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5/16/2011 c1 10ZionsAflame
There is definitely a feeling of the finger pointing out to those to self concious to care. I doubt anyone would be able to read this without feeling the weight of responsibility on their shoulders. I don't know if that is what you were working at but regardless, exceptional piece of work.
1/24/2011 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
Sounds like depression to me. But perhaps that's just me in my own self centred world, and it's what I can relate to most easily. It's tragic the way the world reacts to things like depression, or whatever this was about, if I'm wrong. Still, a beautiful poem :) Keep writing.

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