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2/4/2011 c1 conleyswifey
i was very humbled by your pm... i never thought i would be anyones inspiration. Thank you so much!

This story made me cry and it was very sad but i like the first ending better simply because it fits more. It shows that sometimes love hurts. I myself can't write anything like that because my poor romantic heart would break in half...lol

This really was well written for a short one shot. I was able to feel their pain and i think this would make a good longer story as well! All in all i think this was very good. You should be proud!

(there were a few spelling errors but those are easy enough to fix and we all have those sometimes!)
1/30/2011 c1 2RandomInCommon
DO I NEED TO REVIEW THIS ONE?XDXDXDXD

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