3/6/2011 c10 5Bloody Red Moon
These are excellent.
I wish I could have entered
this haiku challenge.
I'm writing a set
of one hundred one now, not
competitvely.
Heh, there are a lot
of reviews written haiku
style. So awesome.
I should really stop
typing soon. How about now? No,
gotta finish this.
~Bloody
These are excellent.
I wish I could have entered
this haiku challenge.
I'm writing a set
of one hundred one now, not
competitvely.
Heh, there are a lot
of reviews written haiku
style. So awesome.
I should really stop
typing soon. How about now? No,
gotta finish this.
~Bloody
3/5/2011 c10 5Alix Cohen
I think you have too.
Excellent choice to put at the
end of a challenge.
These haiku are neat
Varied; a testament to
Versatile writing. :)
I think you have too.
Excellent choice to put at the
end of a challenge.
These haiku are neat
Varied; a testament to
Versatile writing. :)
3/5/2011 c9 Alix Cohen
Yes, we must dream first
Life is getting in the way
of my own writing.
Luckily, I have
Spring break starting as we speak
Then I will have time.
I think I may use
this list when I do my own
Hundred Themes story.
Yes, we must dream first
Life is getting in the way
of my own writing.
Luckily, I have
Spring break starting as we speak
Then I will have time.
I think I may use
this list when I do my own
Hundred Themes story.
2/28/2011 c7 Alix Cohen
"You can't just barge in
like that!" haha I'd add the
Exclamation point.
More hands would be nice
Or more hours in the day
to get better sleep?
"You can't just barge in
like that!" haha I'd add the
Exclamation point.
More hands would be nice
Or more hours in the day
to get better sleep?
2/13/2011 c4 Alix Cohen
Tonight I'm somehow
in the mood for something sweet
this just hits the spot!
Maybe it's because
I'm reading Hetalia
fics when I should be
writing an essay.
But I feel lonely tonight.
Happy Hallmark day.
Tonight I'm somehow
in the mood for something sweet
this just hits the spot!
Maybe it's because
I'm reading Hetalia
fics when I should be
writing an essay.
But I feel lonely tonight.
Happy Hallmark day.
2/6/2011 c3 4Grey-Blue
Wow. What a beautiful combination! Some of these make me smile, and a couple even drew a laugh. Others are pretty literal and straightforward. Some felt so true as to be profound, and hit that spot inside me where I have no thoughts. I like those ones the best. But without the others to break things up, I don't think I could handle them.
I don't know how you feel about this collection you've got going on, but I find it very touching and basically... just right.
Well done!
Wow. What a beautiful combination! Some of these make me smile, and a couple even drew a laugh. Others are pretty literal and straightforward. Some felt so true as to be profound, and hit that spot inside me where I have no thoughts. I like those ones the best. But without the others to break things up, I don't think I could handle them.
I don't know how you feel about this collection you've got going on, but I find it very touching and basically... just right.
Well done!
1/23/2011 c1 13playing in gasoline
They are all beautiful! Seeking Solace and Love are my favorites.
The 100 themes are exciting. I'm doing one as well-though a different version and not in haiku. This is much more challenging.
They are all beautiful! Seeking Solace and Love are my favorites.
The 100 themes are exciting. I'm doing one as well-though a different version and not in haiku. This is much more challenging.
1/23/2011 c2 5Alix Cohen
And I break my rule:
it seems really awkward to
say "weren't" as one
or "hour" in two parts-
I know it's how you hear them,
but to me, it's odd.
And I break my rule:
it seems really awkward to
say "weren't" as one
or "hour" in two parts-
I know it's how you hear them,
but to me, it's odd.
1/23/2011 c1 Alix Cohen
Are you basing these
Partly off song titles? I
see a resemblance.
And having just learned
IPA, I'll no longer
pick at syllables. :)
Are you basing these
Partly off song titles? I
see a resemblance.
And having just learned
IPA, I'll no longer
pick at syllables. :)