for Obsessed3/24/2013 c1 
27absentmindedprofessor
Ahh! Run, Serena, run!
Her stalker is disgustingly creepy - but it works. I would be absolutely terrified if I found myself drunk on the street at three o'clock in the morning with a man about to rape me! Awful, just awful.
But great writing. Great imagery. :D
27absentmindedprofessorAhh! Run, Serena, run!
Her stalker is disgustingly creepy - but it works. I would be absolutely terrified if I found myself drunk on the street at three o'clock in the morning with a man about to rape me! Awful, just awful.
But great writing. Great imagery. :D
4/17/2011 c1 14LostLullaby94
Very good short. You really gave a good visual of what the stalker was like. It made me cringe at parts because I pictured him as being so filthy, which is what I think you were going for. The two characters were developed very well despite the brevity. Nice work. :)
14LostLullaby94Very good short. You really gave a good visual of what the stalker was like. It made me cringe at parts because I pictured him as being so filthy, which is what I think you were going for. The two characters were developed very well despite the brevity. Nice work. :)
1/30/2011 c1 Miracle Writer123
Whoa! So dark and lovely. :) I loved it. I now see how wine can lead a person in danger when they are not driving. This teaches me to be careful now ;n; Thanks for writing this ^^
Whoa! So dark and lovely. :) I loved it. I now see how wine can lead a person in danger when they are not driving. This teaches me to be careful now ;n; Thanks for writing this ^^