for Troubled1/29/2011 c1 TotalDramaKingdomHearts
This story was sad, but it had a beautiful tone to it. It was a great story, amazing. There really aren't any words to describe this. It is just one of the best stories i have ever read. Utter perfection. I loved every letter of it.
This story was sad, but it had a beautiful tone to it. It was a great story, amazing. There really aren't any words to describe this. It is just one of the best stories i have ever read. Utter perfection. I loved every letter of it.
1/24/2011 c1 
4SCopySCat91
Aw, this is so sad! I loved it, but it's so sad! Now, Sci-Fi isnt really my thing. I actually have to struggle through most of it, but this seemed more angsty (my dream genre!) then sci-fi-ey so I was really fascinated!
4SCopySCat91Aw, this is so sad! I loved it, but it's so sad! Now, Sci-Fi isnt really my thing. I actually have to struggle through most of it, but this seemed more angsty (my dream genre!) then sci-fi-ey so I was really fascinated!
1/24/2011 c1 11MentalBrink
Throwning readers right in the middle of something where the they are ignorant is always a fun read!
11MentalBrinkThrowning readers right in the middle of something where the they are ignorant is always a fun read!
1/24/2011 c1 GriLl0ws
Hey!
Aw i loved this story it made me cry at the end :( so sad but it sounds like real life for someone that is thinking about ending their life.
I hope to read more from you soon and I hope to update my own story soon too :) just trying to think of a good chapter :) hehehe
ttyl
B.
Hey!
Aw i loved this story it made me cry at the end :( so sad but it sounds like real life for someone that is thinking about ending their life.
I hope to read more from you soon and I hope to update my own story soon too :) just trying to think of a good chapter :) hehehe
ttyl
B.
1/23/2011 c1 Punslinger
That was very sad, but well written. I hope you'll explain why Arissa did it.
Your dialogue is good, but I felt that there is too much of it. Some careful cutting might make the story move faster.
That was very sad, but well written. I hope you'll explain why Arissa did it.
Your dialogue is good, but I felt that there is too much of it. Some careful cutting might make the story move faster.