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2/4/2011 c1 conleyswifeyoh my! You make me so sad! But yet again this was well written and i could feel her pain. Good job!
1/30/2011 c1
13samhuswow. Really did well decribing what she went through. You should add more, i would love to read more of it. Oh if you like please check out my stories and comment. Thanks, keep writing!
1/30/2011 c1
287ArchiaThis is sad, and I think you did really well to describe how someone might feel if they lose someone. I like how you described everything.