Reviews: Broken | FictionPress

2/4/2011 c1 conleyswifey
oh my! You make me so sad! But yet again this was well written and i could feel her pain. Good job!

1/30/2011 c1

13samhus
wow. Really did well decribing what she went through. You should add more, i would love to read more of it. Oh if you like please check out my stories and comment. Thanks, keep writing!

1/30/2011 c1

287Archia
This is sad, and I think you did really well to describe how someone might feel if they lose someone. I like how you described everything.