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1/23/2011 c4 31HeroofEnelios
You write pretty fast. Anyways like the previous chapter an excellent chapter this is and... Graves. I can't stand that guy for some reason. Hm...

Well, regardless I hope you write more soon!
1/23/2011 c3 HeroofEnelios
The ring seems very humerous and it adds well to the rest of the story which is going great so far. An excellent chapter, very nice job!
1/22/2011 c3 9The Folk Extraction
This story is awesome! Poor Fier is putting up with a lot, but his growing frustrations are part of what makes this so freaking entertaining!

"It's a simple latch, daughter."-XD I love that all of his hopes rest in the hands of a girl who can't even figure out how to close the chicken coup. Audrin is the best protagonist ever!
1/22/2011 c1 2Scarlet.Arie
I like! Good Job and hope to see more soon! Good Story!
1/22/2011 c2 31HeroofEnelios
Nice introduction. I'm Audrin. Have you seen any chicken bones lying around? Hah hah, nice. An excellent chapter like before and I am very eager to read more. So please write more soon!
1/21/2011 c1 HeroofEnelios
This is quite the excellent beginning. Your characters are well thought out and the story is a great idea. I actually haven't read something like this before so it makes it all the more better. Graves is a unique name and clever at that, and so are the names I've seen so far. Excellent start, and do write more soon. :)
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