
1/23/2011 c4
31HeroofEnelios
You write pretty fast. Anyways like the previous chapter an excellent chapter this is and... Graves. I can't stand that guy for some reason. Hm...
Well, regardless I hope you write more soon!

You write pretty fast. Anyways like the previous chapter an excellent chapter this is and... Graves. I can't stand that guy for some reason. Hm...
Well, regardless I hope you write more soon!
1/23/2011 c3 HeroofEnelios
The ring seems very humerous and it adds well to the rest of the story which is going great so far. An excellent chapter, very nice job!
The ring seems very humerous and it adds well to the rest of the story which is going great so far. An excellent chapter, very nice job!
1/22/2011 c3
9The Folk Extraction
This story is awesome! Poor Fier is putting up with a lot, but his growing frustrations are part of what makes this so freaking entertaining!
"It's a simple latch, daughter."-XD I love that all of his hopes rest in the hands of a girl who can't even figure out how to close the chicken coup. Audrin is the best protagonist ever!

This story is awesome! Poor Fier is putting up with a lot, but his growing frustrations are part of what makes this so freaking entertaining!
"It's a simple latch, daughter."-XD I love that all of his hopes rest in the hands of a girl who can't even figure out how to close the chicken coup. Audrin is the best protagonist ever!
1/22/2011 c2
31HeroofEnelios
Nice introduction. I'm Audrin. Have you seen any chicken bones lying around? Hah hah, nice. An excellent chapter like before and I am very eager to read more. So please write more soon!

Nice introduction. I'm Audrin. Have you seen any chicken bones lying around? Hah hah, nice. An excellent chapter like before and I am very eager to read more. So please write more soon!
1/21/2011 c1 HeroofEnelios
This is quite the excellent beginning. Your characters are well thought out and the story is a great idea. I actually haven't read something like this before so it makes it all the more better. Graves is a unique name and clever at that, and so are the names I've seen so far. Excellent start, and do write more soon. :)
This is quite the excellent beginning. Your characters are well thought out and the story is a great idea. I actually haven't read something like this before so it makes it all the more better. Graves is a unique name and clever at that, and so are the names I've seen so far. Excellent start, and do write more soon. :)