyone all together XD And go Fritz! If he can't do it...well, Naros can. I'm almost positive that Naros can. GREAT CHAPTER!
9The Folk ExtractionIt's nice to have everyone all together XD And go Fritz! If he can't do it...well, Naros can. I'm almost positive that Naros can. GREAT CHAPTER!
5/16/2011 c34 31HeroofEnelios
Is it possible that things are finally starting to look up for Fier and the others? As of this chapter it is really starting to look that way and they are finally moving again. Woohoo! Hurray for awesome chapter. :)
Amazing job!
31HeroofEneliosIs it possible that things are finally starting to look up for Fier and the others? As of this chapter it is really starting to look that way and they are finally moving again. Woohoo! Hurray for awesome chapter. :)
Amazing job!
5/13/2011 c1 Daphne Auguste
Okay, so I'm going back to the start to reread and review this story. Trust me, I don't do that often (so that means it's either very bad or very good and take three guesses to which one it is and it's not the first one).
Plus, I wanted to tell you how much I'm obsessed with that first paragraph, how you described Niarosa, while at the same time giving the audience a clear idea of what kind of person Fier is.
Okay, so I'm going back to the start to reread and review this story. Trust me, I don't do that often (so that means it's either very bad or very good and take three guesses to which one it is and it's not the first one).
Plus, I wanted to tell you how much I'm obsessed with that first paragraph, how you described Niarosa, while at the same time giving the audience a clear idea of what kind of person Fier is.
5/10/2011 c33 HeroofEnelios
Graves is such an evil sneaky guy, and he is really starting to get on my nerves. I know I may have said it before, I'll say it again. This time though I'm serious. Evil to the core. Awesome chapter!
Graves is such an evil sneaky guy, and he is really starting to get on my nerves. I know I may have said it before, I'll say it again. This time though I'm serious. Evil to the core. Awesome chapter!
5/5/2011 c32 HeroofEnelios
That bird seems a bit familiar for some reason... I wonder why. I do hope that Fier realizes what he got himself into by saying he will help defeat Graves. I just wonder if he can...
Awesome chapter, I really enjoyed it!
That bird seems a bit familiar for some reason... I wonder why. I do hope that Fier realizes what he got himself into by saying he will help defeat Graves. I just wonder if he can...
Awesome chapter, I really enjoyed it!
5/2/2011 c31 HeroofEnelios
Niarosa's first statement in this chapter, dump, sort of caught me off guard. Her personality is very interesting and unique... yes. And also, a very intense chapter and I look forward to more.
Niarosa's first statement in this chapter, dump, sort of caught me off guard. Her personality is very interesting and unique... yes. And also, a very intense chapter and I look forward to more.
5/2/2011 c30 9The Folk Extraction
I can't believe you cut off Audrin's finger AND had her poisoned. Worst day ever. Fier better do...something.
Please write more soon! This is getting good, and Naros is unexpectedly awesome.
9The Folk ExtractionI can't believe you cut off Audrin's finger AND had her poisoned. Worst day ever. Fier better do...something.
Please write more soon! This is getting good, and Naros is unexpectedly awesome.
4/28/2011 c30 1ChocolateCookie
just caught up reading this now :) I'm happy that Audrin and Fiers have met at last - well sort of, since she's unconscious - but her hand! :( how awful!
1ChocolateCookiejust caught up reading this now :) I'm happy that Audrin and Fiers have met at last - well sort of, since she's unconscious - but her hand! :( how awful!
4/27/2011 c30 31HeroofEnelios
While I dislike Graves for how evil he is I have to admit he makes quite a fine villain for this story, and I mean a really, great villain. Nice job with his character, I applaud you. Great chapter once again, very intense.
31HeroofEneliosWhile I dislike Graves for how evil he is I have to admit he makes quite a fine villain for this story, and I mean a really, great villain. Nice job with his character, I applaud you. Great chapter once again, very intense.
4/25/2011 c29 HeroofEnelios
Ah I like Niarosa's character. I can't quite place it but something about it is just really likable. I wonder what it is? Hm...
A wonderful update for this story, I enjoyed it. Kudos!
Ah I like Niarosa's character. I can't quite place it but something about it is just really likable. I wonder what it is? Hm...
A wonderful update for this story, I enjoyed it. Kudos!
4/24/2011 c5 GoneAway-MightNotBeReturning
This is one of the best stories that I've read here on Fictionpress. I love the characters, especially Audrin, who's so random it hurts (in a side-splitting funny way, that is.) Anyhow, I'll go back and review once I catch up on the rest of the story. :D
This is one of the best stories that I've read here on Fictionpress. I love the characters, especially Audrin, who's so random it hurts (in a side-splitting funny way, that is.) Anyhow, I'll go back and review once I catch up on the rest of the story. :D
4/20/2011 c28 4PowerofSass
Holy crud this is awesome please continue it because you left at such a dropping point you just have to now!
L'-D-K
4PowerofSassHoly crud this is awesome please continue it because you left at such a dropping point you just have to now!
L'-D-K
4/12/2011 c9 4LuxAurorae
Good chapter as always! I especially liked how you were able to establish the setting with such few words devoted specifically to those details.
It had a sharpness to it's [its] soft voice, something defiant.
She proceeded to the black polished saddle on it's[its] back where she pulled on the saddle bags.
4LuxAuroraeGood chapter as always! I especially liked how you were able to establish the setting with such few words devoted specifically to those details.
It had a sharpness to it's [its] soft voice, something defiant.
She proceeded to the black polished saddle on it's[its] back where she pulled on the saddle bags.