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3/6/2011 c10 5Bloody Red Moon
These are excellent.

I wish I could have entered

this haiku challenge.

I'm writing a set

of one hundred one now, not

competitvely.

Heh, there are a lot

of reviews written haiku

style. So awesome.

I should really stop

typing soon. How about now? No,

gotta finish this.

~Bloody
3/5/2011 c10 5Alix Cohen
I think you have too.

Excellent choice to put at the

end of a challenge.

These haiku are neat

Varied; a testament to

Versatile writing. :)
3/5/2011 c9 Alix Cohen
Yes, we must dream first

Life is getting in the way

of my own writing.

Luckily, I have

Spring break starting as we speak

Then I will have time.

I think I may use

this list when I do my own

Hundred Themes story.
3/4/2011 c6 lymli
I like all the haikus, speically this one :)
2/28/2011 c7 Alix Cohen
"You can't just barge in

like that!" haha I'd add the

Exclamation point.

More hands would be nice

Or more hours in the day

to get better sleep?
2/16/2011 c6 Alix Cohen
What is the one hun-

dred theme challenge? I kind of

want to write for it.
2/13/2011 c4 Alix Cohen
Tonight I'm somehow

in the mood for something sweet

this just hits the spot!

Maybe it's because

I'm reading Hetalia

fics when I should be

writing an essay.

But I feel lonely tonight.

Happy Hallmark day.
2/6/2011 c3 4Grey-Blue
Wow. What a beautiful combination! Some of these make me smile, and a couple even drew a laugh. Others are pretty literal and straightforward. Some felt so true as to be profound, and hit that spot inside me where I have no thoughts. I like those ones the best. But without the others to break things up, I don't think I could handle them.

I don't know how you feel about this collection you've got going on, but I find it very touching and basically... just right.

Well done!
2/3/2011 c3 5Alix Cohen
aww...such sweet verses!

Glad to hear from you again

tho it be so brief.
1/23/2011 c1 13playing in gasoline
They are all beautiful! Seeking Solace and Love are my favorites.

The 100 themes are exciting. I'm doing one as well-though a different version and not in haiku. This is much more challenging.
1/23/2011 c2 5Alix Cohen
And I break my rule:

it seems really awkward to

say "weren't" as one

or "hour" in two parts-

I know it's how you hear them,

but to me, it's odd.
1/23/2011 c1 Alix Cohen
Are you basing these

Partly off song titles? I

see a resemblance.

And having just learned

IPA, I'll no longer

pick at syllables. :)

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