
12/2/2017 c2 Guest
Please update. I know it’s been about 5 years since you last updated, but I only found your story today. I really enjoyed your story too. When you wrote about that stone that was thought to represent the hearts of guardians and fell from the sky, you made it sound so important and I feel like that would have been important somehow and show up again in another chapter. And I feel like Vul and Sophie’s relationship is starting to get more intimate and loving and I’m really curious as to what will happen next. I’m very interested in what ideas you have and what you will make happen in the future chapters(if you decide to continue writing this).
Please update. I know it’s been about 5 years since you last updated, but I only found your story today. I really enjoyed your story too. When you wrote about that stone that was thought to represent the hearts of guardians and fell from the sky, you made it sound so important and I feel like that would have been important somehow and show up again in another chapter. And I feel like Vul and Sophie’s relationship is starting to get more intimate and loving and I’m really curious as to what will happen next. I’m very interested in what ideas you have and what you will make happen in the future chapters(if you decide to continue writing this).
12/2/2014 c1 Desdemonie
Wow, romantic and very smexy :)
Wow, romantic and very smexy :)
5/25/2014 c2
1IttyBittyBirdie
I'd definately enjoy reading another chapter :) Your writing style is exquisite. Tell me, do you plan to continue? I know it's been a while, but this story has promise :D

I'd definately enjoy reading another chapter :) Your writing style is exquisite. Tell me, do you plan to continue? I know it's been a while, but this story has promise :D
9/15/2013 c2 Guest
More! I want to see her reaction to vul learning to kiss
More! I want to see her reaction to vul learning to kiss
4/14/2013 c2 storywritter1994
I WAAAAANNNNAAA READ MORE!
I WAAAAANNNNAAA READ MORE!
3/7/2013 c2 i-pin
needs more to good for it to be over
needs more to good for it to be over
1/2/2013 c1
4The Phoenix Girl
Very interesting... I loved the relationship between Sophie and her ship... I honestly didn't expect them to have such a deep relation and I'm actually very impressed :)

Very interesting... I loved the relationship between Sophie and her ship... I honestly didn't expect them to have such a deep relation and I'm actually very impressed :)
11/19/2012 c2 Guest
This is a keen sense of erotica from the AI's point of view in some instances and in the pilots view in others. It keeps it intriguing as well as erotic. Keep it up and you will have continous readers.
This is a keen sense of erotica from the AI's point of view in some instances and in the pilots view in others. It keeps it intriguing as well as erotic. Keep it up and you will have continous readers.
11/18/2012 c2 Absent Lucidity
Oh HELL YES! Do we want more, psh! Fuckin' HOT is what this is! Seriously, and so well written too! And original! I've never read anything like this! It's just totally fucking awesome, okay? Making me wait a year for an update; unacceptable!
(Yeah, read this months ago but never reviewed. I didn't think there was a chance of you updating. Imagine my surprise when I come back to read this to relive the eroticism and see you've updated. Oh, now that I know you've got ideas, rest assured, you will be badgered! Muahaha!).
I'm keeping tabs on this, even without an account! PLEASE UPDATE! XD
Oh HELL YES! Do we want more, psh! Fuckin' HOT is what this is! Seriously, and so well written too! And original! I've never read anything like this! It's just totally fucking awesome, okay? Making me wait a year for an update; unacceptable!
(Yeah, read this months ago but never reviewed. I didn't think there was a chance of you updating. Imagine my surprise when I come back to read this to relive the eroticism and see you've updated. Oh, now that I know you've got ideas, rest assured, you will be badgered! Muahaha!).
I'm keeping tabs on this, even without an account! PLEASE UPDATE! XD
10/5/2012 c2 Showjumping1
YES! PLEASE POST YOUR OTHER 2 CHAPTER I ENJOY YOUR STORIES SOOOOOOO MUCH :D :D
YES! PLEASE POST YOUR OTHER 2 CHAPTER I ENJOY YOUR STORIES SOOOOOOO MUCH :D :D
9/3/2012 c1 FutureCSICrystal
Well, I've only read the first chapter and so far I like it a lot. You are an excellent writer. I found no super obvious errors either, so great job. :)
Well, I've only read the first chapter and so far I like it a lot. You are an excellent writer. I found no super obvious errors either, so great job. :)
7/13/2012 c2 Binenthorne
Oh my goodness, I haven't ever read a story like this...in my life. I'm shocked by this, that's a good thing for me shock value, and your writing is exceptional, most of the stories I've read here hardly have proper grammar. The communication between Sophie and Vul is for lack of better words interesting, for me at least, like I said I've never read anything like this! Oh keep going! It say's complete but surely you can't be done, I need more! Best story I've read this year by far!
Oh my goodness, I haven't ever read a story like this...in my life. I'm shocked by this, that's a good thing for me shock value, and your writing is exceptional, most of the stories I've read here hardly have proper grammar. The communication between Sophie and Vul is for lack of better words interesting, for me at least, like I said I've never read anything like this! Oh keep going! It say's complete but surely you can't be done, I need more! Best story I've read this year by far!
6/4/2012 c2 Reaper7
That was awesomely great! I love it, seriously! My compliments to the writter for a fic well written. Hope you never run out of inspirational juices any time soon my friend!
That was awesomely great! I love it, seriously! My compliments to the writter for a fic well written. Hope you never run out of inspirational juices any time soon my friend!
5/8/2012 c2
2Dreams-of-Fairies
XDD so interesting
i love this
i truly do
I'm interested in how much Vul can be humanized
Will he ever be human?
(I read a book where the ship created a humanoid body so she could transport her mind into it to be with her captain)
or will it all be fruitless?
I will wait another year if i have to for you to update -_0 but hopefully i wont
lmao

XDD so interesting
i love this
i truly do
I'm interested in how much Vul can be humanized
Will he ever be human?
(I read a book where the ship created a humanoid body so she could transport her mind into it to be with her captain)
or will it all be fruitless?
I will wait another year if i have to for you to update -_0 but hopefully i wont
lmao
11/17/2011 c1 polar.amity
Oh, I feel SO pervy. But it was hot. And the writting was good.
Oh, I feel SO pervy. But it was hot. And the writting was good.