for The Guide For Guys5/22/2011 c1 
17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It's beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I notice thats its complete story and the reason why I read this story so I can read the sequel of this story after I finish read this story. :) I am wonder how old are Josh, Desmond, Megan and Michelle? *curiously* I am wonder how long does Megan and Michelle became best friends? *curiously* I am wonder why Michelle and Desmond always tease each other since they were kids? *curiously* I am wonder if this story is only use Michelle's POV? *curiously* I am wonder who brought that idea up about the guide book for guys to create the information about them in the notebook? *curiously* The guide book for guys sound so funny. :D I am wonder if Megan and Michelle ever have crushes? *curiously* I am wonder why Michelle and Megan always love to talk about guys then they write it in the notebook? *curiously* Its sound so cute and funny. :D I am wonder why Desmond is so rude and mean toward Michelle when they bump into each other after lunch? *curiously* I think Megan should be actress or comic drawing or clown or writer of funny stories in the future. :) OMG Michelle lost the notebook. And it land into Desmond's hands. Oh dear. Poor Michelle. :( I am wonder what will be Desmond's reaction to the notebook? *curiously* I am glad that Michelle ate the cookies then she discuss with Megan about their notebook. Poor Megan. :( It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. I am off to read the next chapter now. :) Keep writing and don't stop writing. :D
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It's beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I notice thats its complete story and the reason why I read this story so I can read the sequel of this story after I finish read this story. :) I am wonder how old are Josh, Desmond, Megan and Michelle? *curiously* I am wonder how long does Megan and Michelle became best friends? *curiously* I am wonder why Michelle and Desmond always tease each other since they were kids? *curiously* I am wonder if this story is only use Michelle's POV? *curiously* I am wonder who brought that idea up about the guide book for guys to create the information about them in the notebook? *curiously* The guide book for guys sound so funny. :D I am wonder if Megan and Michelle ever have crushes? *curiously* I am wonder why Michelle and Megan always love to talk about guys then they write it in the notebook? *curiously* Its sound so cute and funny. :D I am wonder why Desmond is so rude and mean toward Michelle when they bump into each other after lunch? *curiously* I think Megan should be actress or comic drawing or clown or writer of funny stories in the future. :) OMG Michelle lost the notebook. And it land into Desmond's hands. Oh dear. Poor Michelle. :( I am wonder what will be Desmond's reaction to the notebook? *curiously* I am glad that Michelle ate the cookies then she discuss with Megan about their notebook. Poor Megan. :( It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. I am off to read the next chapter now. :) Keep writing and don't stop writing. :D
5/22/2011 c6 CrystalGW34
They're growing closer. I wonder if he'll ask her out. I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out. I'll be back tomorrow for another chapter. Nicely done. :)
They're growing closer. I wonder if he'll ask her out. I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out. I'll be back tomorrow for another chapter. Nicely done. :)
5/21/2011 c5 CrystalGW34
I always wanted to have a ceiling with glow in the dark stars covering it, but my parents wouldn't allow it. Anyway, I can't believe he put golf balls in her locker. Thank goodness she didn't get in trouble for yelling at him. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter, which I might be able to squeeze in later today. Nicely done. :)
I always wanted to have a ceiling with glow in the dark stars covering it, but my parents wouldn't allow it. Anyway, I can't believe he put golf balls in her locker. Thank goodness she didn't get in trouble for yelling at him. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter, which I might be able to squeeze in later today. Nicely done. :)
5/20/2011 c4 CrystalGW34
I think she's starting to like him and he's liking her too. I enjoyed reading the chapter. This story just keeps getting better. I'll be back tomorrow for another chapter. Nicely done. :)
I think she's starting to like him and he's liking her too. I enjoyed reading the chapter. This story just keeps getting better. I'll be back tomorrow for another chapter. Nicely done. :)
5/19/2011 c3 CrystalGW34
Ugh! I wish I could reach through the computer screen and slap him. The nerve of the jerk. Oh well, I enjoyed reading the chapter. As always I look forward to the next one, which I will get to tomorrow. Nicely done. :)
Ugh! I wish I could reach through the computer screen and slap him. The nerve of the jerk. Oh well, I enjoyed reading the chapter. As always I look forward to the next one, which I will get to tomorrow. Nicely done. :)
5/18/2011 c2 CrystalGW34
So she has to do what he says or else he'll read the notebook. Oh boy, this is going to be interesting. I like how you described Miss Mode. She reminds me of a teacher I once had. Anyway, I'll read another chapter later. Nicely done. :)
So she has to do what he says or else he'll read the notebook. Oh boy, this is going to be interesting. I like how you described Miss Mode. She reminds me of a teacher I once had. Anyway, I'll read another chapter later. Nicely done. :)
5/17/2011 c1 CrystalGW34
Oh no. I shudder to think what Desmond will do with the notebook. I have a feeling it's not going to be good. I like the idea of this story. It's different from what I've read. I see there are 24 chapters so it's going to take me a little while to read it all. Anyway, I'll be back tomorrow for another chapter. Nicely done. :)
Oh no. I shudder to think what Desmond will do with the notebook. I have a feeling it's not going to be good. I like the idea of this story. It's different from what I've read. I see there are 24 chapters so it's going to take me a little while to read it all. Anyway, I'll be back tomorrow for another chapter. Nicely done. :)
4/21/2011 c24 20Ohcai
I really enjoyed reading this story- I'd like to emphasize that, because reviews, I think, shouldn't always go on about the good things. You had plenty of those, but I have to say that it's not really realistic at times. Megan wouldn't have been able to hide everything so well from Michelle, not if Megan was really Michelle's only, very close, friend. Desmond's cancer wouldn't have been so easily hidden, not if he'd had it for a decade or more. He would have lost his hair at times, had side effects from chemo like vomiting, bleeding, bruising, dry skin, nosebleeds, fainting, memory loss, heartburn, overall weakness... the list goes on, and this is not to mention symptoms from the cancer, itself. She should have at least noticed that something was up, not been totally blindsided. Still, you're not bad at writing. It's just a little planning that you could use.
20OhcaiI really enjoyed reading this story- I'd like to emphasize that, because reviews, I think, shouldn't always go on about the good things. You had plenty of those, but I have to say that it's not really realistic at times. Megan wouldn't have been able to hide everything so well from Michelle, not if Megan was really Michelle's only, very close, friend. Desmond's cancer wouldn't have been so easily hidden, not if he'd had it for a decade or more. He would have lost his hair at times, had side effects from chemo like vomiting, bleeding, bruising, dry skin, nosebleeds, fainting, memory loss, heartburn, overall weakness... the list goes on, and this is not to mention symptoms from the cancer, itself. She should have at least noticed that something was up, not been totally blindsided. Still, you're not bad at writing. It's just a little planning that you could use.
3/24/2011 c24 Riley T
wow Ive just finished reading this story and i very enjoyed reading it i loved the drama and the ending was extremely sad i hear theres a sequel to this so ill go check that out now
wow Ive just finished reading this story and i very enjoyed reading it i loved the drama and the ending was extremely sad i hear theres a sequel to this so ill go check that out now
3/22/2011 c23 Candescence
Oh no...I was right. He did have cancer. It explains everything: the lashing out, mood swings, and everything about him. Gosh, that isn't fair
Oh no...I was right. He did have cancer. It explains everything: the lashing out, mood swings, and everything about him. Gosh, that isn't fair
3/22/2011 c21 Candescence
Aww, that was sweet...but, why was he talking so much about time? Does he have cancer, too? Please, I hope not...You're scaring me
Aww, that was sweet...but, why was he talking so much about time? Does he have cancer, too? Please, I hope not...You're scaring me
3/22/2011 c20 Candescence
That was great of Desmond, but, in my opinion, he still doesn't deserve Michelle. Where was Casey when she was being drugged?
That was great of Desmond, but, in my opinion, he still doesn't deserve Michelle. Where was Casey when she was being drugged?