7/18/2011 c1 21unwedded.bells
I do this a lot too. Sometimes, I just need a breath-taking, heart-breaking, electrified scene without the drama of crafting an entire story. And this was very good I have to say. :D I was a little confused at first about who was who, but I figured it out. lol Anyway, great work!

3/27/2011 c1 EvilEmoElmoKillsSanta
This is good, and I mean insanly good. I love it.

1/23/2011 c1 13samhus
Omg you created the intense scene so wonderfully. It was very good. Um...well i ddnt get it was a boy until the end..but thats just I'm stupid. But yea it was really good...keep posting.