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1/29/2012 c1 60AppleCrumble
This is so good. Its so short and so effective, you provide so much emotion and it is really moving. Its so good, nice job.
3/4/2011 c1 7TheBiteOfFrost
Such emotion is milked through-out this poem that could be so powerful. Have you though about making this longer? :)
2/23/2011 c1 Anonymous
it wasn't your fault that your mother left you. do you really think that she would want to leave you? no, she wouldn't. she is your mother and you were probably the only thing that she had to fight for. think about if you were in her position. wouldn't you want all the pain to go away? but she kept fighting for you. please do not say that she doesn't count because she does. she loves you very much and is looking down at you from heaven urging you to live life why you still can. please do not hate her. not everyone has a mother and you have to be glad that at least you have a father and other loved ones when other people literally have no one. someone always has it worse. stop acting and just be YOU.

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