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11/18/2012 c1 60AppleCrumble
Wow, I don't think I could write something this good in 7 minutes. Great poem!
7/16/2011 c1 70Reel Wander
7 minutes

fierce! nice!
3/26/2011 c1 EvilEmoElmoKillsSanta
This is damn good for somthing written in 7 minutes. I like it.
2/8/2011 c1 4SilverChelle14
This is pretty good. I'm a fan of fast-paced rhyming like this. It's a short, easy read. It's very good for something you had to write about in seven minutes. Sometimes the best works are produced under pressure!
1/30/2011 c1 414The Story Crafter
I like it. The first four lines are my favourite, especially the bit about being damned to Hell, before they had a chance. It really portays a kind of sympathetic to the undead emotion, and I like that! On a constructive criticism note, a few of the lines feel a little too long when reading it in my head, but that could just be me! Either way I really like this, and I'm glad I took the time to read it!
1/30/2011 c1 cab fed hig
fierce and terrible subject i think, but well-written. there are the mingled elements of grace and terror.
1/30/2011 c1 9Irish toaster
This was 'dead' good. Sorry for the pun. I liked this poem :)

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