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5/16/2011 c1 10ZionsAflame
Like I said, I enjoy your writing quite a bit. With this piece I got the sense of a solemn tone. That even though there is plenty of emotion, it's contained. Possibly being the bleak wall. But I think you have a skill for placing the appropriates to hit with the strongest feeling. Very nice piece.
3/31/2011 c1 59radioactive stanica
This is very true. I love your rhyme. Thanks for sharing!
1/27/2011 c1 10Raebie
I was so sure that I had reviewed something of yours. I try to always return the favor when someone reviews my work.

I am very sorry for not doing so until now!

Anyway, I like this. It was very well written, and you conveyed the emotions of the scene well. Great work!
1/25/2011 c1 81Princess-anna57
Aw, I really like this one. I like the first line especially. Keep writing!

Anna
1/24/2011 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
First off, your penname is clever :D I like.

Second: Really good poem. Nice rhyme, it added to the piece, rather than detracting like rhyming usually tends to for me as a reader. But you did it so well! It's an interesting, sad message.

"Until all is lost and it is too late;

The world doesn't care because it is full of rage and hate"

- those were my favourite lines. Nice work :)

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