
8/30/2023 c1 Guest
Why did you delete this book. Where can I read it
Why did you delete this book. Where can I read it
6/11/2021 c20 Guest
Hey author why did u delete your stories ?
Hey author why did u delete your stories ?
5/25/2021 c9 Guest
Why story deleted? Where can I read?
Why story deleted? Where can I read?
2/18/2021 c1 Kimimike
Hello I loved your stories. But now they're deleted. Your stories are amazing. Plz is there any way to read your stories? Are you active some other writing platform? Plz give us any update. Plz it's a humble request.
Hello I loved your stories. But now they're deleted. Your stories are amazing. Plz is there any way to read your stories? Are you active some other writing platform? Plz give us any update. Plz it's a humble request.
8/7/2020 c20 Guest
It's August 7 2020 and people are still finding this story and wanting it to be finished. Please come back.
It's August 7 2020 and people are still finding this story and wanting it to be finished. Please come back.
6/12/2020 c5 Guest
It's hot.
There are some anatomical impossibilities, though
It's hot.
There are some anatomical impossibilities, though
5/6/2020 c20 Guest
Am still waiting for book 2. I have repeated this story for the last 3years ...please update
Am still waiting for book 2. I have repeated this story for the last 3years ...please update
5/16/2019 c20 Joe K
I discovered this outstanding story now, in 2019. Many years after you wrote it.
But for only the second time in my many years of reading erotic stories I feel compelled to write to an author.
To thank you for a "couldn't put it down" story. And to tell you as if you did not know, that whatever else you do, you should NEVER stop writing. I will happily proof-read for you. Pro Bono of course. I am quite good at proof reading having extensive experience with contracts, specifications and legal documents etc.
Am 80 yrs old but still "work" a bit and must go now. But I WILL, God willing, return and get a memberrship so that you may message me if you wish.
Will be very interested in what you have done since 2014.
Hope all went well with your elder one.
I discovered this outstanding story now, in 2019. Many years after you wrote it.
But for only the second time in my many years of reading erotic stories I feel compelled to write to an author.
To thank you for a "couldn't put it down" story. And to tell you as if you did not know, that whatever else you do, you should NEVER stop writing. I will happily proof-read for you. Pro Bono of course. I am quite good at proof reading having extensive experience with contracts, specifications and legal documents etc.
Am 80 yrs old but still "work" a bit and must go now. But I WILL, God willing, return and get a memberrship so that you may message me if you wish.
Will be very interested in what you have done since 2014.
Hope all went well with your elder one.
4/22/2019 c20 UNITATO
No I do NOT think Yves should feel bad at tried to commit suicide and failed but Yves saved chapter 8 was my favourite.U better update soon R I will die! ; )
No I do NOT think Yves should feel bad at tried to commit suicide and failed but Yves saved chapter 8 was my favourite.U better update soon R I will die! ; )
4/18/2019 c2
12Estheru Jean Tyler
I been reading this story for awhile. Well over a lot of chapters and I thought is a very enticing erotic Fictionpress story I ever encountered and is really, really addictive. I couldn't put it down. Please keep up your writing. I really enjoyed. ️
I got no other words of complimentary. It's in a mix that's why I enjoy it: adventure, craziness and angst. All in one!

I been reading this story for awhile. Well over a lot of chapters and I thought is a very enticing erotic Fictionpress story I ever encountered and is really, really addictive. I couldn't put it down. Please keep up your writing. I really enjoyed. ️
I got no other words of complimentary. It's in a mix that's why I enjoy it: adventure, craziness and angst. All in one!
1/5/2019 c20 Guest
This is a good story i hope they reunite and have a happy ending.
This is a good story i hope they reunite and have a happy ending.
12/13/2018 c20 Guest
PLEASEEE PLEASEEE PLEASEEEE write the next chap, i ve nevee wanted anything more in my life! its 2019 almost and i still check for updates T_T
PLEASEEE PLEASEEE PLEASEEEE write the next chap, i ve nevee wanted anything more in my life! its 2019 almost and i still check for updates T_T
11/8/2018 c9 Veronica
update soon
update soon
10/28/2018 c20 Rebecca
Why the suspense dia, your nearly killing me right now. I have never read a piece in on day but one is one in a million. Its fabulous. Gonna make sure to send it to all my colleagues. Beautiful.
Why the suspense dia, your nearly killing me right now. I have never read a piece in on day but one is one in a million. Its fabulous. Gonna make sure to send it to all my colleagues. Beautiful.
9/6/2018 c20 Trinity
Look, I know it’s been several years since you’ve updated this story. But it was so fucking good and I want you to know that people still care about it.️
Look, I know it’s been several years since you’ve updated this story. But it was so fucking good and I want you to know that people still care about it.️